FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys this is priya..and im starting my first ff...im not such a good writer but i thoguht i mite give it a shot here are the characters Sagar: he's cute, adorable, and all the girls r latoo over him...he hasnt found the one girl yet tho, although he has had many girlfriends, (younger bro is chinu)..is 22 and is in college Vidya: she's not like the vidya we saw in the show(except she is the tradtional type..salwar kameez etc.)she stands up for her rights..and she talks ALOT..and she will do anything to get her way..(younger sis is shalu)..is 22 and in college Shalu: Vidya's younger sis, and she's always there for Vidya, but shes more of the quiet type, not like vidya...age is 20 Chinu: Sagar's younger bro, and he is like Sagar..but he's concentrates on studies more...age 20 i will post the first update maybe tomorrow if i get time..but i wont be able to update soo much coz of skool
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmm characters sound interesting! write ur update soon... can't wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok i was bored so im posting the first update(extremely short)
RING!!!! The alarm clock rang..and u could see a girl sleeping with with her hair all over her face..
Shalu: Vidya di wake up we'll be late for college!!!
Vidya: Shalu let me sleep na...
Shalu hit her with a pillow which caused Vidya to groan and she got up..and marched over to the bathroom...a little while later Vidya came out wearing a pink salwar kameez with dangly earings and with all her stuff ready to go..Shalu was wearing a blue salwar and she was waitng for Vidya
Shalu: Di u take so long to get ready!! I mean why do u need 1 hr??
Vidya: Oh come on Shalu...i need my sleep and im always half alseep getting ready😆
Shalu: Ok come on we'll miss the bus!!
Meanwile at Sagar's
Sagar: Come on Chinu!! I'm goin to college on my bike!! U comin?
Chinu: No Dadda I'm taking the bus.
Sagar: The bus?? R u kidding me?
Chinu: No..i prefer the bus...
Sagar: Whatever I'll see u at college
Precap: SV meet
ugh..that turned out really boring...srry bout that...
Edited by sharad+divz4evr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol yes very short..i think it multiplied..but i LOVED..it update again, i want SV to meet..PLEASE
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

lol yes very short..i think it multiplied..but i LOVED..it update again, i want SV to meet..PLEASE

yea i messed up but i fixed it..an u know what 4 the heck of it i will update..im working on it
and i'll make it longer
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I LOVE IT!

after wrinting an FF, i feel like becoming like a director and making a show, dont you?
i just felt like saying that...anyway
CONTINUE SOON PLEASEEEE
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Recap: Intro

Shalu and Vidya are getting off the bus heading for the canteen. Sagar and Chinu are already at the canteen.
Shalu: Di u go find a table I'm gonna go get us something
Vidya: Ok.
So Vidya is looking around for a table and since its a little crowded, there's only one table left and it just happens to be next to Sagar's table. So Vidya is going there and she passes Sagar's table but her duppata gets stuck to Sagar's chain/bracelet on his hand. So as she's walking she realizes its stuck and at the same time Sagar does too. So he gets up as he's trying to get it off, and Vidya turns around. (her hair kinda flew with her) Sagar is just starting at her; he completly forgot about the dupatta..Chinu and the rest of his friends are just staring at both of them.Vidya walks closer and she takes his hand about to remove the dupatta.
Vidya: I'm so sorry..I didn' notice.
Sagar snaps out of it and he says: No it's ok.here I'll get it.
So Sagar removed the dupattaa and she smiled and went over to her table. When Sagar sat back down one of his friends(Rohan) says
Rohan: Dang that girl is hot...
Sagar frowns because he didnt like the way Rohan said that..he doesn't know why..
Vidya is at the table and she heard that and she gets nervous..she mumbles 'yeh shalu kidhar rehgai??'...
Rohan moves over to Vidya's table..Vidya looks at him and she's bout to get up n leave..but Rohan says "hey beautiful..why r u sitting alone?? i can keep u company." Vidya is disgusted and she says "Just shut up ok?? And leave me alone."
Rohan: Come on now..dont be like that..he looks over to his friends and laughs..Sagar is mad...
Sagar:Dude leave her alone. In his head he's like😡😡 but he doesnt know why..
Vidya glares at him
Vidya: Look I don't need ur help ok?? And besides all u guys r the same..her face is all red and she's really mad
Now Sagar gets up and walks over to her; (vidya was already standing up)
Sagar: I was trying to help u and u r insulting me?
Vidya: Help me?? U were just trying to act all nice and then u were prolly gonna..(sagar cuts her off and poins his finger at her)
Sagar:Oye tume kya lagta hai? Ke subh ladke aise hote hain?
Vidya: Han! she's turning around to leave but Sagar grabs her wrist. She truns around
Vidya: Mujhe chodo!!!
Sagar lets go of her hand and she storms off..
He turns around and faces his friends.
Sagar: I will definetly get her back.
Precap: IDK😕
ok that wasnt so good..but i hope u liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmishra

I LOVE IT!

after wrinting an FF, i feel like becoming like a director and making a show, dont you?
i just felt like saying that...anyway
CONTINUE SOON PLEASEEEE

thanks kmishra
hehe i would love to direct dulhann..i would make sure there are alot of AD scenes
i just updated again
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOVED it..ok PLEASE update ONE more time.hehe i really enjoy reading it...please..you know what i do...when i write mine...i just get ideas WHILE im writing...like id have something in mind and write soemthing totally different..which is better lol.......please update again...pleasepleaseplease
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

LOVED it..ok PLEASE update ONE more time.hehe i really enjoy reading it...please..you know what i do...when i write mine...i just get ideas WHILE im writing...like id have something in mind and write soemthing totally different..which is better lol.......please update again...pleasepleaseplease

yeahh i lk to do the same thing...but i wanna try to make an interesting precap to create more suspense. idk if it works tho
anyway i love this ff a lot
so plz update soon....awesome update!

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