- Toh Phir Aao- short fic finished pg 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
awwww poor amar..
.serves him rite for not believe divz thou
Lovely update!!! bharat and amar met...so cute
cont. soon=D
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Sonali di such a sweet update and Viren drunk 😆 singing...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
awesome update!
continue soon!
woo goo Amar!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Wow Sonali di. They update was marvelous...outstanding...
Sonali di you are doing a wonderful and a great job so keep it up.
I know you'll go very far and I wish you all the best and luck in your life.
You are a good writer...Please continue soon as possible when you get some time. I will wait for your next update...
Love you and take care and of couse keep smiling...😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Really nice...I loved it
Great episode as always
Keep it up with your wonderful work
It was really a very awesome episode
Please continue soon when you have some time..I love your FF
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
nice update hope he finds his love soon. continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the lovely comments! Happy Independence Day! I will try to update soon!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Happy Raksha Bandan! Here is the next part!

Part Seven

Gayatari was on her morning walk when she spotted Viren wandering around and throwing up in the bushes.

She was about to scold him for daring to come near their property but then he turned to the side and she noticed his black eye. She smiled satisfied.

' Kisne mara beta?,' she asked slyly.

He held his head and muttered,' I am not sure. I must have been dreaming. Amar was at the bridge , here in London.'

Gaytari walked as fast as she could for her age. She felt like a young woman until she came to the garden and the pain in her knees acted up again.

' Divya beta! I have good news!,' she exclaimed.

Divya emerged from the garden as she put down the tool she was working with. Since coming back to London she had gone back to her modern attire and wore salwar kameezes when she went to the nearby mandir.

' Dai Mom kaise kabar? Look you could have made your arthritis worse,' she stated.

Gayatari shook her head as she caught her breath.

' Amar is in London!,' she exclaimed.

Divya stood there stunned.

' Where did you see him?,' she stammered.

Gayatari turned solemn.

' I didn't see him exactly but I saw Viren suffering from more than just a hangover. He had a black eye. Now Viren is a big guy. Who could have enough rage to thrash him?,' she inquired.

Divya mouthed Amar.

She began to run out onto to the path that Gayatari had just come from. Her Dai Mom followed with the gardening tool just in case Viren was still around.

Divya was wearing beige top and old blue jeans, soil had stained her jeans, she stopped short to dust off her clothes. Suddenly as she came to stand up straight again someone tapped her shoulder.


Edited by adventure_gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
OMG...that was great. I wonder who that is. i bet that is amar right? anyways plz continue soon!
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Edited by 1000february - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
who tapped her shoulder? nice update continue soon.

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