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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
very nice
pls bring Priya as well
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Part 5
Such a drama queen is Peehu but every time she talks about her mother made her father speechless. But now in different situation RaYa met. Priya as RJ who is taking Ram interview

Part 6
The confrontation was came as outburst between RaYa. But in this also Priya has concern for Ram and Peehu came to know about their meeting but now who is this new boy Samar getting very friendly with her.

Part 7
Omg Peehu came here with some mission and it's still unknown to Ram but whom marriage Samar is talking with Peeehu. If she is missing her mom so she should tell her the real reason. Between now Ram is in some problem
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Part 8

Next scene, in police station, ram behind the jail, lady inspector is incharge there.

Vikram & peehu came in police station n saw ram in jail, he stand like guilty person.

Peehu little shouted- papa aap yaha par kaise poch gaye, mai aapko bol kar gayi thi aapki dawai laane gayi hun phir bhi mujhe dhundne nikal aaye, peehu turned to inspector- plz inspector ji mere papa ko chod dijiye.

Lady insp- nahi chod sakti.

Pee- mujhe pata hai mere papa ne galti ki hai, lekin mujhe ghar par pochte-pochte late hua iss liye wo mujhe dhundne nikale bahar.

Lady- late kiu hua.

Pee- wo mujhe bich raastein me kuch gunde milte the, meri ched nikal rahe the, unn dono me se ek itna lamba and she extend her hand to show the height of that gunda's, itna lamba tha aur Jo dusra tha usski aankhe itni laal thi k mai darr gayi lekin mujhe humari lady police kiran bedi ji yaad aayi, brave women ke baare me socha aur Maine unn gundon k saath ladai ki aur bhaghte bhaghte ghar pochi toh pata chala papa yaha par hai.

Lady- very good beta tum self defence jaanti ho, nahi toh aaj kal ki ladkiyan, self defence ka self bhi nahi aata.

Ram in between- excuse me! Inspector mai ek respected singer hun aapko mai 15 baar bol chuka hun, aapko samjh nahi aa raha hai.

Lady- tum chup karo aur beta ye baata tumhare papa sach me singer hai.

Peehu in hurry- nahi to wo actually papa na struggled singer the lekin jab se unnki umar hui hai tab se wo sab ko yahi bolte hai.

Ram- peehu jhoot mat bol, inspector mai sach me singer hun, ram kapoor naam hai mera.

Lady- ram kapoor aur tum, tum ho hi nahi sakte, kaha ram kapoor aur kaha par tum.

Lady to hawaldaar- issey bahar nikalo.

Ram came out from jail- dikhiye inspector mai sach me singer hun.

Pee- papa plz relax yaar don't think so much, hum ghar jaa kar dawai lenge.

Lady- kuch yaad nahi rehta hai to ghar se bahar aate kiu ho.

Ram in irritated- aap News channel nahi dekhte.

Lady- thik hai tum singer ho na.

Ram- haan hun toh.

Lady- yaha par abhi gaa kar sunnao.

Ram going to singing but he can't hiatus mind & heart not support his mouth.

Lady- kya hua nikal gayi haaw.

Ram- aisa kuch nahi hai yaha ka mahol theek nahi hai, iss wajah se gale se awaz nahi aa rahi hai.

Lady inspector little shouted- chup karo.

Peehu with soft tone- inspector aunty kuch penalty hai toh plz bata dijiye.

Lady- tu sab se brave ladki hai iss liye mai khud tumhare papa ko chod rahi hun.

Pee- thankyou maasi.

Lady inspector with soft tone- maasi !

Pee- haan maa jaisi ho aap iss liye maasi.

Inspector with emotional tone- tumhari jaisi ladkiyan iss duniya me aj bahot kum hai.

Pee- thankyou maasi, kya mai papa ko lekar jaa sakti hun.

Lady- haan, bilkul le jaa sakti ho.

Pee- thankyou maasi.

Inspector smile n peehu hold ram's hand and drag him with her.

At home.

Ram in angry tone- police station me sab kuch kya tha.

Pee- aapko chudane ka planning.

Ram- iss liye mujhe pagal banna diya.

Pee- papa wo maasi ne kaha tha gaane ke liye tab aapne kiu nahi gaya, aapki galti hai.

Ram- wo actually.

Pee- agar media me pata chalta aapne unknown person ki car ki back glass todi hai toh kya hota.

Ram gave irritate look her- ok ok.

Pee- can i go for sleep.

Ram- nahi pehle ye baata kaha par thi din bhar.

Pee- maa ke saath thi.

Ram- priya Mumbai aayi hai.

Pee- aayi thi, kuch kam ke liye.

Ram- ab kaha par hai.

Pee- Delhi chali gayi, papa aap ko kuch dikhana hai.

Ram- ab kya?

Pee- wo closed ur eyes.

Ram- lekin kiu.

Pee- karo na, with baby tone.

Ram closed his eyes.

Peehu hold his hand- chaliye mere saath.

Ram closing eyes- aankhe band karke kaha par chalu.

Pee- papa chalo n ram started walking with her, they both came to her bed room.

Pee- ab kholo aankhein.

Ram open his eyes n found one big pic of his, priya and peehu between them, which edited pic.

Ram little angry- ye kya bachpana hai peehu.

Pee- bachpana kya hai iss me, mere paas aapka aur maa ka pic tha lekin aap dono ka mere saath koi bhi pic nahi hai, iss liye pic banwa li, acchi hai naa, she said very innocent voice.

Ram- peehu its wrong.

Pee- aap dono ka ego right hai mera bachapan wrong hai, aap dono ne aaj tak aapne baare me socha hai, mere baare me kabhi soch hai, Nahi, mai nani se baat karti hun ye dikhta hai, lekin kiu karti hun ye kabhi pucha hai aap dono ne, mujhe pata hai Nani nahi hai phir bhi mai baat karti hun, kabhi kisi ne nahi pucha, aap dono sirf mujhe me ek dusre ko dekhte ho.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice update.
Where is Priya?
I need her badly.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Ye story ekulti ek ki haina
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mitwaa

Ye story ekulti ek ki haina
nice update



haan lekin usske kuch scene liye hai iss ss me usska end alag hai
coz of that my fav.movie

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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Omg it was funny when the lady inspector ask Ram to sing but he couldn't but overall Peehu is very much sad due to her parents separation.
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Part 9

Pee- aap dono ka ego wrong nahi hai, mera bachpana wrong hai, aap dono ne aaj tak sirf aapne baare me socha hai, mere baare me kabhi socha hai aapne, nahi! Mai nani se baat karti hun ye dikhta hai, mujhe pata hai wo nahi hai phir bhi mai baat karti hun, ye aap dono me se kabhi kisi ne pucha nahi, aap dono sirf mujhe me ek dusre ko dekhte ho, jab aap maa ko chodke yaha par aaye tab maa mujhe me aapko dhundti aayi hai, mai yaha par aayi aap ko jaane ke liye toh aap maa ko mujh me dhund rehe ho, lekin aap dono ne ek baar bhi ye nahi pucha, peehu beta tu kya chahti hai tu kiu nani nahi hote huey bhi aisi baat karti hai, kabhi pucha hai, nahi! Kiu ki mai akeli hun, mere dil ki baat sunne ke liye naa aap ho naa maa, aap dono ek dusre ke... Aap mujhe uss din maa ke baare me puch rahe the na maa kaisi hai, toh uss ka jawab ye hai, wo aaj tak wahi ruki hai jaha par aap ho, lekin aap dono ye bhul gaye ke aapki ek beti hai and her voice choked, she controlled her self n said ram only look at her.

Peehu continue- uss din jab aapke paas ek hugged ki demand ki thi, a father hugged, which was full of love and emotions but you only give me a formal hugged, papa aap dono ke ek galat decision ki wajah se hum teeno ki life me itni duriyan aayi hai ki hum teeno thik se communicate nahi kar sakte aap dono sirf aapne ego dekha mere baare me ek baar bhi nahi socha, papa jab mai pehli baar yaha par aayi tab mujhe aisa laga aap khush honge, mujhe gale lagayenge lekin yaha par aakar pata chala, mai yaha par aane ki khushi aapko thi hi nahi aap ko sirf itna pata tha, peehu aapni maa ki permission lekar aayi hai ya nahi, and she can't controlled her self n she go to her room.

Ram also in tears n feeling bad.

Peehu in room, seat on bed crying badly, ram came there n saw her in tears n he came near her n seat beside her n said.

Ram- don't cry peehu, i m sorry for that, tumhe tumhari haq wali hugged chahiye thi n he hugged her with love n emotions which is nothing formal to her the hugged is father hugged.

Ram- i m sorry for what i did i m sorry, mera decision bhi galat tha, uss time sirf mere sapne ke baare me socha aur ye sab tumhe hum dono ki galti ki wajah se ye sab hua, we both are sorry n he hold his ear.

Peehu looked at him n nodded in no and hugged him tight.

Next morning ram in kitchen making breakfast for them both.

Ram calling peehu- peehu jaldi neeche aa beta, bhukh nahi lagi hai kya, peehu didn't response him.

Ram- kya ladki hai, breakfast thanda hua toh fir se bolegi and he again called her.

Ram- peehu jaldi neeche aa beta.

Peehu came on stairs with her bags n other stuffs, ram looked at her n asked.

Ram- aaj koi audition nahi jaa rahi hai tu aur mai bhi koi recording k liye nahi jaa raha hun hum dono aaj nahi pure 7days k liye har ek kam se leave lene wale hai aur mai tumhe khud aaj ghumane lekar jaaunga aur usske baad shopping then lunch aur dinner bahar wo bhi teri pasand ka chal ab ye sab rakh aur jaldi table par breakfast karne.

Pee- papa mai jaa rahi hun, 4 din baad meri shaadi hai.

Part 10

Pee- papa mai jaa rahi hun, 4 din baad meri shaadi hai, samar mera hone wala pati hai, mai yaha par papa ka pyar kya hota hai ye jaanane ke liye aayi thi, maa ne mujhe kaha tha aap bahot acche ho, lekin mujhe nahi pata tha, maa sach bol rahi Maine humesha aapko galat samjha, maa was right that you are most precious gift for her, i m sorry papa i was wrong about u.

Ram- ye sab ab kiu bol rahi ho tum.

Pee- wo iss liye kiu ki mai Delhi jaa rahi hun, 4 din baad meri shaadi hai aur aapko meri shaadi me aana hai.

Ram- shaadi! Jis ladke se tum 15 din pehle mil ho usse 4 din baad shaadi hai, aisa kahi par hota hai kya, peehu cut him middle.

Pee- 6years hum dono dost the, baas dosti ki next level ko hum dono ne shaadi ka naam diya.

Ram- ok, tumhe Jo ladka pasand hai tumhe Jo pasand hai usse shaadi karo lekin plz yaha se mat jaao plz.

Pee- papa mujhe jaana hoga, sab mera wait kar rahe waha.

Ram- ok..ok.. Mai sab ko yaha par bula leta hun, jaisi tumhe shaadi waha par arrange ki hai waisi hi yaha par karta hun, lekin tum plz yaha se mat jaao plz beta n he had in tears.

Peehu also in tears- papa mujhe jaana hoga.

Ram- tum chahti ho na mai aapna ego chodke priya ke saath rahu, hum dono ek saath rahe, i promise hum dono ek saath rahenge lekin tum mat jaao yaha se.

Peehu nodded in no- i m sorry.

Ram- peehu plz priya jaisi baat mat karo.

Pee- agar ho sake to meri shaadi me jarur aana, mai aapka intzaar karungi, mera kanyadaan kartik mamu aur nuts buzzi karne wale hai, mai chahti hun ke aap dono mera kanyaddan kare and she manage to smile.

Ram- plz mat jaao yaha se peehu mai kya karunga yaha par akela.

Pee- bye papa, n she stared to walking and same time vikram entered.

Ram go near vikram and said- vikram tu baata na issey yaha par hi rahe, issey jaise aapni shaadi karni hai, kisi se bhi kare lekin yahi par ruke.

Vik- mai aisa kuch nahi kar sakta.

Ram- kuch nahi kar sakta matlab, peehu jaa rahi hai yaha se humesha-humesha ke liye.

Vik- mujhe pata hai, wo yaha par sirf tera pyar paane ke liye aayi thi, 4 din baad peehu ki shaadi hai aur yeh baat mujhe peehu ne jis din aayi ussi shaam ko mujhe baatai. Ram didn't said anything, peehu turned her self and say to vikram.

Pee- thankyou vikram uncle and thankyou for everything and smile.

Vik- your most welcome and miss you so much beta.

Pee- shaadi ke liye jarur aana, n she again started walking.

Ram wiped his tears and said- thik hai tujhe Jo karna hai kar lekin ek baat yaad rakhna agar tu issey drwaje se bahar gayi toh phir se wapas lut kar mat aana, n he turned him self to wall.

Peehu to vik- uncle papa ka khayal rakhna n she give him tear full smile n weav her hand to bye.

Vikram also give her smile n thumb up to her, she went to her way.

At Delhi, door bell ring, priya open the door, she got a surprise to peehu came to home.

Priya- peehu and she give her big smile.

Peehu look at priya and give only small smile & give hugged to her.

Priya- itna miss kiya.

Peehu still in her hugged- haan.

Priya- aandar nahi aana hai yahi par huggi kar ke baat karni hai.

Peehu brock the hugged and she wipped her silent tears.

Priya asked her- kya hua.

Pee- kuch nahi maa bas i was missed you so much.

Priya- hmm chal aandar.

After 4-5 hours peehu seat in lobby, alone with little sad face, nuts came and saw her little far away from her, and she go to kitchen and asked to priya.

Nuts- peehu thik toh hai na.

Priya- pata hai thik nahi hai.

Nuts- baat ki aapne.

Priya- thodi Der baad karti hun, abhi puchungi toh nahi baatayegi toh.

Nuts- priya peehu ko bola tha na bhai ko invitation dene k liye.

Priya- peehu ne bola hoga, shayad ram ne maana kiya hoga toh.

Nuts- ye bhi ho sakta hai, aayi hai tab se shant-shant hai.

Priya- haa i will talk with her, she needs me, jab aakar tight wala hugged kiya tabhi pata chala.

Nuts- hmm.

Priya go with with 2mug coffee with nut chocolate.

Priya- good evening princess.

Peehu take try from her hands and said- good evening.

Priya- 4din baad shaadi hai tumhari shaadi naa karne ka irada hai kya.

Pee- maa aisi baat hai.

Priya- phir kaisi baat hai.

Pee- papa ko baatya meri shaadi hai 4din baad, wo bol rahe the shaadi Mumbai me karte hai, jaise mai chahungi waise.

Priya- haan toh.

Pee- Maine maana kar diya aur mai waha se nikal rahi thi tab..and she narrated all the incidence to her.

Priya after all listen- ram ne aisa kaha.

Pee- haan maa, wo bahot jaada upset huey meri baat se n i think he will not attend my marriage.

Priya take her hand n she assuring to her- ram jarur aayenge mai ram ko jaanti hun hum dono mai kitni bhi galat-faymi kiu naa ho wo tumhare liye jarur aayenge.

Pee- i hope so maa.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update.
When couples fight this is what happens with the children. Hope they reunite soon.
Thanks for pm and continue soon.
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Part 9
Very emotional confrontation between father and daughter but wat a twist Ram didn't know that Peehu is getting married.

Part 10
Emotional one Daughter is parting away from her father and joining back her mother. Ram Priya still love each other but their ego made them always stop to go ahead.

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