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Posted: 8 years ago
Mani is not only a jerk but a fraud too
But seems Priya will definitely do something after talking with Ram about her engagement. But good to know like Priya he to love her but only Neha and Vik know the truth. Don't know when they will confess it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
hope Ram will save Priya from mani
thanks for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update.
What happened to priya?
Punish this jerk mani.
Hope Ram saves priya and confesses his love.
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago



aawww awesome what an update so Priya is feeling jealous abt Ram's GF but it would have fun to watch if Ram had continued this joke as teasing but he said truth to Priya well never mind... I guess NeVi going to n good friends in future soon... They really compliment each other so well lol... but this Mani na grrr what he is up to now isn't it he will engage with her next day I hope I m wrong... n he didn't recognized Vik with RaYa strange he met him just some days ago for an serious matter how can he forgot Vik so soon?? any way I just curious to know what will happen next so post next soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update...
hope priya is safe. plz contd soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice
waiting eagerly for the next part...
Hope Priya is safe
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Posted: 8 years ago
good progress Arpita and I am sorry for not replying on individual updates but I do read all ur stories 😊
all stories are going good
keep up the good work
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 11


Neha- switch off, class me call karke dekhti Hun, she call there but she also not available there, "gayi kaha par" in worried tone.


After an hour Neha came near dressing table n found one letter side by the eye liner she open it n started read.


Dear Neha,

I know you worried about me, I m sorry, ye baat mujhe Kal raat ko pata Chali tujhe baatati toh tu panic ho jaati aur mujhe nahi jaane deti, meri sirf ek baat ram tak pocha de Mai kanpur jaa Rahi hun, maybe kuch toh hua hai, Kal raat ko Mani ne kuch toh Kiya hai I don't know what he did but sagai cancel karke wo direct shaadi karna chahta hai aur Mai shaadi nahi karna chahti, ram ko bas itna batana, I need a help! Kuch bhi karo lekin mujhe shaadi nahi karni hai, iss Sunday tak ka waqt hai, mera mobile band hai iss liye Mai ek number de kar jaa Rahi hun tu waha par call karke alag naam se call kar ya photo 2 ring ke baad phn cut kar Mai samjh jaaungi tera call hai next call par phn utha lungi, bye TC, love you. Priya.


Neha- oh shit! And she dialed ram's number and told everything to him, Vik & ram reached to Neha's home n think what to do.

At kanpur, priya's & mani's family also there doing shaadi's preparations.

Priya- sagai ke Bich me shaadi Kaise? Kuch samjh nahi aa Raha hai,Kal raat ko Maa ka call aaya sirf ye baatane hum kanpur jaa Rahe hai phir raat ko MSG aaya kartik se, next Sunday shaadi hai meri AUR Mani ki aisa Kya hua hai Jo baat shaadi tak aa gayi Kal Shaam tak toh sab thik tha kuch toh missing hai, she think all this n knocked on door, aayesha came n lock the door.

Aayesha- di aapko jaruri baat batani hai Kaise toh yaha tak aayi Hun.

Priya- Kya baat hai.

Aaye- di Kal aap kaha gayi thi, after classes.

Priya- Neha ram Vik ke Saath Bahar kiu?

Aaye- USS Mani ne aapko call Kiya tha.

Priya- Yaa I was ignore it.

Aaye- iss baat ki wajah se ye sab hua.

Priya- Puri baat Kya hui hai aayesha kuch baatayegi ki Maa hi aisa chahti hai.

Aaye- Maa aisa nahi chahti hai wo khud nahi chahti ke USS maani ke Saath aapki shaadi ho lekin Ghar ki wajah se ye sab karna padh Raha hai, Kal raat Mani aaya tha, aapko shayad ussne waha par dekha AUR Ghar par aakar bahot baada hungama maachya AUR inn sab me ussne Ghar ke papers samne rakhe AUR kaha ki Ghar Khali karo ya aapki shaadi usse karwa do inn sab me ussne kuch police bhi laaye the iss liye Maa ki naa hokar bhi Haan ho gayi.

Priya- shit! Itna sab kuch hua, god! Mere liye ek kam karegi.

Aaye- bolo di.

Priya- ek call aqyega 2 ring ke baad cut hoga usske baad phir se call aayega wo call uthao AUR neha, Vik Yaa ram inn 3 naam me se kon SA bhi ek naam pucho AUR koi bhi Haan bole toh ye baat baata Dena maybe sab thik hoga Yaa sab kuch USS Mani ke favour me jaayega.

Aaye- sab thik hoga na di.

Priya- tension mat lo thik karna hoga bas tu AUR kartik ye baat ek dusre se share karo AUR Jo 3 gadhe aayenge unnki help karo, thik hai.

Aaye- di you say ram, you mean to say golu molu Bhai.

Priya- go and help them, she smile.

Aaye- proposed Kiya aapko.

Priya- aisa kuch nahi hai, jaa tu n she drag her from room n prayer to God.


At Mumbai

Ram- kanpur mujhe toh address bhi yaad nahi hai Kaise jaayenge AUR itne jaldi USS Mani ke against koi proof bhi nahi milega.

Vik- milega ram bas yaha par Mai Akela rahunga tum dono jaa kar shaadi ko rokne ki koshish karo.

Neha- ek kam karte hai we call Priya first.

Ram- if she not pick the call.

Vik-ohh mere Bhai kiu tu negative soch Raha hai positive think rakh na humesha ki Tarah.

Neha- Haan ram think positive, Priya call naa uthaye toh chalega, yaha par ram ki jaan aatki padi hai AUR tu bol Raha think positive, like patient ko vantilator par rakha hai AUR tu bol Raha hai doc ko usska oxygen mask haata de, are you serious vik, ram hum call karte hai.

Neha dialed number n cut after 2 ring n again call kartik pick up the call.

Kar- hello.

Neha- may I speak to Mrs.kapoor.

Kar- Neha.

Neha- husshhh! Kartik right number and person too.

Vik & ram shouting in enjoyment.

Neha scold them- chup karo, tum dono.

Kar- ho gaya sab kuch.

Neha- Priya kaisi hai.

Kar- she is fine but yaha par Mani ne bahot kuch Kiya hai.

Neha- OK listen to me, carefully, me & ram came there but Abhi waha ki situation baatao plz phn speaker par hai.

Kartik told everything to them about all.

Ram- Priya is OK.

Kar- Haan bhai she OK but ek problem.

Vik- konsi?

Kar- uss Mani ne tum teeno ko dekha hai, yaha par aaoge Kaise.

Ram- hum aajaayege don't worry bas tum dono Priya ka khayal rakhna aur update dete rehna OK.

Kar- Haan you don't worry,we handle here you came here very soon & they cut the call.

Ram- hum pehle yaha se Commissioner ke yaha jaate hai ussne baat karte hai AUR Mani ke khilaaf case file karte hai, phir baad me sab kuch.

Vik- wo toh hoga hi saath me Priya ke ghar ke papers bhi Kal subhe tak haath me aajayenge.

Ram- wo Kaise.

Vik- detective! Ram detective, you both go for kanpur, Mai tum dono ke baad aaunga piche se aage badho, aur change your get up, tu sardarji AUR issye ruksana bana AUR Priya ko khabar Mai pocha deta Hun.

Ram- if we don't got any proof then, what will happen?

Neha- ohh hello Kya? Pagal ho Kya? Dimag ghas khaane gaya hai, aisa kuch nahi hone Wala, Priya ki shaadi sirf tumse hogi AUR kisi se bhi nahi.

Ram- but Abhi Mani se ho Rahi hai.

Vik- I will kill you ram if you think negative!


At kanpur, kartik inform to Priya about ram & Neha.

Priya- lekin unn dono ko toh Mani ne dekha hai toh.

Kar- Mai AUR aayesha handle kar lenge aap bas tension free raho OK.

Priya- OK ram aaye toh PLZZ.

Kartik only assure her n went from there.

Next day, ram & Neha reached kanpur,ram in get up of sardarji and Neha wear burkha, aayesha & kartik there there to receive them.

Ram- Priya kaisi hai.

Kar- she is OK.

Aaye- aap dono hum dono ke dost bankar waha par aa Rahe ho.

Kar- aap gajendra banoge AUR Neha di aap ruksaana aayesha ki frnd.

Neha- kuch gadbad toh nahi hogi.

Aaye- tension na lo sab thik hoga.

Ram- but we wanted meet first Priya.

Aaye- we can't promise you but koshish jarur karenge.

Ram- OK chalo.

All reached their destination & Mani saw them n go near & asked to kartik.

Mani- Kon hai ye dono.

Aaye- ye ruksana meri frnd, she indicated to Neha.

Mani- ye aise burkhe me.

Aaye- tum akal ke aandhe ho ya sach me akal nahi hai.

Mani- you...

Kar- humare dost hai, di ki shaadi ke liye aaye hai, ab hum jaate hai tum raho yahi par, watch man bankar.

Mani- Kya kaha?

Kar- kuch bhi toh nahi.


They all pass from Mani.

Ram- ye toh Pura shaadi ke mood me hai.

Aaye- Abhi toh shaadi nahi hogi.

Neha- rokne Jo aaye hai.

Ram- hum Priya se mil sakte hai.

Kar- Haan aap dono ko aisi jagah lekar jaa Rahe hai waha par Jo balcony hai wo sidha di ki balcony se attached hai, di ka Jo room hai ussi room me ek darwaja hai wo attached hai store room se aap ka Jo room wo bhi attached hai USS store room se, ab baat ye hai ke USS store room ko koi balcony nahi aap teeno ko milna hoga toh store room ka door humein open karna hoga.

Neha- Key's?

Kar- mama ji ke paas AUR mamaji ka KHAS hai Mani so hum door open Karne ka tarika soch na hoga.

Ram- ye baat tu ab baata Raha hai pehle Bolta toh Mai master key ya kuch toh lekar aata.

Neha- chup karo Mai dekhti Hun.

They reached the room, Neha admiring the lock n asked for safety pin.

Aayesh give the safety pin.

Ram- issey ye lock khulne Wala hai.

Neha- tu chup karega, negative insan.

Ram- tu chor hai Kya.

Neha try safety pin for unlocking the door but not successful.

Neha- wire ya koi bhi aisi chiz Jo taar jaisi ho.

Kartik give a wire, she again started her work.

Ram- Neha aise nahi khulega.

Neha- chup karo n she smile.

Neha- yes done it.

Ram- what! Khul gaya.

Neha- Haan n she open the door.

Ram- tu chor thi Kya! Past me.

Neha- aayesha mujhe Priya ke room me lekar chalo waha ka bhi door open karte hai.

Aaye- Haan chalo, Bhai aap ye door close karo hum yaha se milte hai lekin bahar waha se aayenge.

Kar- Haan shuk nahi hoga.

Aayesha & Neha went to priya's room.

Aayesha knock the door, Priya open it same time Mani also came there and asked to aayesha.

Mani-issye tum yaha par kiu lekar aayi ho.

Aaye- ruksana ko mehndi nikalne ke liye bulya hai.

Mani- ruksana toh tumhari frnd hai na.

Neha in mind- ye gadha har baar kiu aata hai issye kuch kam nahi hai n she mentally punch him.

Aaye- meri frnd hai toh mehndi nahi nikal Sakti.

Mani- thik hai, thik hai Priya yaha se Kahi mat Jaana.

Priya- bilkul nahi Mani subhe se yahi par Hun tum Jaao yaha se.

Mani-thik se baat karo mujhse, pati Hun tumhara.

Priya- hone wale, huye nahi Abhi tak.

Mani- 2 din, 2 din Baad toh ho jaaunga n he went from there.

Aayesha lock the door.

Priya- Mai koi mehndi nahi lagne wali, tu BHI jaanti hai Mai kitni excited Hun ye shaadi naa ho iss liye.

Aaye- di relax n she to neha- aap Jaao aapka kam karo.

Priya don't know about that ram & Neha already reached there.

Priya to aayesha- Neha AUR ram aaye, koi call ya msg.

Aaye- di di hold on for some time Unka kam hone do phir batati Hun.

Priya- Kon hai aur Kya Karne aayi hai.

Aaye- door open Karne aayi hai.

Priya- kiu... Key's mama ji ke paas honge.

Aaye- di it's home not class chup karo 2mins aur Kisi ko bhi mat bolo ye baat.

Priya only look there what she doing with lock.

Neha done her work, didn't say anything n went from there.

Aaye- Mai bhi jaati Hun, aapka door lock kar Dena koi bhi aaye toh bhi door open mat karna.

Priya- wahi kar na hai mujhe, sab chodke yahi kar Rahi Hun and she closed the door.

Here ram stand in store room, Neha & aayesha came there.

Neha- ho gaya chalo.

Ram again question her- kaha se sikha lock open karna.

Neha- mere ek uncle hai wo ye sab kam karte hai.

Ram- chor hai.

Neha- nahi he is detective, toh ye sab aata hai.

Priya in her room listen some noise from behind the door- Kya awaz aa Rahi hai & she put her ear on door.

And same time ram push the door, door accidentally hit on priya's leg and forehead n and she wincing in pain.

Priya in pain- Kon gadha hai, samjh nahi aata door push Karne se pehle dekhe.

Ram- so...Sorry n he go to touch her forehead.

Priya- don't touch & who they are.

Neha side her burkha- pagal hai Kya kiu aayi darwaje ke paas.

Priya- Neha tu... toh Kon...

Ram- ram itne jaldi bhul gayi.

Priya forgot her pain n she hug him all are surprised about her reaction.

Priya- how much you take time, 2 din se wait kar Rahi Hun kitna tension aa Raha tha, 2 din paglon ki Tarah iss room me baith kar Maine mera future USS gadhe Mani ke Saath dekha but now I can vanished that future.

Ram also hug her back- relax jab tak Mai Hun aisa kuch nahi hoga.

Priya- you can't believe I m almost thinking that mere Jo pote-potiya honge wo USS Mani ko dadaji bolenge tumhe nahi.

Ram- bas...Bas...Ab shant ho Jaao we two here for you, Mani se shaadi nahi hogi, n Priya broke the hug.

Ram- you relax with Neha, tension mat lo Mai Jara sab kuch yaha ka mohol dekhta Hun OK.

Priya eyes full of tears- hmmm n she nodded in yes.

Ram wiped her tears- yaar ab roo mat.

Priya- hmmm, ram, kartik & Ayesha went from there.

Neha look at her angry n go to slap her, Priya closed her eyes.

Neha only put her palm on her cheek- proposed Kiya tumne ram ko AUR usse pata hi nahi hai.

Priya defence him- wo tension me hai.

Neha- accha ji! Pote-potiya tak baat pocha di hai tune.

Priya- ram se pyar Karti Hun usske Saath hi future dekha hai toh yahi hoga.

Neha- baata nahi Sakti thi ussi raat.

Priya- tu panic ho jaati.

Neha- jaise ke dusre din subhe uthkar Maine party ki.

Priya- Vik kaha par hai.

Neha- Mumbai me.

Priya- kiu?

Neha- fraud ka proof dhundne.

Priya got another shock- proof Abhi tak nahi Mila.

Neha- nahi.

Priya- 2 din Baad shaadi hai usse gadhe ke Saath.

Neha- Haan toh.

Priya- Neha shaadi hai.

Neha- usski shaadi hai Teri thodi aur Mumbai se sasural wale aa Rahe hai tu tension mat le.

Priya- agar aisa nahi hua toh.

Neha- tu agar-magar chod tu bas ram ke sapne dekh.

Priya only nodded.

Ram on call.

Vik- Kal tak sab kuch ready hoga lekin humein waha par aate aate shaadi ka time ho jaayega.

Ram- jaldi nahi aa sakte.

Vik- ram proof Kal Shaam tak mileage, bank se lekar saare, issye humare case majbut hoga aur Mani lambe samay ke liye jaayega.

Ram- dekh aaj raat sangit & mehndi hai, parso subhe haldi Shaam ko shaadi.

Vik- hum waha par parso tak aa Rahe hai AUR waise bhi yaha se Commissioner ne waha ke Commissioner se baat ki hai unnhe bhi saare proof ki copies chahiye toh.

Ram- tu toh Mani se Mila hai na, phir ussne kaise nahi pehechana.

Vik- I was not shaved and you know that very well how I m look with beard.

Ram- AUR wo sach me gadha hai, tujhe pehchan nahi paya.

Vik- Haan tu pehchanta hai wo bahot hai.

Ram- hmmm.

Vik- Priya se baat ki hai ya nahi.

Ram- Mila bhi AUR Khush Hun wo thik hai, bas ab shaadi rokne ki tyari tu kar Raha hai, tere aane tak sab handle karna hai.

Vik- Priya ko bola, pyar karta hai.

Ram- nahi bola abhi tak, but I m nervous, bolunga tab Kya reaction hoga mujhe pata hai Priya ki taraf se Haan hoga.

Vik- hmmm chal ab rakhta Hun, TC bye.




Continue soon.
Edited by Arpipatil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice...progressing well
Pls continue soon

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