Ansh SS 'Ek Junoon EK Ibadaat' (chapt 10 -page 24)

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Plot

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What is important for you Love or Revenge?Can you love someone who betrays you or maybe not. Love makes you strong or weak.

Love Story of two individual who fought against their destiny faith & world around them.

Story of Betrayal Sorrow Passion Mystery Trust Fun & Dangerous most imp LOVE

This is love story of standing against odd... are you in this passion then join us.

Presenting new SS

Ek Junoon Ek Ibadaat

Combined..ss by two writers

By someone who is love mystery suspense drama thriller that's Don the Evil (pratz) & someone who love mushy romance passionate love that's Blushing.(aditi)

Welcome to world of Romance Thriller Drama Passion Mystery & Love

Prologue - page 1 by don

First chapter... page 3 by don

second chapter- page 5 by aditi

third chapter - page 7 by don

Fourth chapter - page 9 by aditi

fifth chapter..- page 12 by don

six chapter - page 16 by aditi

seventh chapter - page 18 by don

eight chapter - page 20 by aditi

nine chapter - page 22by don

ten chapter - page 24 by aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue..


A painful scream left form her mouth when she realizes herself... What situation she caught herself. She saw around' she herd some sound of some people... They were biding for her..

Some of them saying' lacks or something she didn't understand' she try to clear her vision and saw what is happening in froth of her.. They are selling her publicly.. and all are bidding a price.. a good price of her'

What an irony a painful chuckle escape for her mouth'

She Is standing in middle of the hotel.. her hands tie down form both side.. abd bunch of fool people are.. Excited about her bidding.. and wanted to know who are going to purchase her..

A deal is nothing new form them' but first time this kind of deal is happening in front of eyes of the world..usually they did this kind of deal behind of close door. . but she is exception' because' no one is there to save her.. except her fate'

She recalled how firs place she land here'

The biggest shock she received. .when she saw some person approach to kill her dad.. and then everything is like story for her..

She closed her eyes and recalled painful events happen in past hours, which change her life completely..

Flashback

A shadow fail over her making alert her.. she run in to where she is able to run. She holds not destination.. no hope.. she know one thing in mind she need to escaped. .this is last thing her dad told to her' and she did.. run annadi run

" you are coward.." this one thing crossing over again and again in her mind..since she find out news of her dad was dead.. he is no more..

Why did they want to kill you dad.. her dad give her no answers' no answers.. nothing come out form his mouth instead he asked her run' and still she is running away from dad away from world may be away form herself too'

"dundho usko jaldi' jaldi dundho'aaj agar use' nahi behca to ratansigh hamari band baja dega'"

One gone said is obvious tone

"lekin wo uski behan hai na' apni hi behna ko bechega"

Are samja kar' ladki uski sagi nahi hai..wo to bacchi ke baap ne isko raste se uthakar asra diya. .aur aab baap kaya gaya.. yeah sab bhul gaya.. aur bechne jar aha hai use'

Ye galt hai na par'

"hame paise ginne se matlab hai.. koi kyu kab kisleye karta hai is se nahi.. to apna kaam karma hamara kaam hai.."" yaha galt kya sahi kya ye socha nahi jata.. but apna kaam kiya jata hai smja.. " " chal dhudnte hai yahi kahi hogi wo.."

The other persona node..

Anandi is hide herself.. She able to hear all the voice and what the said about rattan.. too..

Shivring herself try to away from them.. She hides herself..

She is hiding behind truck.. But her stupid luck to fail her to give support anymore.. that track start suddenly moving.. Driver in full speed taken away his vehicle.. Reveling to her.. Those hungry eyes.. Who wanted her to sold off..

Now only miracle will save her.. she pray herself'

In her minds she remember her dad words agai" dhoka hua hai anandi.. dhoka.. pata nahi par mera is se baar aane mushkil hai wo nahi chodege muje'maar denge'"

Who wanted to kill you dad.. anandi asked with frighten tone..

Dhoka.. she wanted to find this answer and only for that she needed to alive'

And now.. she is here'a mere sale product''.

She close her eyes in frustration.. but her eyes refuse.. to budge for one tear.. she will not going to cry' she is more tough then this.. she wonder.. she able to escape for here' and she is waiting for that miracle..


Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye yooo...🥳

Humara naya FF Don Congo...🤗

Fantastic start 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushing

Oye yooo...🥳

Humara naya FF Don Congo...🤗

Fantastic start 👍🏼

Yeah i am so excited about ti.. pehle baar sath mai likh rahe hai... first chapter mai lihungi second chapter tera.. 🤗 congo you too. hamara ss start ho gaya.. ...
Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well second chapter ok done. 👍🏼

kya kahu I am already in love with u r plot 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...OMG...OMG... wts the Plot u created yar... 😲😲... nd the mystery sound so interesting nd breath taking... are... yar... ... this is bang on⭐️... Superb ..amazing maindblowing start...⭐️⭐️⭐️...
nd Prolouge... wow superb.. I love u both say about ur nature...🤗🤗🤗..
nd for me.. Doni nd Aditi... 🤗🤗🤗... 👏👏👏
I m sure it will bcm a rocking SS... ⭐️... nd I m waiting for update..... tum itani damakedar suruat ki hai.. ke ab intezar bahot bhari padega... to jyada tadpana mat... Pls update fast...
jiski bhi bari ho...😉...

Edited by Manshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh my god..nice prologue..ye suspense khatam karo aur jaldi update karo.😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sophie_ansh

ohhh my god..nice prologue..ye suspense khatam karo aur jaldi update karo.😉


@ sophie abhi toh suru hua hain

suspense itani jaldi khatam nahi hoga

U need to be patience

I am sure u patience will paid off well by Don & Me for sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
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muje suspence khola bilkul psand nahi hai... mai wo normally 10 chapter ke baad hi kholti hu.. dekhte hai yaha par kab kholungi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Don_theEvil

muje suspence khola bilkul psand nahi hai... mai wo normally 10 chapter ke baad hi kholti hu.. dekhte hai yaha par kab kholungi..


true...bina namak ki love story adhuri hain😉

maine bhi Diabetic love story likh ke bore hoo hee rahe thi 😆

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