- Toh Phir Aao- short fic finished pg 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay everyone I am going to start another fanfiction. However this will not be as long as my previous ones. I have school and work starting soon. Strange how inspiration strikes when we have other things that are supposed be very important coming up. Anyway the creatives are leaving us a big gap without anything fabulous between Amar and Divya. So I am going to write this based on the video I made last week some of you may have seen it. Anyway here is the link if anyone needs reference

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaAkxBaKawE

Part One is for Nishi as she encouraged me to go for it!

Divya packed her suitcase. She was shattered. Amar had become totally Badi Mom's puppet. She couldn't live with his moody persona. He didn't believe her love was stronger than Viren's fake proofs. She could stay and battle it out revealing that Rajeev was alive and Sindoora had once blamed her for his death as well. However she decided Amar needed to pin for her as she had always pined for him. She wept for the loss of the man she actually fell in love with. He had changed. He wasn't her Amar anymore.

She took the suitcase and went downstairs. Viren had left the day before on some business when he found out that she was gone, hopefully he would go back to wherever he belonged.

Chintu approached her as she edged closer to the door.

" Bhabi mat jaye aye. Maybe we can help Dadda see the truth. I believe you," he pleaded with her teary eyed.

Tears came out from her eyes. She wiped them as Amar came down the stairs. He barely noticed her standing there, ready to leave this house and him behind.

She indicated towards Amar's retreating figure.

" Dekho Chintu, tumare Dadda ko meri koi fikar nahin hai. He needs time to realize his mistakes. Who knows if he can find me when that time comes," she muttered before leaving.

Chintu ran after her. he stopped short to see Rajeev come out of the waiting taxi.

" Rajeev Uncle zinda hain?," Chintu glanced at the scene puzzled.


" Chalo beta," Rajeev said softly to Divya.

He took the suitcase from her and ushered her into the taxi.

Chintu ran back inside towards Amar.

" Bhabi was right. She was always right. I hope you realize everything before you really lose her. Goodness knows where she is going all by herself," he exclaimed before rushing off to his room.

He decided he would tell Amar about Rajeev when he was actually ready to apologize to Divya.

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Divya and Rajeev arrive at the airport.

She turned to Rajeev.

" You know it's kinda strange that my father-in-law is siding with me instead of his son," she quipped.

This scenario was not typical at all. However she was grateful for the support.

" Divya I know you are right. It's unfortunate Amar is blinded by Sindoora's tricks but someday he'll realize your true worth," he said.

Divya nodded. For now she had to realize her independence and live her life differently while she awaited for that someday that Amar reformed and she could feel it was right to be with him again.






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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sonali.
Thanks for writing...🤗
I so wish the show would follow your storyline...Divya really needs to leave and teach him a lesson...
Nice start...really enjoyed reading it...please continue soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh that was great...plz continue!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks girls, I 'll try to update some more tomorrow😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was GREAT continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a fab. update!! plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks I will try to update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sonali Di....
thnx for starting a new fic...i jus luv ur stories 😳
yaya i can annoy u to update 😆
plz
plz
plz
plz
update quickly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thankss!!! Thats was great!!! Awesome!!! Plz continue soon... Thankss!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya, that was awesome! Please continue soon!! You should b eupdatig todday...right? Please make it a loooooooooong one!!!

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