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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Oh my god Donji🤗...this is way too awesome!!

Shivji ko collector se Don bana di...too gud...

The best dialogue was when Shiv was asking about Anandi's name..."Brand name" that was freaking hilarious...😆

Aditi...I cant wait for your update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shivu in New Avtar 🤪

Well well, u r most welcome...liking it to the bottom of my heart

Update soon dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG don here also😈- good plot
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Nice and different --Taking time to sink in the theme and the story 😊

Shivji as the ruthless dashing don and Anandi - courageous sherni!!! Looking forward to the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter two ...


At late night in streets of Mumbai Shivraj driving his SUV, Anandi who sits beside him is looking outside. At night Mumbai looks differently. Mumbai city never sleeps still buzzing with noisy people & Cars. They are driving from Posh High Profile Hotel to streets of Mumbai. Anandi is now feeling much better. She drinks water which was kept in SUV. She offers water to Shivraj. He nodded his head no.

Well'A mutters. I used to live in Andheri. She tries to have some conversation with him.

Shivraj is driving doesn't pay attention.

Anandi looked at him & makes faces. BTW where are we going?

Shivraj is still driving.

Well I asked you something. Kya jawaab milega mujhe she said in bit irritation.

Shivraj gave her look. I told you my Aunt's place. You don't need to know anything right now. Chup chap baithi raho.

Par kahan? Koi naam toh hoga na area ka Anandi said.

Naam pata hone se kya hoga he asked.

Anandi looked at him with confusion & anger too. Fine Main chup rahti hunn.

Chalo accha hain'.mere kaan ko bhi aacha lagega.

Kya kaha? Anandi asked in furious voice.

Bhook lage hain he asked.

Nahi'..She said bluntly. But she is feeling bit hungry.

Good kyunki mujhe bhi nahi lage hain he states.

Anandi gave him stern look.

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Shivraj is driving SUV fast now. Anandi engaged herself looking outside. They are moving fast towards some unknown place. Suddenly she is realized something.

Yeh hum Madh Island ki taraf jaa rahe hain na Anandi asked.

No reply from him.

Anandi feeling bit nervous. Whether she is doing right thing for trusting this unknown person she thinks in her mind.

Main yahan aaye thi mere doston ke sath she just try act normal.

Shivraj doesn't pay attention towards her at all.

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They stopped in front of huge Bungalow. Anandi is looking at this new place. Its look like huge. Big bungalow surrounded with green trees & it has big front gate. Shiv signaled Security guard he opened gate & they entered into bungalow porch.

Come with me Shivraj said calmly while getting down from SUV.

Anandi opened door & starts walking behind Shivraj. She is looking everywhere with curious mind. Bungalow has huge lawn with fountain in middle. She stopped behind Shivraj. He rang bell. Someone comes & opens door.

Arre bhaiya jee aap itani raat ko person asked Shivraj.

Shivraj signaled Anandi to go inside. Anandi reluctantly went inside followed by Shivraj & other person.

He seems to be servant of this bungalow Anandi thinks in her mind.

Anandi enters in huge drawing room. The bungalow is indeed very huge & modern too. Anandi saw big chandeliers hanging in central & huge carpet on floor in main drawing room. Anandi is looking everywhere with curiosity. Shivraj sits one of sofa & he signaled Anandi too. Servant brings water from inside.

Kon hain Nathu someone asked from upstairs. Its lady's voice Anandi felt bit relived.

Jee'bhaiya jee aaye hain Nath replied.

Anandi heard somebody's footstep from upstairs. She was curious to see who is coming. She saw lady middle age but graceful in fact very beautiful lady coming down. She was wearing night gown with robe. Shivraj who was sitting gets up as lady comes down. Shivraj move forward & took her blessings. She touches his chicks & smiled. She wanted to say something but stopped seeing Anandi. She looked at her & then to Shivraj.

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Yeh Anandi hain Maman Shivraj introduce Anandi.

Anandi folded her hand.

Lady looked at her.

Anandi looked down. Maman yeh kaisa naam hain. Yeh lady kon hain? Iss ne toh kaha ki aunty hain she mutters.

Lady stare Anandi from head to toe. She sits on big sofa.

Shivraj asked Anandi to sits near lady. Anandi sits near her. Anandi felt Shivraj is signaling something towards lady. Anandi bit confuse & started feeling scared too.

Yeh dono kya ek dusare ko ishare mein keh rahe hain Anandi said in low voice.

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Suddenly Shivraj gets up & said Good Night Maman.

Anandi gets confuse. Shivraj walk towards door & bang door. Anandi was stunned.

Yeh mujhe bye bhi nahi bolke gaya. Kaisa insaan hain yeh Anandi mutters.

Aap kuch khaana khaoge Nath asked.

Jee''Anandi try to say something. Nahi'.rehne dee jeyeh.

Nathu ek glass doodh guest room mein rakh doo Lady said. & show her guest room too. Lady gets up & leaves.

Anandi gets up. Jee'thank you'.aapne mujhe'..

Nathu'..jaldi Lady said in firm voice.

Nathu signaled Anandi to follow him. Yeh Aunty aur Shivraj dono bhi ajeeb hain. Mujhese dhang se baat bhi nahi ki dono ne.

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Nathu showed her guest room. Anandi entered in room. It was well decorated room with huge king size bed in middle of room. Nathu left her.

Anandi look around in room. She was thinking what is going on in her life for past few hours. She was sold by her step brother. She was rescued by unknown man & now she comes with him in his home. How can she trust this man? But he rescued her from horrible situation. But is it safe to trust man u barely knew. I only knew his name & this place looks bit confusing & scary too. His so called Aunty doesn't give me damm. She was so cold.

Suddenly she hears knock on door. Madam jee main nathu.

Haan ander aaye'.

Yeh dhoodh aur kuch fal hain agar aapko bhook lage toh. Aur kisi bhi cheese ki jaaroot hoot oh mujhe bula lena. This is bell. He showed her bell.

Thik hain. Nathu jee'..yeh kiska ghar hain?

Jee'.

Mera matlab hain Shivraj ka hee hain na yeh ghar. Aur who Shivraj ki aunty hain na. Kya naam hain unka?

Jee Meenakshi Shekhar. Bhaiya jee ki kaki hain.

Accha'.oh kaki hain.

Main chalta hunn.

Nathu jee rukeyeh aapke bhaiya jee karte kya hain? Anandi asked Nathu.

Nathu is about to say something Meenakshi entered.

Nathu'..doodh rakha she asked.

Jee'..

Ab jao she ordered.

Anandi is looking at her with scary face.

Meenakshi looked at her with stern face. Soo jao. Bahot raat hoo gaye hain.

Jee Good Night'Mam'.before Anandi could finish her sentence Meenakshi left room.

Anandi drinks milk & goes near window. Window opened in huge lawn area of bungalow. At night in Madh Island its bit chilly this is rare in Mumbai's condition. Anandi is looking outside she heard sound of sea waves too.

Chalo soo jati hunn. Kalka kal dekhenge she said herself. Uss khadus aur uski aunty se kal baat karni hee padegi.

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In morning Anandi opened her eyes slowly. She looks around & gets up quickly with jerk.

Main '.gosh main yahan hunn. She sits on bed. Kitane baje hain'she looks for time. Gosh its 8 am. Lekin main fresh kaise hongi'..mera samaan. She goes into washroom which was huge. She saw there is new tooth brush with all other things. She smiled.

Kisi hotel se kaam nahi hain yeh bungalow.

She fresh n up herself. She comes out from washroom. Someone knocks door. Nathu entered.

Madam jee'.breakfast'.aaye'dining room mein he said to Anandi.

Anandi followed him.

They entered in dining hall. Meenakshi was already arrived she gave look to Anandi. She signaled her to sit down near her. Anandi promptly goes there & sits. Someother servant joined Nathu too. Anandi is looking at Meenakshi. She is wearing beautiful sari with elegant jewel piece in her neck & earrings. She looked Royal lady Anandi is constantly staring at her.

Mujhe ghoorne se pet nahi bahrega Anandi.

Anandi gets conscious & said'nahi'.jee.

Nathu served them breakfast.

Anandi still confuse. Jee main aapko kya bulaun? Shivraj aapko Mama'.

Maman'..word is Maman Meenakshi said. Shivraj mujhe Maman bulata hain. It is French word for Mother. Well you can call me Maman if u wants too. I have no issues.

Jee'Maman. Acha toh khadus ko French aati hain Anandi thinking in her mind. Lekin yeh yahan kyun nahi rehta aur karta kya hain. Main inse pooch lete hunn.

Raat ko neend aaye tumhe Meenakshi asked.

Jee'.acche se.

Good.

Well can I ask you something?

Meenakshi doesn't say anything.

Anandi assume its yes & asked why is Shivraj not living here with you?

Meenakshi stopped eating. Meenakshi looked at her. Anandi gets bit scared.

Well he is grown up man. He is responsible & tough enough to handle himself very well in world. He doesn't need his mother or aunt to look after him. Meenu gave straight answer.

Anandi is amused to hear this answer. She nodded her head.

Lekin aap yahan akele? Accha hota ki who bhi aapke sath hote toh. Mera matlab itane bade ghar mein'.Anandi asked with shaky voice.

Breakfast karo. Khate waqt baat karna thik nahi Meenu said.

Anandi nodded her head with stale smile.

Dono bhi khadus lagate hain. Kisi bhi baat ka thik se jawab nahi dete she mutters.

Servant showed up with mobile in his hand. He goes near to Meenakshi & whispered something in her ear. Meenakshi picks mobile from him.

Excuse me'she left within fraction of second.

Anandi makes faces. Ajeeb hain'.sab kuch.

Servant comes with some juice.

Jee aap?

Main Pappu Madam jee. Aapko juice?

Jee'thank you.

Aur kitane log hain yahna Pappu jee she asked.

Jee'.main abhi aaya Paapu left.

Ye hoo kya raha hain she said. Koi mujhe kuch bata kyun nahi.

Paapu mutters yeh madam jee bahot sawaal poochti hain. Maine agar jawaab dee diye toh Bhaiya jee mera''''' jaane doo mujhe aapani naukari pyari hain. Inn madam jee kya!! Hey Bhaiya jee aane ka samay hoo gaya.

Aanndi saw all of sudden some movement around her. Pappu & Nathu are busy in something they are constantly looking at watch.

Pappu jaldi'karo'.ghadi dekho.

Haan'hoo gaya.

Door bell rings. Pappu & Nathu are scared looked at each other.

Arre darwaja kholo'..warna musibaat aa jayegi.

Again door bell rings. Papau ran towards main door. Anandi is observing all this. She wonders who is coming in early morning. Pappu opens door. Shivraj was standing. Aanndi was surprised to him. It looks like he comes from Gym. He was wearing Black jacket with black track pant. Anandi's eyes popped up. He comes like storm in home. He threw his bag on sofa. He turns towards Pappu who is shivering with fear. Shivraj gave angry look to Pappu.

Darwaja kholne mein itana waqt kyun laga?

Jee bhaiya jee'main wahan'.

Tumhe pata hain na main issi waqt roz aata hunn. Aur main direct ander aata hunn. Darwaaja kholke kyun nahi rakha Shivraj asked in sharp tone.

Jee'.wahan main table par taiyaari kar raha tha. Madam jee ko'.breakfast.

Kon aaya hain ya nahi aaya hain isse mere schedule mein koi badalav nahi aata yeh baat tum kaise bhool gaye.

Jee maffi'..bhaiya jee.

Thik hain Maman kahan hain he asked.

Jee ander phone par abhi batata hunn unhe Pappu ran from there.

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Anandi is watching all this drama from dining room. She was scared but remains quite. She is observing Shivraj from there.

He opens his jacket zip & threw jacket on sofa where his bag was laying. Anandi's heart skipped a bit. She is watching tall all most above 6 fit Muscular well toned body & slightly dark skinned man in front of her. Shivraj picks water bottle & splash water on his face. Anandi is completely mesmerized with Shivraj's physic. He is wearing black vest & black track pant he was indeed looking sexy hot man in world. Anandi giggled thinking about it. Shivraj turns towards her. Anandi is taken aback with his sudden action.

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She looked here & there but Shivraj is walking slowly towards her. Anandi sits on chair & start eating breakfast with her head down. Shivraj comes & pulled one of the chair in front of her. Nathu brings & serve breakfast to him. Anandi is observing Shivraj. He doesn't look at her at all.

Anandi makes faces. Kitana gussa aata hain usko? Bekaar mein kyun chillaya uss Pappu par. Mujhe isse poochna hee hoga isa yeh kya karta hain ki log isse itana darte hain. Kal bhi Hotel mein log dare hus the. Kaise suruwat karu she mutters.

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Gym se aaye hoo she asked.

Nahi'Mandir se he replied without looking at her.

Anandi gets furious. Bekar mein Pappu ko daant laga di who mere liye breakfast serve kar rahe the.

Shivraj is ignoring her completely.

Anandi becomes restless. Kitana gussa aata hain tumhe? Baap re woh bhi itani choti baat par. Kamal hain.

Tum bhi subah subah kitana bolti hoo kamaal hain he said in sarcastic tone.

Anandi was shocked. Jeee''

Shivraj is still eating his food without looking at her.

Mujhe yeh batana tha ki Thanks. Main yahan acche se hunn. Kal neend bhi acche se aaye mujhe. Aur tumhari Mamn nahi kya tha Manma''Anandi thinks hard.

Maman '..Maman he interupts.

Haan'wahi. Unhon ne bhi mera khayal rakha acche se.

Shivraj is giving her look like he is not at all interested in her talks. Anandi is still talking with him nonstop.

After sometime she popped Q. Tum kya karte hoo? Tumse log kyun itana ghabrate hain?

Shivraj for moment he stops eating but after moment he again started eating food ignoring Anandi's Q.

Nathu brings cordless phone to Shivraj. Anandi is looking at him with suspicious eyes.

Haan thik hain kar dena'.lekin agar gadbadi hue toh main'aur haan dhyan se sambhalkar. Mujhe galatiyan bardashat nahi hoti aur galati karne wlaon main kabhi asani se bakshta nahi Shivraj said in firm voice.

Anandi's eye gets wide with shock. 😲

To be continue'''''''.

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Edited by blushing - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice update aditi.. bechari anandi kaha fas gayi soch rahi hai 🤣.. ab next update mera hai.. mera kya hoga... ab..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Too Good...Aditi...👏

Liked it very much...😳

Await next...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thanks Aditi and Pratz for this crazy interesting plotline 😊

So curious about S and what he does...what has A gotten herself into?????

I bet S will be asking himself what he has gotten himself into as the story progresses...I don't think A is going to follow/fit into his schedule at all 😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg... Aditi.. tune mara bang on...⭐️⭐️⭐️..nd who... Shiv ka kya character banaya hai...Total Kahdus nd very suspicious...😳...are tumne to meenu ko bhi khadus bana diya..😲😉...
wow... mamn..achha hai... French ati hai...
nd oohooo... Shiv ke Look ka kya distribution diya yar...😳.... haye..main to mar gae...😳😳😳...
nd Poor Anandi..bechari soch rahi hai...kaha fas gae...
dono khadoos mil kar bada 😕 kar rahe hai... One person Sply...😉😆😆... kuch jyada kar raha hai..
Haye.. Aditi... tune dhamal macha di... I loved it...⭐️👏🥳⭐️👏🥳⭐️👏🥳...
Doni ab teri bari... mujhe update chahiye..wo bhi ASAP......
Love u Aditi..for this update,..🤗..dekh mujhe pata tha..tu kar legi..nd kya kiya yar...🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woh! Aditi and prati, excellent, very interesting. Khadoos collector we are missing in the bv now,

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