FF: After the rejection--new chapter uploaded!

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Since all of us are very panicked to imagine the hurdles that are going to come in AnSh's way, I decided to ease by anxiety by imagining a story after Anandi rejects Shiv's marriage proposal. So here it is, enjoy the ride:


Chapter 1:


Shiv was sitting in a state of shock. He could not believe what he just heard. Anandi has refused to marry him!

It was just a day after the Birthday party------the best day of his life. Dadisa's proposal had opened the floodgates of his heart. Yes, he has fallen in love with Anandi-------her eyes, her smile, her simplicity, her strength, her determination, her passion...Yes he loved Anandi, loved her with all his heart. He was amazed how quickly he fell for her, how he wanted to walk miles only to get a glimpse of Anandi, how he wanted to keep staring at that beautiful face, how he held to the small piece of streamer from Anandi's hair close to his heart. Dadisa's proposal had sent him into shock, and then an overriding joy. Blushingly he had said yes and came back home as the happiest man on earth. He had called up his parents in excitement, called up Ashi early in the morning to share the news. And he could not sleep all night. Holding his pillow tight he kept dreaming about Anandi-----how he would take her in his arms, kiss her lips gently, wipe her every tear, hold her forever, and occasionally fight with her too! He was truly the happiest man on earth.

Yet he was worried when he did not find Anandi in the park for jogging the next morning. His heart panicked but he convinced himself that she must have been tired after the party. "I will meet her in school today, " he said to himself. As the day progressed, he took out his jeep and went looking for her in the Sarpanch office. She was not there. He went to her school. The kids were happy to see him and wanted him to stay back. But there was no Anandi. Gulli told Anandi had not come today. His heart sank more. "Should I call her up," he thought to himself, "but what if she is also feeling too shy to talk to me now"? The thought sent him blushing, "maybe Anandi is feeling shy about the new turn our relationship is going to take, maybe I should give her a little more time". The thought calmed him down and he went back to work.

Yet at the end of the day he started panicking again. Why haven't I heard from Anandi all day? Is she alright? Has she fallen sick? Is she too busy? Is she waiting for my call? Should I call her up? But what will I say...no I should call her up, let me call her up. Shiv debated with the thought of calling her up and finally dialled her number. The phone was ringing on the other end, but there was no response. Shiv felt like going mad with anxiety.

And then dadisa had walked in, carrying the terrible news. Anandi had refused to marry him. The world came crashing in front of his eyes. Anandi has no feelings for me! Oh how she hates me now, how will I face her ever again...Shiv hoped it was just a nightmare, he would wake up and everything would be fine again. But it was indeed reality: and the reality was Anandi has rejected him!


To be continued...
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Suchi- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awessommmee!!!

Please do continue dearoo!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Antra... Wowww So nice of you for soothing me, I know u r writing something cool cool...hehehe and Shiv's thoughs are kamal when he was holding his pillow and thinking when he embrace Anandi like this and kiss her lips gently...☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Chapter 2:

Anandi was sitting in her room with tears streaming down her eyes. She had locked herself up and refused to talk to anyone. She kept thinking about the moment when dadisa had declared her marriage with Shiv after everybody had left the party. She could not believe what she heard-------Dadisa really asked Shiv to marry me? And more shockingly, Shiv has agreed to marry me? How could he?


Anandi had stormed into her room crying out "I will not marry him" . She slammed the door of her room and broke down. No she could not let another man ruin her life again. Scenes of her marriage with Jagya kept flashing in front of her eyes----the saat feras, the gruha pravesh, her honeymoon with Jagya, her priceless moments of love with Jagya, and then Jagya's abuse, Jagya's insults, Jagya walking in with Gauri as a bride...

How could she let it all happen to herself all over again? She has lost her faith in marriage, she cannot trust another man in her life as her life partner, she will never let another man hurt her again, make her cry, make her heart bleed once more.

She heard dadisa, taisa, taiji and bapusa knocking on her door. "Anandi darwaja khol beta, hamari baat toh shun" they were pleading in unison. Hearing their loving voices Anandi's eyes welled up again. How could they do this to me? How could they even think of marrying me off ? How could they think of sending me away from this home? Have I become such a burden for them? She missed Sumitra and wanted to bury her face in her lap. "Maa where are you maa", She missed her own mother and father. Everybody she has ever loved deeply has left her and moved away from her. Her parents have left her. Jagya has left her, and now her own family wants to abandon her, they want to push her away. Anandi could not stop crying, the tears kept flowing uncontrollably.

She woke up with a jolt. It was 5 am in the morning. God knows when she fell asleep last night...she remembered everything that happened last night and a strange anxiety gripped her. Till now she had been thinking about herself and her pain, but what about Shiv. The thought of Shiv sent a shiver down her spine. How will she face Shiv again? How will they keep working together? Pangs of embarrassment gripped her, she could never see him in the eye again.

Yet it was not only embarrassment that she felt about Shiv. There was something else. She could not lay her finger on it, but there was certainly something else she felt about him----the way he kept coming in her dreams...but why? Why does she have such a strange feeling for him? Anandi brushed aside those thoughts and came down to the hall. Dadisa was sitting there. She rose up to say something to Anandi. But Anandi firmly declared "Please go and tell him I cannot marry him". She said and walked out of the house.




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Antra yaar please continue this with some good track... there are jolts in my stomachs as well...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome I can see this happening. Def. !

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written ! :)
Can see this happening in the serial too ! But, I doubt if Anandi would tell Dadisa so boldly that she will not marry Shiv. She is very obedient.
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Chapter 3:

Anandi spent her whole day near the deserted lake. She needed to take time off to calm herself down. Her mind was in a turbulence, her heart was racing fast. Why did Shiv agree to marry me? He certainly has no feelings for me. Is it purely pity then? That must be it. He must have taken pity on me, on my plight as an abandoned wife. He was doing social service by marrying me, Anandi thought as tears welled up in her eyes again. If there was anything she hated that was to be reduced to an object of pity. Dadisa had indeed made her pitiable in her own eyes, she felt ashamed about herself.

Yet the thought of Shiv made her restless, she could not stop thinking about him. To her surprise, she wanted to see Shiv. "Why am I feeling so restless to see him?" Anandi said to herself. "Maybe because I see him everyday and it has become a habit", Anandi thought. Her mind was invaded with images--------Their first meeting, Shiv saving her, Shiv praising her cooking, Shiv rescuing her at Jyoti's wedding, Shiv fighting for her, Shiv consoling her, Shiv touching her hair, Shiv's eyes, Shiv's mascular arms...Anandi chided herself, why am I thinking like this about collector saab? No, I must apologize to him on behalf of dadisa.

She needed time to gather herself and regain courage to face collector shahib. As she sat there, she could see the entire Jetsar from that high point. The sight of the village gave her strength. My first and primary duty is towards my village, Anandi thought. I could not let my personal feelings come in between, she thought with resolute and walked back home.

Shiv was riding back home after work. His mind was not working, his senses were numb. All the beautiful dreams that he had dared to think about had come crashing. A trickle of tear came to his eyes-------it is the second time he has been hurt in love, it is the second time his heart has been shattered to pieces. And this time it pains like hell. Why does it always happen to him?

As he rode back with a heavy heart, he spotted a figure in the setting light of the sun. "Isn't that Anandi?" he squinted his eyes. Yes indeed it is Anandi, looking beautiful in that orange saree in the light of the setting sun. Her face looked angelic in the glowing light, her eyes mesmerizing. Shiv felt the sharp pain in his heart once again, how badly he wanted to hold her...Anandi had also turned around. Both came face to face and Anandi looked at his face. He seemed to have grown old in only a day------his eyes looked haggled, his face had grown stubbles, his hair looked disheveled. Anandi felt a strange sense of warmth seeing his face, somehow she was happy to meet him. But soon it was overcome with a sense of embarrassment. Anandi spoke up, "woh collectorsaab, main...woh...I mean...I am really sorry...I apologize on behalf of dadisa too...I mean...".

Before Anandi could complete, Shiv sharply cut her short, "Could you please move away from the middle of the road Ms.Singh? You are walking right in the middle of the road and there's no place for me to drive." Anandi was stumped and looked with amazement as Shiv did not even spare a look at her, and drove away with a stern face.


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More to come😉





Edited by woman11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OOO

OH COME ON!!!!!

Pleaseee continue!
I think this will happen Anandi would want to yell at Shiv but then feel bad and in the end Shiv will explain to her just like he did about that grant thing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suchi-Virmanian

OOO


OH COME ON!!!!!

Pleaseee continue!
I think this will happen Anandi would want to yell at Shiv but then feel bad and in the end Shiv will explain to her just like he did about that grant thing



hehe suchi, no. I have different plans for Shiv, it's Anandi's turn to win back her man. He will make her go crazy.😉

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