TS- Aye Zindagi Gale Laga le PriRa Part 3 updated Page 4-Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I must say you have given a perfect ending


I am impressed with Ram here 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much for liking it... Yes wanted to keep that hope to be there.. I want Priya to forgive him but slowly... Because ultimately our ram is a good guy

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You like mera wala ram? Hahah. I m happy everyone seems to like this version.. I have hopes for show wala ram too. Goofy hai but bhola hai... Thank you for commenting.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Brought me to tears🥺 ... Ram's confession❤️... I loved it... Hope is all that is needed, Priya will definitely love him, no she loves him but yet to realise that. Amazing update😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome update continue plz

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww. Your comment made my day... Honestly I wrote after ages.. So I was not sure if I will be able to write at all Or whether it will be readable or not... Thank you so much for commenting

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you for liking.. Aare nahi yaar. I completed this for now.. Let PriRa figure out where they want to go from here.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey.. beautiful scene... I was feeling so disappointed after last night's episode.. like they had spoiled the whole show and the characters for me. I really needed a meaningful act exactly like the one you wrote so much suiting to the characters they were (before ydays epi). I am sure the show will never have a conversation like yours... So it's much more needed.. coz this is the most logical next scene and you have written it so poignantly. Loved how you wrote Rams fear and realisation of priyas action (finally). I do it so many times.. rewrite ends or scenes in my head when writers become illogical, but my imagination was no where good as yours writing. Perfect! Thank you.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhubhnis

Hey.. beautiful scene... I was feeling so disappointed after last night's episode.. like they had spoiled the whole show and the characters for me. I really needed a meaningful act exactly like the one you wrote so much suiting to the characters they were (before ydays epi). I am sure the show will never have a conversation like yours... So it's much more needed.. coz this is the most logical next scene and you have written it so poignantly. Loved how you wrote Rams fear and realisation of priyas action (finally). I do it so many times.. rewrite ends or scenes in my head when writers become illogical, but my imagination was no where good as yours writing. Perfect! Thank you.


Oh my god, thank you so much. You all are too kind with your comments. Ur comment was so full of praise.. I actually went back to re read my story.. Ki "hai, main itna acha likha hai kya?! " 😅😅


My expectations after Yeh haib mohabbatein, Ek duje ke vaaste and Isqhbaaz is so bad that it doesn't surprise me anymore when they turn tragedy into comedy... That's how they deal with it.. But anyway honestly balh2 hasn't reached that level yet for me to call it quits..


I thank you again for being this sweet with your comment

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I really want to thank each and everyone of you who liked and took out time to comment.. I wrote after ages and that too when I am not very active in this forum also.. So I m practically a newbie here... So thanks a lot for being this kind 😍😍😍

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