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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww tat was so cute and very nicely written. Wishing to see this soon in the real serial tooo.
Update sooner plz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Very well written Kinmuk ! Great job.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
hey...its too good yaar ...plz update soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
😊
continued...

Anandi makes the bed and makes sure the room is clean. Shiv calls out to her, 'anandi maine apna towel bahar chod diya hai...de denaa zaraa...chest of drawer main hai'. Anandi takes a fresh towel and opens the door slightly looking away and says 'yeh raha towel'.

Anandi does not even realize what happens in that moment. Shiv pulls her hand holding the towel in the dressing room (which is just outside the washroom). Anandi is in Shiv's arms...her hands with the towel on his bare chest. Shiv is dressed in jeans but is bare chested. Anandi is lost...she is blushing so much...her heart is beating fast (did it ever beat this fast she thinks unknowingly in her subconscious mind). Shiv pulls her closer to him. Shiv is so close to her...that he cannot even see her full face...Shiv caresses the side of her face...gently...

'yeh aap kya kar rahen hain shiv'...Shiv doesn't answer...he continues to caress the other side of her face...gently kissing her cheeks... 'Shivvv'...Anandi is blushing...she is feeling shy but at the same time she is weakly trying to protest by pushing him...Shiv doesn't even feel her weak protests...
'tumhe pyaar kar rahaa hoon...' Shiv replies in a whisper in her ears...and then kissing them...Anandi shivers...in his arms...

Anandi again goes 'Shiv aap-'...He ignores her and throws the towel in her hand away...He gently pushes her against the wall...Anandi blushing looks up at him...'koi aa jaayegaa...sab kya sochenge - ki hum abhi tak kya kar rahein hain'...Shiv holds her chin up..smiles and says...'Anandi - sab kya sochenge...tumhe bhagaa kar nahin laaya hoon...poore rasm aur riwaaz ke saath ...phere lekar...patni banakar laaya hoon...aur vaise bhi humari nayi nayi shaadi hui hai'...

he moves forward to kiss her lips...😳 Anandi finally gives in...she embraces him completely...both her arms moving along his bare back...Shiv's one hand is in Anandi's wet-dry hair and the other around her waist pushing it towards him...they are both completely lost in each other...kissing passionately...Shiv fervently kisses her neck while at the same time opening the dori of her blouse...Anandi and Shiv are breathing heavily...completelty lost in the passion of the moment...in each other...😳

While outside the closed door...Irawati is thinking to herself,' Anandi toh uth gayi thi...room saaf karte hue dekha tha...' then she thinks...the thought makes her smile she is about to leave...then she thinks mandir bhi jaana hai aur Anandi ko kitchen mein pehli baar meetha bhi banana hai ...dono ko disturb to karna padega...she smiles to herself...as she knocks on the door..

She waits for a long time...no answer...Irawati gets worried...she knocks more loudly...

In the dressing room...Shiv had untied all the 3 doris of Anandi's blouse...his hand was moving along her back while he caressed her neck with his lips..suddenly... DHAB DHAB DHAB DHAB...Anandi-Shiv come out of their world...Anandi gasps...- coming to reality----'SHIV- koi darwaaze par hai...he bhagwaan !!!! ' Anandi..just chill...' 'kya chill karoon shiv...sab kya sochenge...chaliye hatiye' and shouts 'haanji mummy hum aaa----- yaani ke main aa rain hoon'

'anandi aise hi sab ke saamne jaogee?' he said pointing to Anandi's untied doris. Anandi immediately starts tying her doris but since she is all nervous thinking about the elders in the house she is unable to do so properly...

Shiv sighs and take takes the doris and starts tying them...Anandi and Shiv are both looking into the mirror while Shiv ties her doris..
after tying her doris ...Shiv starts wearing a down-button shirt...Anandi turns to face him...ans starts buttoning his shirt...both sharing glances filled with unconditional love ā¤ļø

anandi adjustes her saree for the final time...and gives Shiv a quick hug and a kiss and runs out to open the door


Now I will definitely continue...a big THANKS to all readers...your comments motivated me to write such a long OS...otherwise I was thinking to end it on a -WEDDING NIGHT but I continued typing till -NEXT MORNING cuz I myself want to see similar (obviously not as bold scenes on BV)...

COMMENTS ARE ALWAYS WELCOME 😊 😊 😊


update: pg 7


Edited by kinmuk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Plz continue..waiting for the update..it's not bold
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice but too short an update ! Don't worry about being bold. Its perfect.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Loved it . Please update fast .
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
continue for sure! I love it! so cute and sweet! ā¤ļø
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
I wont say sweet or cute coz its not !! šŸ˜• its hot ! So intense my god !! Im blushing and smiling like anything ā˜ŗļø you write such bold scenes with so much emotion that it is just perfect ! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
I will personally leave the net and kill you if you don't continue 😃

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