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Posted: 9 years ago
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pihu ne mast sunaya ram KO. good one. pl continue thanks for pm
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Part 11

Pee- i hope so maa!

Priya give her smile- chal ab coffee jaldi khatam kar mai kitchen mai jaati hun, priya take to kitchen, nuts presents there.

Nuts- what she say.

Priya- i thik, i need to go.

Nuts- where?

Priya- Mumbai!

Nuts little shocked- what! Are u serious.

Priya- haan peehu ke liye, wo bolegi nahi lekin peehu ki baataon se pata chal raha hai, she missed her father.

Nuts- aap pe Jo gayi hai.

Priya Denial- chup kar kuch bhi mat bol.

Nut take her hand on her shoulder- priya ab sab chod de yaar, Jo hua soo hua, galat naa tula thi naa ram bhai wo waqt galat tha, tab ki situation aisi thi iss liye bhai ne wo step liya aur aapne uss step ko galat samjha aur bhai ne aapko galat samjha kiu ki aapne unnke saath naa jaane ka faisla kiya. Priya little lose her hopes and said- now what should i do.

Nuts- now should do first thing, go to Mumbai and talk with bhai, not like husband wife, like mother and father of peehu.

Priya nodded in yes.

Nuts- most important no EGO.

Priya- mujhe me ego nahi, tere bhai me hai.

Nuts- har ek kapoor me ego bhara pada hai aur aap bhi kapoor's me shaamil ho.

Priya going to say something but nuts stop her- kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai hai usse soch samjh ke karna hai, hum yaha par sab kuch sambhal lenge don't worry aap bas second chance ke baare me socho, go and success the mission.

Priya- what mission!

Nuts in little hurry- i mean to say k don't angry or argument.

Priya- ok meri maa lekin peehu.

Nuts- hum hai sab, ab jaldi nikilye aur kam pura kar ke aayie.

Priya- yupe, priya went to Mumbai, talked with ram.

Nuts came with full plate of meal in peehu's room.

Pee- hey buzzi aap kiu aayi yaha par dinner lekar mai aa jaati sab ke saath dinner ke liye.

Nuts little excited- mission successful.

Pee- what really.

Nuts- haan, wo kya hai na teri maa tujhe sad nahi dekh sakti aur tere papa aur mera bhai tere liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai, itna toh one month me pata chala "wo sab meri wajah se hua hai", and one guy came to her room and seat on bed.

Pee- aise hi haaw me tir naa chala, tir galat jagah lag sakta hai. "peehu" and he making sad face.

Pee- khush ko na khush wala expression cute lagta hai naa ke sad wala.

Khush- waise Ram mama ka expression dekhne laayak tha jab mai tujhe milne waha aaya tha, awesome wo expression kabhi bhul nahi sakta.

Peehu little anger- how rude khush tujhe majja aa raha hai waha 100 sawal puche the.

Khush & nuts started laughing.

Next scene stared to Mumbai, at ram's place.

Priya entered in and saw ram's interview is there, ram saw priya on entrance and he stop his interview and he few instructed to vikram n vikram came near her and say- hi, i m vikram, ram's frnd come PA.

Priya- hi, i m..

Vikram cut her middle- priya kapoor, ram's wife n peehu's mother n smile.

Priya- peehu ke maamu aur co-partner.

Vikram- ji haan plz came ram thodi Der me aapko milne aa raha hai, wo thoda interview me busy hai.

Priya- ok and she go with vikram he show her sofa, she seat and wait for ram.

After an hour ram came there.

Ram directly asked her- agar tum mujhe peehu ki shaadi ke liye invite karne aayi ho toh mai same time priya cut him middle.

Priya- nahi aage wale hai, mujhe pata hai mai yaha peehu ke papa ram kapoor ko bulane aayi thi, naa ke mere pati ram kapoor se, wo bacchi jab se yaha se ghar gayi hai tab se chup chap si rehen lagi hai, 4 din baad shaadi hai, wo chahti hai k aap aur mai usska kanyaddan kare.

Ram- shaadi fix karte samay ye yaad nahi aaya peehu ka papa bhi hai.

Priya cut him middle- i was called you, you cut my all calls always, toh kya karti, aapko humesha ek sujhta hai, priya ne call kiya hai ek hi baat bolne k liye, ek hi topic par argue karne, Mr.kapoor beti baadi hui hai, usske liye toh ye sab chod dijiye wo aj tak humari wajah se akeli hai, i know mai galat thi uss waqt aur aap bhi, hum dono ne choti se baat ko baada bana diya inn sab me hum dono me se kisi ne bhi peehu ke baare me nahi socha.

Ram- Maine socha tha.

Priya- kya socha tha apne, divorce lete hai peehu ki custody aapke paas rahe, ram sab galat kiya hai hum dono ne.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.
Today ek aur update mill Sakthi Kay?
I want more of Priya and Ram.
Waiting eagerly and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So plan has been accomplished by Peehu and company. Priya is at Mumbai to meet Ram and seems they will resolve their issue fro the happiness for their daughter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice...
pls next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aila..itka chotusa update ka? motha wala de na. pihu ka mission successful. wow. thanks for on. pl continue
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Part 12

Ram- toh ab kya karna chahiye sab bhulakar ek hona chahiye.

Priya- peehu ke sab bhula dete hai, usse weeding gift dete hai, usski shaadi tak to hum dono ek ho jaate hai, on her day plz ram.

Ram didn't say anything for sometime.

After 15-20 minutes he open the mouth.

Ram- sirf peehu ki shaadi aur bidai hone tak usske baad tumhare aur mere raastein alag-alag.

Priya's eyes filed with tears- ok as u wish, thankyou ram.

Ram turned himself to her said- wo meri bhi and he stop mid way saw priya tears, priya quickly wipe the tears and said, priya- wo aapki bhi beti hai, thankyou for accepting that you will came for her special day and she turned to go for Delhi, she stared walking.

Ram stop her- priya, she stop n turned.

Priya- haan.

Ram- wo...raat bahot hui hai, kal subhe nikalna.

Priya- no thanks itna care and concern dikhane ki koi zarurat nahi hai thankyou and she leave the place.

Ram anger on himself n he kick to sofa and said- what the hell with me, shit! Priya sab solve karne aayi thi aur Maine sab kuch bigad diya, har baar galti hoti hai mujhse, kya zarurat thi alag raastein bolne ki..kiu karta hun mai aisa...tujhe bhi priya se itna hi pyar hai jitna priya, mujhse bhi jaada, meri fav.green colour ki Saree pehenkar and he closed his eyes n disappointment.

At hotel were priya stay.

Priya- kitna ego bhara pada hai aisa insan itna acha singer kaise ban sakta hai, bas uss baat ko lekar baitha hai jab dekho past-past, arrye Jo hua soo hua ab aage badhna chahiye, lekin nahi apna ego bada hai relation se bhi bada, aur mai bewkuf, idiot kaise pyar kar baithi 23 saal pehle thoda sa bhi dimag nahi tha, saare dimag me fat bhara pada hai, aane do shaadi me ek bhi word baat nahi karungi, raastein alag karte hai, fir itne saal kiu nahi kiye, Mai divorce paper sing kiu nahi kar rahi hai, nahi puchne aaye aur ab bol rahe hai raastein alag karte hai, itne saal to ek hi raastein par chal kiu rahe the, n she all said there walking here and there, same time knocked on door, she said coming.

At Delhi, peehu's mehendi function stared which is very small function like only family n friends, sam's family came there asked about priya.

Nuts- wo bhabhi ko aj urgently Mumbai kesariyo radio jockey jaana pada, wo unnke head ne unnhe call kar kesariyo bulaya to jaana pada.

Sam's mom- aise beti ki shaadi chod kar.

Nuts- wo nahi jaana chahti thi lekin she is head of Delhi toh.

Sam- its ok buzzi i know all these, aunty ne call kiya tha mujhe.

Nuts little confused and she looked at him, he assured her that he handle all these and he turned to his mother.

Sam- maa aunty was called me, ne nahi jaa rahi thi but i was forced her, that's why she go.

Sam's mother- lekin beta shaadi ka ghar hai, wo nahi hai toh acha nahi lagta upar se peehu ke papa bhi nahi rehete wo bhi kam se bahar rehete hai.

Sam- maa maa kitne sawal karti ho aap, shaadi ke din priya aunty aur peehu ke papa aa jaayenge, aap tension na lo itna and he take his mom with him.

at peehu's room she check her mobile minute by minute if that any msg bye vikram or priya, but no used, knocked on door.

One man came with gift box with lady she look from mirror reflection and give big smile.

Pee- vikram uncle and she go near him hugged him, vikram brocked the hugged.

Vik- you look so cute.

Neha- yes you look like princess today.

Pee- thankyou aunty.

Neha- lekin ye smile, wo wali smile nahi hai, wo wali smile kaha par hai Jo Mumbai me thi.

Pee little sad- maa abhi tak nahi aayi, papa ko lekar.

Vik in between- ram jarur aayega dekh lena, aur sab thik bhi hoga.

Neha- itne saal alag rahe hai, thoda waqt to lag jaayega na, so don't worry, they both came together for there princess marriage.

Pee little smile create on her face.

Vik- wo humesha wali smile de jaldi, chal an peehu give them big smile.

At airport, Delhi flight announcement, priya take flight to Delhi on her way with tearful eyes, she checked in n seat on her place.

Priya thinking- ego me sab kuch khatam hua, sab kuch peehu ki ye wish shayad puri nahi hogi, i m sorry peehu and she closed her eyes tears rolled down, peehu ne pucha toh mai kya jawab dungi, ke mai usske papa ko convene nahi kar payi, usski ye wish puri nahi kar payi, sab meri galti hai, meri wajah se ye sab hua, Maine uss waqt ram ki baat maani hoti toh aaj ye waqt nahi aata, she think all these and she draft to sleep.

at Delhi, mehendi function over, sam's maa didn't like that peehu's parents are not available for there daughter marriage function so she not happy n also not talking with pee like always she talked with her.

Flight landed at Delhi, air host go to woke up priya but one man stop her n he pick up priya in his arms.

At priya's home, all are silent.

Pee little shouted in frustration- koi toh call karo maa ko, subhe se mera dimag tension se fata jaa raha hai, koi toh call karo.

Khu- why r u shouting, all are normal person.

Pee take glass of juice n said- chup! Bilkul mazak nahi chal raha hai.

Nuts- pee relax yaar we all are also in tension.

Pee- rajat uncle kab ayege

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who's the man??"
As usual beautiful update but it is a cliffhanger.
Thanks for pm & waiting for next one .
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Beautiful update.
Thanks for pm.

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