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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: appynehra

OMG!!! an awesom blossom story!!!! w8n for the next update!!!!



thank you very much... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payali09

Thanks for the new FF, silver! Big fan of your other one and based on what I've read so far in this one, looks like another hit 👏


I didn't think anyone would try to tackle AnSh in a historical jodhaa-akbar setting but you've proven me wrong. Great job so far and definitely concur with others regarding keeping the language simple.

Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses 😃



thanks Payal... for reading my fanfic... 😊


its not going to be like jodha-akbar... but since the story is going to in a historical setting it may seem like that...

here shiv is already on love with someone else and he is being forced into an arranged marriage...

how is he going to tackle his fate...

is he going to get his love or not...???



Edited by silver_penin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2

The Fate

The royal garden of Jaisalmer palace seemed like a heaven on earth.

It was beautiful spring day. The birds were singing in their joy. The air was filled with fragrance of bloomed flowers and ripened fruits. The bees and butterflies were busy fluttering away busily from one flower to the other. The sun was high up in the sky with all its glory. There was a slight breeze. The leaves and flowers of the plants seemed like dancing in happiness.

Sitting on the edge of the pond that was in the middle of the garden; the Princess was lost in her own world. Draped in all the jewels and finery. The beauty of her surroundings brought no happiness to her face.

She sighed.

Looking around, she spotted two rabbits playing, near a rose bush; oblivious to the world. Hopping over the other like lovers.

A faint smile appears on her face; but fads immediately as she remembers those once joy-filled days. Those days that can never come back.

Never. Ever.

Anandi felts like her heart would burst out of sadness her fate had in stored for her. She felt like she was drowning in a river of nothing but sorrow and despair. She never felt so bad till now in her twenty years of life. Ever since'.

The sudden sound of someone approaching brought her back revive. She heard the jingle of bangles and anklets, recognizing that the approached might be her sister or may be even her Mother. She quickly tried to compose her features.

She turned to look at her intruder, seeing Ashima; she relaxed. The hopelessness in her features was back.

She sighed. But in relief this time.

"Jiji'" Ashima says in greeting; sitting next to her very upset sister.

"Ashi'." Anandi tries to recover; wiping her face.

"Mujhe patha hain Jiji. Appke man main kya chal rahi hain-" Ashima says sadly but knowingly.

"Ashi'" Anandi looks away trying to not meet her eyes. Ashima and Anandi were very close even for sisters. They were alike in every aspect. They can detect each other emotions and feelings very well. Alike.

"Par Jiji, app apne app sambhalni chahiye. Apke dukh main samajh sakhthi hoon jiji. par hum kuch nahi kar sakthe hain. ek rajkumari ki tarah janam lena ka fars hain. Hum issme apne bhavishya dekhna padega." Ashi says consolingly.

Anandi just looks down at her lap sadly. A lone tear rolls down her cheeks.

Ashi taking in a sharp breath, looking at her miserable sister. "Jiji'." Moves forward to hug. Anandi's tears now readily flow down her checks.

Afraid at the blackness the future now shows. Anandi doesn't no what do or feel. All she can feel is nothing but despair.

After sometime Anandi gets a grip of herself and breaks apart from the embrace.

"Sambhallo Anandi' mujhe patha hain tum kitne dardh main hoo' bahadoori dikana hain. hum yehi jivan svikar karna chahiye" Ashima says wiping Anandi's tears.

"patha hain Ashi, par main kya karun?? Shadi ke bare main sochkar hi mujhe inta bura lag raha hain." Anandi says in a small voice. But before Ashima can say anything further to console her sister; she see their mother approaching towards them, from behind Anandi.

"Maa aa rahi hain!" Ashima says quickly, adjusting her lehanga. Anandi immediately wipes her tears and adjusts her hair and pallu.

"Anandi..." Baghavathi says entering the garden. She had been searching for her daughters. It was time for them to go the temple.

"Are choriyon, abh tak yahi par hain?? hum sabh devi maa ke mandir jane hain nah. Maa ko chadava dena hain. Aur tum dono yehi par hain??" Baghavathi says trying to shoo her daughters away to get ready.

The family had to give chadava for the goddess; in order to start with the wedding preparations tomorrow. It was a kind of a starting ceremony. The whole kingdom would be present to attend it. The groom's family was going to come in three days. The marriage would take place in a week's time.

Thinking about Anandi felt even lower than had felt a minute ago.

" Ji Maa, Abhi tyyar hote hain." both of them reply and move to their chambers to get ready.

Had hain Anandi. Apne app ko sambhalo. Yehi hain tumhari bhavishya. Svikar karo' Anandi thinks sadly.


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this chap 2...

hope u like it...

pls comment

-silver


Edited by silver_penin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Thank for new Amazing Ansh FF
Hey Sliver YOU ARE amazing story writer
I 'm looking forward 's your next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Ahaan!!! seems quite interesting!! thanx foe da update .. i knoo shiv nd anandi gonna marry each oder ..

bt was anandi d princess wid shiv in prologur ... suspense! Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story Silver!!!!...ur setting is too good...prince and princess...and the setting reminds me of Jodha Akbar...only that here both love some one ...and i think the prologue had anandi and Shiv...only they did not know each other's true identity then ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Gripping story !!!
Getting interesting by each update.

Looking forward to next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Yay new update 😃 Thank you Silver!

I guessed right that Anandi is the princess who is required to marry Shiv. The journey of true love never runs smoothly so I'm expecting big drama before they realize who their intended is 😉

Plus what happened four years ago...mhhh? Is it AnSh in the prologue or some other in-love young couple? Can't wait to read more! Happy writing 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Thanx for the update

next time make it longer

I am gonna guess OK I become sad when some people do this in my FF and post it

SO sending a pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was a nice update, silver😊
Anandi and Ashima 's convo was good.
Waiting for the next 😊

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