TS- Aye Zindagi Gale Laga le PriRa Part 3 updated Page 4-Completed - Page 5

Hey.

Though I might feel the ending as not complete but I guess I understand why you left it at that stage.

It makes sense to let the characters chalk out their own path🤗. However, if you get time later, you can try for an Epilogue which doesn't need to summarize how they resolved their issues but just where they're at the current stage - Could be years down the line where they're just basking in each other's glory or a Happy couple staying away from Family😳

Loved the concept & Really liked your closer-to-reality work😎

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Hey.

Though I might feel the ending as not complete but I guess I understand why you left it at that stage.

It makes sense to let the characters chalk out their own path🤗. However, if you get time later, you can try for an Epilogue which doesn't need to summarize how they resolved their issues but just where they're at the current stage - Could be years down the line where they're just basking in each other's glory or a Happy couple staying away from Family😳

Loved the concept & Really liked your closer-to-reality work😎

Haha. I understand your point.. But i kept like this purposely. Because, I don't think Priya is right now in a state to respond to his I love you and honestly, I feel for ram to resolve the issue about vedika being his ex and why he hid the truth, he has to come clean about his feelings towards Priya too, because the guy is actually shit scared of loosing her and that's why he kept on hiding it. So i kept it at the window of hope...

Also the reason I chose this song lyrics as my Story Title is because, like Priya, it is my favorite song too..

Hum ne tere haar gham ko gaale se lagaya hain, hain na.... Aye zindagi gaale laga le

I keep ur request in mind... Epilogue.. Pakka koshish karungi... I am already thinking something.. ..😅😅😅

Really loved your take on it, especially the way you have written Priya. Difficult to read and the way she was trying hard to control herself.

Liked the way Ram could read into her, his fear of her closing herself to him, his fear of losing her.

Would have loved if you could continue… may be one or two chapters more… but good that you kept it open to readers imagination. ❤️

Thank you so much for commenting..😍😍. This one I purposely kept it open.. Glad u understood... I might write another one when inspiration hits me. But yeh wala shayad naahi continue karu... N show ka itna different take rha, ki abhi yeh wala continue bhi nahi ho payega.. The reason I hurriedly finished before the confrontation or lack of it occurred, or else I would lost the momentum.

Thanks once again... 🤗