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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg Ram again created a mess Priya wanna be with him so that they can start a refresh for their daughter Peehu and in delhi all are waiting for them
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Part 13

Pee- rajat uncle kab aayenge.

Nuts- aj aayega infact aa bhi gaya hoga.

Pee- ab wahi ek insan hai Jo ye sab sort kar sakte hai, aap sab kuch kam ke nahi hai.

Khush- hwww kitna jhoot bolti hai and door bell ring, peehu went to open the door n find priya in his arms, she shocked to see, priya in his arms, she go to asked.

Men- don't say anything, show me her room.

Peehu still in shocked- haan n she direct him, he entered in house with priya, all are shocked to see all these, he go to room.

Nuts- ra... Ye kya tha.

Khush- priya mami thik toh hai na, aise uthakar lekar aana its tension wali baat.

Kartik- mai puchkar aata hun.

Nuts- koi zarurat nahi hai, kal subhe puch lena, little shouted on kartik.

Next morning all are woke up little early, to know the last night incidence, priya came out of her room n shocked to see all are woke up early before her, she greet to all n asked.

Priya- peehu ko jaldi bhejh ki jaldi hai kya aur sab se badi baat mai ghar kaise puchi.

All are saw her n gave same expression to her n there mouth- aaahhh.

Priya- kya hua sab ko kuch toh bolo, kon lekar aaya mujhe, aate samay, i was taking sleeping pills that's why i was in deep sleep.

"mai lekar aaya, koi problem hai tumhe" he said.

She turned herself n saw him little shocked to see him.

He- yeh gaandi aadat kab se lagi tumhe.

Priya- aap se matlab.

"pati hun tumhara" ram said.

Priya- toh! Aarti karu.

Ram- haan karo itne saal baad aaya hun, toh aarti baanti hai, kiu peehu.

Peehu in shocked.

Priya turned to peehu- haan ya naa me jawab diya toh yaad rakhna, mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Peehu in little voice to nuts- mai toh kuch boli bhi nahi.

Nuts to pee- ya baat karne ka tarika hai, ab humein ye pata karna hai inn dono me se galat kon hai, kis ne pehle ye shurwat ki hai.

Pee- wo kaise pata chalega.

Nuts- agar bhai ne waha se n she indicate to books shelf, book uthaya toh ye shurwat bhai ne ki hai.

Pee- how can you say sure.

Nuts- jab priya samne wale ki baat sunne bina kisi tisre ko daata deti hai toh samjh jaana chahiye ki, galti dusre insan ki hoti hai.

Peehu got confused n she only give same look.

Nuts- itna confused hone ki zarurat nahi hai, yaha par tere papa ki galti hai aur hum me se koi bich me naa aaye toh hi behetar hai.

Pee- wo kiu!

Nuts- shaadi ki date aage karni hai tujhe.

Pee- bilkul nahi.

Nuts- toh ekdum chup baith kar dekh, sab thik hoga.

Pee- agar inn dono ka jhagda badh gaya toh.

Nuts- pakka nahi badhega.

Pee- are you sure.

Khush between them- shurt laga lo.

Nuts- konsi.

Khush- jhagda badhega toh mujhe Rj ki job karne doge night shift wali.

Nuts- if you lose that mean i will not give you permission.

Khush to peehu- tu kis ki side par hai.

Pee- mai mere pati ki side par hun.

Nuts- shaadi huyi nahi toh tu parayi ho gayi.

Pee- very funny.

Priya go in kitchen for haldi ritual celebration start after some time, she doing work.

Ram came there n he doing there work like priya doing.

Same time on steel bowl slip from ram's hand, that bowl go to near priya's fit, she look at him n give him look.

Ram- kya aise kya dekh rahi ho.

Priya in see him same look.

Ram- non-vegetarian baane ka irada hai kya.

Priya- kapde change kijiye, ladke ke gharwale aate hi honge n she go from there with full of haldi bowl.

Ram- sidhe sorry nahi bol sakta, beti badi hui, usski shaadi hone jaa rahi hai aur tujhe sorry bolne nahi aata, kuch fayda nahi hai tera singer hoke, ek sorry nahi bol sakta.

At hall, haldi ceremony stared, all are busy in that, all are done there rituals.

Ram turn came, he came near n see peehu in full of haldi, he get little emotional to see peehu.

Pee- ohhh mere bhole papa one ki koi zarurat nahi hai, paas me hi mera sasural hai, waha par hi jaaungi toh no Rona-dhona, see mom ko kitni khushi ho rahi hai mujhe aise dekhkar.

Priya also emotional tone- chup kar! Thapad khaayegi.

Pee- aap kaise maa-papa ho yaar beti ab ek se doo hone jaa rahi hai aur aap dono ho ke emotional hote jaa rahe ho, its happy moment yaar, cheer up both of you plz.

Ram- pagal hai tu.

Pee- pata hai mujhe nani humesha bolti hai.

Ram signal to sky.

Peehu nodded in yes.

Pee in little voice- papa.

Ram- kya.

Pee- came near.

Ram- kiu.

Pee- sawal mat pucho.

Ram go near her.

Pee- maa ko jaldi sorry bol do abhi chance hai, nahi toh meri bidai ke baad, she will not give u any kind of chance.

Ram give her expression what.

Pee read it n said- mai aap ke saath hu, all the best.

Ram- thankyou, how can i say.

Priya saw these n asked.

Priya- kya chal raha hai.

Pee- kuch nahi.

Priya give look to ram what.

Ram also nodded in no.

At lunch time priya serve lunch to all, she search ram n peehu, she asked to nuts, she told her that they both are in peehu's room.

she go there and peep into her room, she listen there convo between ram n peehu.

Pee- how much u waiting to all, i know u are the singing star lekin mere papa bhi toh ho.

Ram- haan hun lekin mai upset tha tum se.

Pee- abhi bhi ho, in worried tone.

Ram- bilkul nahi.

Pee- aur mumma se.

Ram- bilkul nahi.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Nice update.
Waiting for a long time.
Kya aaj dusra update be milsakta hai?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice that it was not rajat!!! wow...thanks a lot...so rajat ki entry late hai...well i guess he will just be a jealous maker ;) hehe...next jaldi plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
hii
read all the parts
I like the story.
Actually I don't like big Pihu..I even cant imagine her but here in ur story she is positive so its OK...but still
Ram having a big ego.
I like Priya character...hope Raya will reunite soon
thanks for all the PMs
waiting for the next part

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 14

Ram- bilkul nahi.

Pee- meri baat ko naa nahi bol sakte iss liye aap aise bol rahe ho.

Ram- nahi peehu tum se mai jhoot nahi bol sakta, haan ye baat alag hai, priya aayi thi sab thik karne lekin mai gadha Jo ego lekar baith gaya aur ulti baat ki.

Pee- papa aap bhi na.

Ram- haan pata hai, mai bhi.

Pee- aap na abhi jaldi se sorry bol do, mere miss.kapoor se Mrs.kundra hone se pehle.

Ram- haan meri maa.

Peehu only smile.

Ram asked her- kya chahiye hai tumhe.

Pee- mujhe toh aap chahiye the meri shaadi me, Jo wish thi wo maa ne puri ki.

Ram- priya ka ho gaya, ab meri taraf se kya chahiye.

Peehu act like think- umm.

Ram- bolo bhi.

Pee- aap dono ek dusre ke saath humesha ke liye ek saath rahe aur kuch nahi.

Ram- ye toh jarur hoga phir aur kya chahiye.

Pee- pehle aap maa ke saath sulha karwa lo phir baata deti hun.

Ram- iss mamle par tum puri priya par gayi ho.

Pee- kya karu saare good habits maa ke hai.

Ram very innocently- haa wo toh hai n he again recognize her words n said.

Ram- it means saare baad habits mere hai tujh me.

Peehu started laughing, ram looks at her very sweetly n said.

Ram- itne saal tak ye sab Maine miss kiya, sorry peehu.

Pee- papa don't say sorry na waise bhi i m sorry too, aap se uss din rudely baat karne ke liye.

Ram- wo tera gussa tha, toh thik hai.

Pee- mumma ka gussa ka kya karoge aap.

Ram- aloo parathe.

Peehu confused- aloo parathe!

Ram- lunch me kya baana hai, wo dekhte hai, chal.

Pee- kuch accha hi hoga.

Ram- niche toh chal n priya listen there full convo n she hide herself from both.

Priya- toh ye sab chal raha hai inn baap-beti me, mai bhi dekhti hun mujhe kaise maante hai, kal tak ka waqt hai ram ke paas n she smile with tears.

At dining table, they both seat on there place, ram asked to nuts.

Ram- aloo parathe hai kya choti.

Nuts- aloo parathe?

Ram- pehli baar sunn rahi hai.

Nuts- humesha sunnti hun lekin shaadi ka ghar hai aur aap ko aloo parathe chahiye, kabhi kuch alag khaa lijiye.

Ram little serious tone n blink one eye to peehu- jitna pucha utna jawab do.

Nuts- gussa kiu kar rahe ho.

Peehu join to ram- mujhe bhi aloo parathe chahiye, n priya enter in dining hall.

Priya to pee- tujhe kab se aloo parathe pasand aane lage.

Pee- jab se papa ne aapke aloo parathe ki tarif ki hai tab se.

Priya go to say something but didn't found any word n she go to kitchen making parathe with little irritated, ram n peehu gave each other winning smile, nuts n khush notice these n asked.

Nuts- ye kya tha.

Khush- same question.

Ram to nuts- khaana khaa.

Peehu to khush- ek fight dungi kuch bola maa ko.

Nuts- hum dono bhi hai aap dono ki planning me.

Ram- koi zarurat nahi hai, we both handle.

Khush- peehu these not done you shared everything with me from childhood.

Peehu to ram- haan right papa.

Ram- peehu.

Nuts- bhai plz.

Ram- ok come.

Priya came with parathe n saw four of them talking in little voice.

Priya- kya chal raha hai.

All said in one tone- kuch bhi nahi.

Priya warn to all- aisa waisa kuch galat kiya toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Neha- priya mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.

Priya- haan bolo.

Neha- tum lunch kar lo phir.

Priya- thik hai.

All taking there lunch, after lunch neha take priya with her.

All are give suggestions to ram.

Nuts- flowers doo aur sorry bolo baat khatam.

Khush- mamu aap sidhe radio par jaa kar sorry bolo ekdum unique hai.

Vik- tu na letter likh de kam bann jaayega.

Neha- best way greeting.

Kar- na song, perfect.

Ram fed up- sab ekdum chup mai dekhta hun kaise sorry bol na hai.

Pee- kaise!

Ram- hum dono ke bich ki baat hai hum dono dekh lenge n he go towards priya's room.

At priya's room, she doing some packing n same time knocked on door, she didn't saw a back n said- koi bhi hai aandar aajao.

Ram came in n saw priya doing packing he asked- kidhar jaa rahi ho.

Priya listen ram's voice n turned n said- haan kal shaadi hone ke baad mujhe parso Mumbai ke liye nikal na hai.

Ram- Mumbai kaisi liye, kuch kam k liye.

Priya- nahi kisi ko sambhal na hai, nahi gayi toh galat hoga toh jaana jaruri hai.

Ram- kitne dino k liye jaa rahi ho.

Priya- humesha ke liye jaa rahi hun.

Ram- lekin.

Priya- kya lekin, beti ki shaadi hone ke baad yaha par akeli ho jaaungi issey accha hai Mumbai chali jaati hun aage ki life bitane.

Ram- lekin yaha par sab hai, nuts, kartik hai khush bhi toh hai.

Priya- haan lekin n she stop between.

Ram- lekin kya.

Priya- ab mujhe Mumbai ki Rj banan hai koi problem hai.

Ram- lekin mai n knocked on door.

Priya- darwaja khula hai aandar aao.

Khush enter like someone push him.

Priya- arrye dheere gir jaayega, kis ne push kiya tujhe.

Khush look at door n said- kisi ne nahi bas, mai wo mai.

Priya- kya bol bhi.

Khush find a word to say something, in mind- ye peehu bhi na, push kar diya mujhe aandar, lekin aandar aa kar kya bol na hai ye nahi bola, pagal.

Priya in little high pitched- KHUSH.

Khush came from his mind voice- haan.

Priya- kya baat hai kaha par khoya hai.

Khush- wo...wo haan yaad aaya.

Priya- kya yaad aaya.

Khush- wo maa ko aap plz maana lo na.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one.
Mission Priya manao! Has started.
Ek lamba update dena Yasir please...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Part 13
Khush is funny making bet on RaYa argument with Nuts and Peehu and it's sure Ram Priya madly in love but their ego is stopping them


Part 14
Planning is going good of Ram and Peehu to manofy Priya as she is melting down but she wanna go to mumbai and now wat new plan has been made by kush.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
hehe...so everyone knows the plan .. maha milap of raya...including priya!! :-P lol... really cute update...and arpita sis to be honest u r really emerging as a writer...abhi aur clearness aarahi hai aapke writing me ;) superb...keep it up... :-) :-D nice really...so priya is all set to go back in mumbai ;) cute...next soon plzzz and thnks for pm

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