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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh poor RaYa
They so close but still apart
Mani is one hell a jerk behind Priya and Shipra is no less without talking to her daughter or searching for my solution has said yes for their marriage. Hope Ram sab tik karde.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Uff... ye mani ki toh... shipra bhi naa...
Hope priya accepts ram's help... and they confess their feelings to each other...
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb part...
vikneha conversation and damki is superb..
neha is determined to complete their love story...
hope priya share her problem with ram...
contd soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear..
Nice update.
So again Neha the saviour is at work.. :)
Bechara vik ...lol
Neh-vik convo was fun.

Priya thinking about who the girl could be, hope she knows soon that its her,who ram loves.

Mani planned for sagai so soon..argghhh..priya's helplessness is known and the flashback too says same though she wanted to get out of it.
Hope she dicuss the problem with ram on their next meet or ram himself knows about that and do something.
Good flow.

Thanks for the pm dear..:)

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Posted: 8 years ago


it's really nice to see Priya get possessive abt Ram awww she now wants to find out who is the girl of Ram so she will see the mirror soon awesome... poor Ben want to help RaYa but can't do anything but I guess this will n only boot her & Vik lovrstory further so now can't wait to read next as I k ow Ram I not going to happen her sagai at any cost with Mani so exited to watch up actually he stops it so do post next soon...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 10


Priya in heart- ram se baat karu iss baare me, again her mobile ring caller I'd show Mani she pick up.

Mani- pata laga liya kya humari next Sunday sagai hai.

Priya- haan.

Mani- toh tum mil rahi ho mujhe aaj shaam ko.

Priya- sorry Mani mai tumhe aaj nahi mil sakti kuch jaruri kam hai usse sagai se pehle pura Karna hai.

Mani- phir ring.

Priya- tumhe Jo pasand aaye wo kharidna.

Mani- tumhari pasand bhi toh jaruri hai.

Priya in heart- meri pasand itni bhi gayi gujri nahi hai aur meri pasand toh tum rehne hi do meri majburi ka fayda utha raha hai.

Priya to mani- koi zarurat nahi hai, mere class ka waqt ho gaya hai bye, and she cut the call n msg to ram "meet me at near class right 5:30pm".

Here at cafe, vik meet to neha.

Vik- kiu bulaya hai kuch kam hai.

Neha- bahot important kam hai.

Vik- konsa?

Neha- promise me tum he baat kisi se nahi kahoge.

Vik- OK bolo.

Neha- ram priya se pyar karta hai.

Vik- ye baat mujhe pata hai naya kya hai.

Neha- ye baat mujhe pata hai.

Vik- yahi baat mujhe ram ne baatayi hai.

Neha- lekin breaking baat mujhe pata hai.

Vik- kya?

Neha- priya bhi ram se pyar karti hai.

Vik shocked & little in high pitch- what? Are you serious.

Neha nodded in yes.

Vik- ohhh my god! Ye baat toh ram KO pata chalni chahiye.

Neha- yahi toh nahi ho Sakta.

Vik- kiu?

Neha- kiu ki tumhe promise kiya hai ye baat tum kisi ko nahi bologe.

Vik- ram KO toh baata deta hun.

Neha- kuch nahi ho sakta jab tak Mani priya ki life se nahi jaata tab tak toh sab kuch fail hai.

Vik- lekin ram KO toh bolte hai priya usse pyar karti hai.

Neha- agar ram excitement me aakar priya KO bolega aur priya naa bolegi toh.

Vik- haan u are right! Iss mani KO toh na.

Neha- right iss Mani ka hi kuch Karna hoga.

Vik- USS ke upar toh kam chalu hai lekin ek document ki wajah se sab ruka hai wo milega toh wo raastein se hatt jaayega aur priya ka ghar priya KO mil jaayega.

Neha- matlab.

Vik- MATLAB ye ki Mani ram ke mumbai branch me kam karta hai aur bahot se aise fraud kiya hai jise company ka khaas karke Mumbai branch ka bahot jaad loss hai aur wo sab karne ke piche Mani hai Jo priya ke ghar ka loan iss be paid kiya hai wo company ke paise hai aur inn sab se badi baat ye sab kuch wo kar raha hai isska proof milna mushkil hai lekin naamumkin nahi hai.

Neha- lekin Mani KO fraud case me hum usse fasa sakte hai na.

Vik- fasa sakte hai lekin wo bail par chut sakta hai iss liye sab kuch ruka hai aur isske piche mai aur ram lage hai.

Neha- abhi se mai tum dono ke saath.

Vik- ek baat puch sakta hun.

Neha- bolo?

Vik- tumhe ye pata hai ram priya se pyar karta hai ye baat tumne priya KO nahi batai.

Neha- tension hi usska picha nahi chodta toh kaha se baataungi.

Vik- everything will be fine very soon n put his hand on her.

At car ram waiting for priya, she msg him 5:30, she will free from all work, now it's 6:45pm, priya came n say sorry.

Ram- 5:30! N he show her watch, 6:45 seriously priya.

Priya- bacchon ki kuch query thi.

Ram- Query! I can understand u are "the teacher" lekin yaar it's Sunday aur aj ka pura din tum aur neha Mere saath spent karne wali thi lekin tum subhe se student ke piche hunter lekar padi ho.

Priya- can I kneel down now like u wanted give me punishment, I can do, u wanted.

Ram- ohhh meri Maa yaha par Jo log hai na wo mujhe pakad-pakad kar marnge.

Priya- toh chalo na ab.

Ram- haan chalo, n they both seat in car.

Ram asked- kaha jaana hai.

Priya- pehle toh aapni wali jagh jaaha par mai kuch 10 saal baad jaaungi, phir humari fav place jaa kar bahot saare parathe khaane hai.

Ram in mid- makhan ke saath.

Priya- haan aur kulffi.

Ram- ahhh my fav.

Priya- aur phir beach par taare gine ka maan hai.

Ram- arrye wah abhi tak ye shauk khatam nahi hua.

Priya- shauk nahi bolte usse hobby bolte hai.

Ram- tumhe agar koi taaro se bhara ghar gift kare toh tum pura time wahi taare ginne ka kam khatam karogi na.

Priya- wow I started imagine about Star's home.

Ram- tum students ke samne ye wali pagalpanti toh nahi karti na.

Priya- ram mai pagal toh tu paglon ka raja.

Ram- wo toh hun.

Priya- waise Teri GF kya karti hai.

Ram- kon GF?

Priya- wahi Jo neha bol rahi thi.

Ram- meri koi GF nahi hai.

Priya- ram jhoot mat bol yaar mere samne.

Ram- jhoot nahi bol raha hun.

Priya- toh neha itni sure kaise thi.

Ram- she was pulled my leg.

Priya- tune neha KO kis laadki ke baare me bataya.

Ram- konsi bhi ladki ke baare me nahi baatya tu jaanti hai meri koi bhi ladki frnd hai hi nahi, most important I can't talk with any girl, sirf tu chodke.

Priya- aage jaa kar kaisa hoga tera, koi toh dhund shaadi nahi karni hai tujhe.

Ram- karni hai but koi tyar hi nahi hai.

Priya- koi dekhi bhi hai ya aise hi haww me baatein.

Ram- dekhi hai but I didn't know if she love me or not.

Priya- sidha puch Jo hoga wo dekha jaayega.

Ram- haan but u can't loss her also.

Priya- kaha par milli

Ram- ye bhi nahi bata sakta.

Priya- ram kuch toh bata na.

Ram- usse milwa dunga lekin abhi nahi.

Priya- toh kab.

Ram- waqt aane par.

Priya- waqt kab aayega.

Ram- don't know.

Priya- ek baat bolni hai.

Ram- bolna.

Priya- ye Sunday toh gaya next Sunday meri...

Ram- kya Teri?

Priya- meri sagai hone wali hai.

Ram- ohh kis ke saath.

Priya- ram!.

Ram- sagai is not important to you I know that toh jaada soch mat.

Priya- tujhe bura nahi laga meri sagai hone wali hai ye baat sunkar.

Ram- bura kiu lagne wala hai, kiu ki Teri sagai nahi hone wali hai aur honi hai toh usa Mani se toh hone nahi dunga.

Priya- how do you know about Mani?

Ram- bas pata hai.

Priya- ram kya karne wale ho.

Ram- uss fraud ke saath toh Teri shaadi hone nahi Dene wala.

Priya- tu karne kya wala hai.

Ram- jo kuch bhi karunga Teri family aur life ke liye accha hoga.

Priya- matlab, aur tu aisa waisa kuch nahi karne wala hai.

Ram- mai karunga Priya tu nahi jaanti iss insan ne office me kitne saare ulte sidhe kam kiye hai, Teri sagai nahi hogi aur ghar bhi rahega bas kuch nahi hoga, plz trust me.

Priya- usske liye panipuri chahiye.

Ram smile n say- we both are talking on serious topic aur tujhe panipuri ki padi hai, aise kaise wo aa sakti hai.

Priya- tu jab bhi serious topic par baat karta hai na tab mujhe kuch kuch hota hai, aur mujhe na Teri baat par yakin hota hai tu jo bol raha hai wo sach hai aur sab kuch thik hone wala hai, issliye panipuri samne aa jati hai.

Ram smile- chal panipuri khate hai aur neha vik KO bhi bulate hai.

Priya- ok.


At jewelry shop, Mani select 2 rings n came out from shop n saw Priya eating panipuri with two strangers boys n one lady with enjoy.

Mani murmuring with self- Priya yaha par mujhe bola important kam, abhi call karta hun.

Priya's phn vibret she saw it n ignore it, mani again dialed her number but Priya ignore his call.

Mani- an dekho Priya mai kya karta hun bahot call ignore karne ki aadat lagi hai na... Ab toh tum call uthane par majbur kar dunga n dialed shipra's number.


Vik to priya- tumhari dost hi aise behave karegi toh koi bhi yahi Sochega na.

Ram- koi bhi nahi sochega wo to tu hai jo aisa sochta hai.n hi-fi with neha started laughing.

Vik- ha ha ha bahot haasi aa rahi hai Tujhe.

Ram- can we go for dinner.

Priya- are u serious itne jaldi.

Ram- ohhh maate 1:30 hour without any survival, I m waiting for you.

Priya- hum abhi yaha par khade rehekar pani puri khaa rahe hai.

Ram- haan toh mai khaate pite ghar ka insan hun.

Priya- ye insan har baar bich me kaise aa sakta hai.

Vik- oye oye tum dono start mat ho, ho Gaye toh 3rd war start hoga.


At night Priya reading a book n told neha about engagement.

Neha- arrye so aise kaise kar sakta hai kya samjhta hai aapne aapko, tumhare ghar me papers hai isska matlab ye nahi ke wo sab kuch jit gaya.

Priya- relax neha aisa kuch nahi hone wala.

Neha- Priya tu pagal hai kya next Sunday wo tujhse sagai karne wala hai aur tu mujhe relax hone bol rahi hai.

Priya- tujhe meri baat par vishwas hai.

Neha- bilkul bhi nahi.

Priya- very good issey bolte hai dosti.

Neha- agar ye joke hai toh bahot bakwas joke hai.

Priya- tujhe mujh par vishwas nahi hai lekin mujhe ram par vishwas hai, so chilax, neha came n catch some sleep.

Neha- Priya tera dimag toh thik hai n she look priya's phn indicates shipra's name.

Neha- Maa ka call hai n she gave her phn.

Priya pickup n she got another shocked and she didn't show to neha n sleep.


Next day, neha woke up n found priya's side empty she called her thinking about that she is may be at kitchen but no response, she knocked the door of bathroom but that also empty.


Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update but hope ram will save priya from marrying that mani n waiting for next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear..
Nice update..
Neh-Vik meet was successful..both revealed to each other what they know about Raya and now i hope they will be able to help raya on need..

Priya came late and ram waited, poor ram :) but your ram is sweet,so no nokjhok for coming late.. :)

Priya too told ram what her state is,thts good and before she tells he himself knows it and she trusts him completely ,awww and so mind relaxed and she wanted panipuri...lol.. its my fav one too.:

She tried to know who ram's gf is..but ram didnt give a chance to know..
She asking him,are you not worried about my engagement..hmm..inside her,she wants him to react..
But our ram babu knows tht engagement wont happen,so why tension and why reaction..lol..

Priya ignored ashwin today but tht crook planned something else through shipra..

Neha worried for priya but priya relaxed due to ram ..
But finally she missing in morning ...wht ashwin and shipra upto..
Waiting to know all this...


Thanks for the pm..:)



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Posted: 8 years ago
So nyc update di...Pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Priya kaha chali gayi? hope she is safe. uss gadhe Mani se Priya KO bachao.
thanks for pm. pl continue

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