TS- Aye Zindagi Gale Laga le PriRa Part 3 updated Page 4-Completed - Page 2

Originally posted by: Balh2fan

Bring it on… this is my Priya… exactly what I would do… let the other person die guessing… my next move.. calm and cool… serve it cold for the zing effect 😆

Honestly when I started writing, I didn't want to go too much angst style... But then I ended up with that only... Lolz... Serve it cold.. Lolz.. I intend too.. Hopefully won't dissapoint u guys.. Updating the next part..

Aww thank you so much... You guys commenting and liking the story means so much too me.. Hope u will like the next part too...

Okay so here it is..the second part...Honestly I am in two minds, should I stop here keeping it open for various ending options...Is it the end or it is not? Or should I wrap it up nicely in another part, making it a Three Shot (it still would be TS)

What do you guys think? I am sincerely hoping the shot won't dissapoint you guys... Not proofread so kindly ignore typos...

Here goes nothing...

Part 2

Ram cleared his throat again, scratching his beard, mumbling “Woh, woh tum thik ho Priya?”

“Mr Kapoor, mujhe kya hua? main thik hu… mujhe lagta hai kisine mujhe jaan bujhke bhaang de di thi.. But main thik hu, aapko meri chinta karne ki zarurat nahi hai…breakfast karne aa jayiye…fir mujhe nikalna hai” Priya's tone was normal but her eyes were not…

Ram knows this much about body language and Priya to know that she is not fine.. Or is she? It was so confusing!! How can she be serving food the next day after knowing about his Ex being Vedika… or doesn’t she remember the last night? He was so confused, that he totally missed her declaration that she will be going out..

“Nikalna hain matlab? Kaha, kyun kaise? Priya tum meri baat pehele sun lo please, I wanted to tell you… but I was scared, trust me..”

“Aap ko kya hua hai? Main abhi bhi Naukri karti hu na? Aaj Chutti nahi hai.. So I do have to go out.. Isme aap ko trust karne ya na karne ka kya matlab hai, aur nahi aapke permission ki”

Ram was flabbergasted… Priya doesn’t care or Priya doesn’t remember… which was it? How can she be this casual and be her usual curt self… but she wasn’t this curt with him nowadays… was she? That means she remembers... Doesn't it?

“Aur haa, aaj main Maa ke paas rehe jaugi, kyunki kafi din woha nahi gayi…”

Ram was scared, very very scared… This is not calmness before Storm… this is Priya disassociating herself from him… She will not ask him questions, she will not be angry… She will just push him away…and that’s more devastating than her being angry and demanding answers from him.. Ram had to do something or else Priya might still be with him physically for family's sake but she won’t be there mentally… He could literally feel the doors closing on his face…

He kept his head down, took a deep breath and came near her and requested her, holding her hands…His heart broke a thousand pieces when she saw her flinch “Can I get one hour time of yours please, just the two of us, in our bedroom?”

She sighed “it’s already pretty late, Mr Kapoor, I need to go, it's late” she whispered, finally a crack in her voice...

He prayed it wasn't that late yet!

End of Part 2

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Hayee.. itni thandak mili ram ko tadapte hue dekh ke 😆

Do right the third part 👍🏼

Ooohhh... interesting❤️. I loved how you wrote Priya, it is so her. Even though she might be hurt, she'll hide it in front of Ram. Eager for the next one

Ooooohhhh!

I love how you played out the Scene & the ending can't wait to read next part. Ram realising that Priya has already begun to distance herself from him😭

Will Ram be able to help both of them in 1 hr?

I can physically feel how they are both broken, thanks for such a vivid display. We definitely need a sequel

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

Hayee.. itni thandak mili ram ko tadapte hue dekh ke 😆

Do right the third part 👍🏼

Hahhaa... As I said, my mood suddenly turned angsty... Hence poor Ram.. Thanks for commenting Ritika

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Really amazing one.

Thanks a lot ❤❤

Originally posted by: Anonymmus

Ooohhh... interesting❤️. I loved how you wrote Priya, it is so her. Even though she might be hurt, she'll hide it in front of Ram. Eager for the next one

Thank you ❤ I m so happy that you all are liking how the story is progressing and Priya character sketch.. Now I m feeling like I will write the last part to wrap it up ache se..