Ansh SS 'Ek Junoon EK Ibadaat' (chapt 10 -page 24) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: blushing


true...bina namak ki love story adhuri hainšŸ˜‰

maine bhi Diabetic love story likh ke bore hoo hee rahe thi šŸ˜†

yeah namak hai to sab hai... varna maja nahi aata... romance mai suspense ho to aur maja aata hai.. šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Donji...

It was so scary ...!!!...😲

Awww...Anandi ...I'am feeling so sad for her...

Pls pls zaldi Hero ko bula do...šŸ˜•

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Great Dhamakedaar Start...

Will be waiting for some blushes in the next part...šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³šŸ˜†


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kya dhamakedaar shuruat ki hai. hats of to you guys šŸ‘
Ab suspense jaldi kholo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow don n aditi ...dis is sso damn awsum...kya suspense h šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
kya dhamakedaar start hai...bahut hi intresitng lag raha hai...jaldi jaldi update karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aditi and Prats two wonderful writers and the plot which u both came up with are fantastic, infact beyond fabulous...
I stay in Hyderabad and the famous dishes here is the spicy Hyderabadi Biryani and the famous Qurbaani kaa meetha...as the name says, biryani is spicy and the other one sweet and so are the writers of this EJEI...
Wat a start...Aditi waiting for ur turn now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Donji, aditi yeh kya kar diya Anandi ke saath...
Update pls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Superb start guys...Don ka tadka and aditi ka daal...it will be awesome!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Don and Aditi ,
What an start .😊
Poor Anandi,she is suffering ,
Save her soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First rescue and first meeting.

anandi thought her fate is playing against her... as nothing is happening in her favor... all the bidders bidding price for her... the one of buddha in crowed.. Shouted... 4 lacs ..for her price... she look disgusted with happening around...

she saw they pull another girl along with her.. she was screaming in pain… as if someone hit her… before they take her here….anandi face turn in to full disgust to seeing her condition like this…

in crowd someone shouted her price as well.. the other girl is worried and crying too

and before anandi realize…. Other girl sold the same buddha who was cheering her price before.. she was sold for just… 50,000/-…

anandi eyes turn in to horror. she wonder. if they also give her someone like.. she don't know how to escape… she wanted to cry… but… is like her tears become dry suddenly… her voice chocked in her throat and she still stand there with all courage and clam mind.. looking for situation to escape…. …

she saw the girl is begging to them to leave her

"please chodo muje.. jane do yaha se ..muje nahi jana.." the girl shouted .. and crying at the same time

Anandi feel bad for her.. .they drag her out in front of her…. Before she protest any more…

Anandi wonder. Even before she never thought that many girls have to face this kind of fate.. her dad was political leader.. she is leader to.. and facing situation with courage.. but now her heart to fill in creepy feelings now.. Seeing this lizards around her… …

She saw some man giving her look that she will die even before they got her… but then she think she will never die without completing her promise. She wanted to return her dad honor at any cost .. she need to live.. this problem in nothing in front of her.. and more then she have to do more work..

The hotel is becoming crowded. .since.. its time for there black business….she saw many more people is joining as well to…her price to reaching every new heights.. since.. she is main fascination for them…

She started prayer to save herself. .and its look like her prayers answer by someone… as someone is about to come here for business..

he look at door of hotel... door guards are alert seeing his presence... its his personality his aura or something arrogance walk with him with lot of style of attitude... they allowed him to enter in hotel.. with much respect...he walk in without even glancing at them.. the arrogance is much appear in with face.. He is so much handsome.. As every woman in present in hotel looking back at him again and again...he come across to all the table.. Even bidder to stop for moment when he comes in... Then resume there job again...

Some people look at him amusement...but they know him so well.. The arrogant is here.. They never saw him in any way interested in any girl... they know about him...if he is there.. Then he is for deal only... the kind of attitude.. and arrogance...is here for deal...

his eyes search for his target. Why is here.. he stop at table no.. 45... and saw.. Hotel owner is approaching him... deal is what matter for him.. ... His eye caught attention when he saw deal is happening openly. They were selling girl openly... but what caught his attention its girl.. She is beautiful not doubt.. But the fierceness in her attitude... there lot of expression in her face other then fear.. He like it... he understand her misery too.. but he is here not to interfere in other business... but when that girls eyes capture his... he feel something in her heart... but he decide to ignore it..

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anandi watch some stranger walk in hotel.. everyone attention shifted form her for moment.. she wonder what is special in him... he is handsome.. the one thing come in her mind... she may be saw him in awe if she was normal girl like before.. but now she is not interested... but one she like her in him his arrogance. and attitude.. Which is screaming every fiber existence from his body...

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shivraj shekhar

he saw the man in froth of her.. all guitly... he is owner of this hotel... who is sweating badly...he is scare of him...

he love the effect showing on his opponent… …but he knows that beyond this emotions he is hiding big.. don't underestimate my power and understand to read face.. he said to himself.. Almost himself…

"so... documents.. kaha hai.." he said in cold voice..

" mere pass documents nahi hai.. sir..' hotel owner rahgu rathod reply...

he smirk when he heard about it... no wonder.. same case.. i dont have documents anthem...

"shiv raj shekhar ko dhokha pasand nahi hai... aur agar koi kare.. to wo bardasht nahi kar sakta... ...documents kaha hai.. . hotel owner he fumble for words which he hate. it..

his attention shifted once again towards girl... her eyes reminding him someone that he know.. but who... he don't remember.. he shift his attention again to hotel owner..

so what your last wish

shiv asked to man...

but he saw man of army behind him...

"ragu smile at.. shiv.. bhai ne tumhe marne ke liye aadmi bheje hai.. now i am no more scare off you.. infect abhi hame tumharri jarurat nahii hai" wo kya hai na business mai kab kya hojaye kuch pata nahi chlata tu ab tak yaha ke god they par aur ab nahi… so what is your last wish"

He said showing his yellow teeth with stupid smile on face..

Shiv thought for sometime.. glare at him.. his eyes speaking volume more then this.. he replied…

" its time for killing business" " tumari sar wish upar jakar puri kar dena.."

matlab

matlab..shiv rose form his sit.. pull his gun out.. Shoot one of his man... and thenn.. he motion his hand air and said boom..

bomb blast at place...

the bomb blast in not big. .but enough to kill his most men..

shiv planted mini bomb at the place.. he know that there where planning something like this.. shivraj shekhar.. ko dhoka pasand nahi.. huva to.. wo kuch bhi kar sata hai...

all the men throw in air fell dead in place the blast did damage to all.. and his business and deal as well.. as hotel people get scare ... all started shouting & running here an there. in few minutes there where no people in hotel.. Except anandi who is watching this with big eyes... and shocked face... and raghu is standing there with wide and choked eyes. When he saw... what is happening in front of him...

Simple this is...shiv reply to him

Some man in still left when they come running in shiv direction...

Before they can do anything.. shiv kick table.. Throw it on them...

in short time... he give one of them side kick.. and shoot trigger.. at them direct he fire many bullets at them with his machine gun.. that he was hiding his leg... many off his man fail dead. and shiv kill most of his men.. ..

anandi in meanwhile manage to free herself.. but instead going to outside saving her life.. she did join in fighting… she hit one or two of them…..those who someone drag her here…

shiv is here handling other man as well… when he saw anandi is fighting with his as well.. his eyes turn pleasantly surprise..

only hotel owner left... and look stunned what situation created in front of him. and scare.. he caught hold of anandi.. and set her as his target…..

shivraaj shekar.. maar daunga mai sise..

I hate to asked people wish.. bahot purna baat hogayi hai ye… so its time to say bye bye to world.. shiv said to him without even looking at anandi.. as if she is not in this world..

Pagal hogaya hai kya.. ye ladki gun point par hai. Aur tuje lagta hai tu muje maar dalega… he roars in anger and more in frustration

Wo meri kuch lagti nahi hai… to I don't think I care about her… I have to kill you.. tu to marega hi

Shiv look at anandi.. give her understanding now.. she to understand as well.. raghu is confused what shiv said about it.. Before he understand anything… anandi kick him in his toes and escape… and shiv…fire bullet form his gun… and says dialogue bahot marta hai… aur confuse bhi utna hi hota hai…

And the game finishes and fights too…

he stop and look at her. little hint of irritation.

tum bhaag bhi to sakti thi…. Yaha par ruk kar fight karne ki kya jarurat thi… shiv asked with curiosity..

simply because you save my life.. agar wo aaj muje bhech dete to fir.. shayad mere kaam adhura reh jata….anaand left last part unsaid..

her eyes feel in tears.. she look at him with relief and gratitude…

he is taken a back to see tears in her eyes… he was ruthless.. even still is.. he is not allowed to sympathy towards emotions… he look away.. she wipe it.. to… as she hate it if someone see like her this at breaking point..

kaam kounasa kaam , seems you are interested person… & I can seen that you are really brave too..,, don't wory… this is your breaking point.. is par rona buri baat nahi hai… he said… awkwardly

anandi smile at him.. he stop sometime there wondering what to say.. anandi first one to asked him question.. ..

"koun ho tum. Who are you>.. karte kya hoga... khoooni ho kya.." " jis tarah se bomb plant kiya gun chalaya lagta to nahi ki normal insan ho sakte ho"

Shiv look at her.. he hated personal question.. he back to his ruthless self leaving his sympathy..

" you are not expectation either.. koi normal insan hota to bhaag gaya tha.. fight karte nahi batitha right… aur fir tum meri wife nahi ho jo mera bio-data mai interested ho.. filhaal mera naam shivraj shekar hai inta hi kafi hai tumhare liye..tum batao... tumhhari pehcha kene ke liye koi brand name bhi to hoga tumhara... wo kya hai" shiv replied as non interested look

its trigger anandi.. what a rude... naam bhi to pucha aise..

"anandi" naam hai mera..

but itna hi shiv chided her again..

"ha mera brand name inta hai exclusive for strangers. Only…."

She give him back to…

Shiv and anandi both look at each other smile… anandi feel after so many days.. she actually smile on something..

"tum is hotel mai kaise pachu gayi"

" my step brother sold me.." anandi choked at word..

Shiv feel bad.. but ignore it…

jane ke liye destination koi he asked like normal

he know there must be not place her for go… she will be alone now… he wanted to help her. Plus there may

"nahi hai.. but i will managed.

i dont think so... agar managed karrne lag javogi.. to thode time mai fir aise kise situation mai dekhogi.. i will help you .. don't worry don't stay with me... you are not my type anyways... ist my aunt she will help you.. aur waise bhi tumara step bhai tumhe dundte aaya to firse.. to us se bachi rahogi.. i am sure he will find soon.. that you are free now.. he complete... as his part with with no hesitation...

anandi is speechless for his part.. she did nod…. in yes only...

she follow him to wondering about ruthless she face today.. is he soft form inside...

she thought may is all happening if for right... she saw him how he face everyone in hotel... how he fight alone... so may be he is her destiny... her support who will guide her to find killer of her dad. and give back his honor

she look at the person who just save and even ready to give shelter without knowing her… she wonder.. she saw his ruthless self.. when he kill someone by his hands.. but the person in him. Left her in wonder.. his is enigma to her. the way he asked her trying to help her. The way is to casual.. ruthless as him.. like everyday he is seeing girl like her.. if anyone her place think about him that he is heartless but she know he is not.. she saw that in his eyes… his eyes was appreciating her.. for her courage. Even he doesn't said it forum mouth. his eyes tell her everything… she thought to stop reading people like this.. as her dad was used to say. She already read to much though action and expression… but now.. its seems like good to reading people like this. At list to those who never talk what they hide in there hearts..

shiv have no emotions except feeling bad for her.. he is truly ruthless.. little did unaware of this.. there something is changing in his life too...

destiny kuch keh rahi thi apne hi labjo mai dono se... kar rahi thi bayan... kuch aise...

..Har raah har jarah kar raha hai shidat

Ine milane ki… ek dusre se…

Kya miegi rahat in dono ke dil ko..

Hone ja rahi shuru.. ek junoon ek ebadaat..

to be continue……


Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago

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