TS- Aye Zindagi Gale Laga le PriRa Part 3 updated Page 4-Completed

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It is after ages, I felt like writing again... I am loving the BALH 2 current episodes and PriRa is right now my comfort couple.. I enjoy watching them.. And I love peeping in and read all the theories and discussions which happens here..

Tried my hand on a TS (too lazy to write in one shot) on the current track after Priya comes to know the truth.. Did the typing on my mobile.. So kindly ignore typos.. Hopefully the story has continuity...


Hopefully you all will like it.. If u do, please do let me know...



“Priya… “… Ram cautiously calls out Priya, the next morning… Bri informed him late at night yesterday how Priya came to know the truth… how Maitreyi blurted out the truth and how Priya had very calmly reacted to the same and declared that she will deal with this herself…

During the previous day, the entire holi festival, Priya was intoxicated with Bhaang, but this time her drunken self was different than the other times.. He could sense the blankness in her eyes.. Even thou at that moment he had no idea. But he felt it. It was after Neeraj – stupid ass man, spew the venom in front of everyone and following Bri's confirmation, he knew why Priya was like that…

Ram had rushed to check on Priya, but by the time, he reached their room, Priya was already knocked out. He couldn’t sleep the entire night waiting for Priya to wake up and to explain her the situation…

He knew that he was most probably the stupidest person possible… Why didn’t he tell her himself… then it could have been so much easier… Priya might have not reacted at all…or atleast not being this hurt… this is all his stupidity. But wait, if she is hurt, it does confirm this fact also that Priya feels for him romantically… Oh God, what was he even thinking? Is it the right moment to think about this? But it does confirm her feelings too.. Doesn’t it? .. Oh let’s not go there abhi!!

Anyway it is so difficult to understand Priya and her feelings and now after this revelation, she might go into her shell more! But Sara di suggested not to tell Priya.. Shit, what mess……

He was awake the entire night, sitting beside her and waiting for Priya to wake up, only to doze off at dawn... And Now Priya was no where to be seen…

He finally found her in the kitchen instructing something to Tarun/Ajay/Pawan about breakfast.. ..

Ram clears his throat again and calls out “ Priya… . I need to talk to you, could you please come with me? “…

Priya looks up, and all he can see is… .. A very normal expression… neither anger, nor hurt, no love not even curiosity… there was nothing… just a blank page…..he gulps when she opens her mouth….“Can it wait? Or is something very urgent and needs to be discussed right now?”



End of Part 1

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Posted: 3 years ago
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A very interesting premise, there is something big behind Priya's calmness...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow!

Would love to read your take on how this situation is handled by PriRa😳


Good job on Ram being tensed throughout the Night😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Great job. Eagerly waiting for the next part!! Hope you update soon!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much for your interest. Yes at times calmness is scarier

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hahaha... Yes Ram is damn tensed.. But he can't help but think if Priya being upset is better than bi reaction at all. 😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww thank you so much.. Yes will update soon.. Most probably today itself

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Posted: 3 years ago
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n this case, this is exactly the situation. Calm Priya is a living atomic bomb

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bring it on… this is my Priya… exactly what I would do… let the other person die guessing… my next move.. calm and cool… serve it cold for the zing effect 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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it is soo good yrrr...i could definitely see priya behaving like this. waiting for your update.

i read it before but was busy so commenting on it now. hope priya gives ram left right and centre 👍🏼

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