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Sakshi

@Sakshiashu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Superb ending for a wonderful story.
It's always a pleasure to read your writings.

You're an amazing writer.
Thanks for pm Arpita.

Do write more.

Looking forward to your other stories too.

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Dhristi

@Rayaland

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Beautiful ending hayeee kya bolu n love romantic priya bondas kiss kar dia ram wow n ram bhi kaam nahi hai shaadi ke mandap mein he sat wahhh waiting for next part

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reshak

@reshak

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Awesomr update..very nice
RaYa's propose n confession was good..priya is very cute always 1 step ram se aage hi rhti h
finally raya got married n having 2 little bundle of joy n leading happy family..
Beautiful ending of story..thnx for d pm..

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

All is well that's end well

Wat a twist Ram bought in the marriage ceremony everyone was tensed and like a hero with out getting anyone know he get married to Priya.whi was also has tension on her mind.

Now this one.pe one free as Priya got RAM so Vik got Neha. RaYa are married so is Mani is in jail say he deserves and RaYa family is complete with two adorable kids.

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Hi dear..

Nice update.

A sweet last part to the sweetly started love story..

Finally ended in Raya marriage .

Priya confessed love by a Kiss and reconfirmed it by another one..lol

Priya is too romantic and become bold ,courages in seeing Ram..

Poor Ram sweetly shockingly surprised...

Then Ram married priya without informing anyone,oh god imagine priya marrying him thinking its mani..uff.. Ram asked for tht slap from her..lol

I can imagine her slap,teary eyes,then their hug...finally formal confession,proposal all ram did..

Then priya being preggy, Ram being the typical Ram booking whole theatre, then happy end with the twins peehu,kush..wow happy ending..reminded of balh twin born scene..

Nice story with good end..

Thnks for the pm :)

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

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omg what an part just lovely the way Priya vanished n Ram & gang in search of her was too good thank God Aayesha & Kartik on her side even Shipra to but can understand her helplessness due that idiot Mani but so happy that finally Ram somehow reach to Priya & the way she confessed her love was mind blowing along with Golu Ram who didn't understood in tension hope he got soon what Priya meant lol... moving for next...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Last part

awww the way u posted it mind blowing completely new way to Propose lol she wants her grand children to call him grand father wow... I meant this is really good... but Golu Ram is too much she kissing him still he asking do she really love him I mean golupan no big hadd hoti hai lol... but the way I penned down whole start of was much more entertaining then anything I must say you u very nice ability to write don't stop it do continue with it... loved the little actions in ending part too Ram is more smarter then Mani that has been proved awesome n last part was best Priya teasing Ram n all I would like to read its epilogue for sure hope u find time to put it down soon...