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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally Priya!!!!!!
But why did you stop the interview in between?
Nice update and continue soon.
Eagerly waiting and thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
All parts are good..
Ram n peehu's bonding is too good..
priya ki role bhut kam hai isme..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow .Priya is here. ab ayega maja. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6

Priya little anger mood with wife tone- agar uss time Maine tumhe khud ke sapne pure karne nahi diye hote to tum aaj iss jagah nahi hote, jaha par aaj tum ho.

Ram also same tone- Maine kaha tha mere saath chalo, lekin tum hi apni zidd par aadi rahi.

Priya- mai apni zidd par aadi rahi, tumhe pata tha ram uss samay ki condition kya thi.

Ram- uss condition par hum dono milke sambhalte priya.

Priya- kaise sambhalte ram, mai tumhare saath Mumbai aa kar waha par nuts ko akele chod kar aati.

Ram- akele nahi chod rahe the, hum yaha par reh kar bhi nuts ko sambhalte.

Priya- ram nuts ki shaadi ka sawal tha.

Ram- wo to bach gayi na, phir bhi Maine kaha priya chalo mere saath lekin tumne maana kiya, ye bol kar ke tumhe aisi life pasand nahi hai.

Priya- iss liye tumne divorce paper aur kuch paise bheje.

Ram- to kya karta mai, tumhe tumhari family pyari thi.

Priya stop her argue with him n she said to director dada- dada stop these interview iss ka telecast nahi hona chahiye, aur Mr.ram ye interview humare team me se koi aur lega, lekin main interview nahi le sakti, sorry n she came out of the cabin.

After & hour ram's interview done, he also came out from recording room, go from there. 'mr.ram kapoor, plz 2mint ka waqt hai aapke paas' priya calling him.

Ram stop there, priya came infront of him and give one tifin box to him n said.

Priya- meri beti peehu aapke paas ruki hai, mujhe pata hai ussne jhoot bola hai, mujhse k wo hotel me ruki hai, agar aapko koi dikhat naa ho (don't mind) toh ye box usse handover karenge ye box mai khud courier kar deti lekin wo kab usse milega, plzz.

Ram take that box n go from there.

Priya murmuring- baap beti ek-dusre ko match karte hai, same attitude, same ego. In Mumbai, ram think about priya, peehu came with baby step, n touch his left shoulder n he turned to left side.

Pee- kya papa waha par dekh rahe ho, i am here by ur side.

Ram- i m not in mood peehu.

Pee- wo toh expression se pata chal raha hai, kya hua.

Ram- aaj teri maa se mila, i mean priya se mila.

Pee- doo bichade premi mile, kaha par.

Ram- Delhi radio station mera interview tha, aur interview wahi le rahi thi.

Pee- ohhh, jawalamukhi (volocone) nahi phata.

Ram- peehu bad language beta.

Pee- kya kaha maa ne.

Ram- usse pata hai k tum yaha par ruki ho.

Pee- hmmm aur kuch.

Ram- tere liye box bheja hai.

Pee- wo box mere liye nahi hai aapke liye hai, uss me matri hogi, laddu aur ek tifin me gajar ka halwa uss me hoga, ye sab chize mai kabhi nahi khaati, aur ye baat maa acchi tarike se jaanti hai, ye sab aapko pasand, iss liye mere through aapko bheji hai.

Ram- tum itne yakin k saath ye baat kaise bol sakti ho.

Pee- then open it n find out, bahot raat hui hai n she went from there.

Ram open that box and found same things in that box.

Next morning, ram came in balcony n found peehu talking with boy in gate area, she is very friendly with him, ram is very neatly observing him n peehu.

Ram thik- who is that unknown guy, peehu know him, sometimes later ram came downstairs n asked her.

Ram- kon tha wo ladka.

Pee- mera frnd.

Ram- kon sa frnd.

Pee- boy frnd.

Ram- what tumhara boy frnd.

Pee- ab wo boy hai to boy frnd hi bolungi na, kya papa aap bhi.

Ram- naam kya tha usska.

Pee- khush! Ab mai jaau.

Ram- kaha par.

Pee- drama practice.

Ram- thik hai! Jaldi ghar aana.

15days left, peehu came to Mumbai, but she didn't reviled her goal, ram is very happy coz his daughter is came to his home.

Ram waiting peehu for breakfast. 'peehu peehu, where are u my jaan' guy search her.

Ram came n asked hia- who are you! 'ohh! hi, uncle dad, i peehu's frnd samar', he said and ram look him top to toe n said.

Ram- tum peehu k dost ho.

Sam- haan koi shak hai.

Ram- kab mile, kaha mile. Kab se jaante ho.

Sam- wo hum dono bachapan se, and he scratched word 'bachapan' n said- nahi jaante, wo hum dono kal hi drama rehearsal k liye mile the aur mai apna dil khoo baitha, aapki beti kitni superb hai uncle sach me mujhe aisa lagta hai, i had love a first sight.

Ram- tum usse ek baar mile aur pyar ho gaya, aise pyar hota hai.

Sam- ye aj kal ki duniya hai uncle dad, aj kal to aisa hai, aj pyar, kal date, parso engagement, aur usske baad shaadi, you know what i mean.

Ram go to open his mouth to say something n peehu came shouted name of samar.

Pee- sammy, tum aa gaye.

Sam- hey baby how are you, u miss me.

Peehu go to hugged him but controlled herself n give side hugged n said- ofcursoe i miss you baby.

Ram eyes wide open n shocked too.

Sam- i miss you too baby.

Pee- so what's the plan.

Sam- day out with u.

Pee- papa mai jaa rahi hun, bye papa and they both turned to go, ram shouted both them.

Ram- ruko tum dono.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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What's this yaar?
Doesn't Ram has any feelings for Priya?
Why's he behaving so strange and doesn't even make an attempt to unite with her?
Expecting more of Priya and Ram!!!!!!
Thanks for pm and please continue.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice. RaYa face off. pihu sach me ram KO pagal kar degi. thanks for pm. pl continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice progression of the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7

Pee- papa mai jaa rahi hun, bye.

Ram- ruko! Kaha par jaa rahi ho.

Sam- wo uncle day out with me.

Ram- peehu leave his arm, peehu leave his arm.

Ram- came here n peehu came near him.

Pee- lekin papa.

Ram- chup ekdum, aur tum karte kya ho.

Sam- mai singer hun.

Ram- kaha par songs gaate ho, kis ke liye.

Sam- haan wo mai abhi struggler hun, lekin ek na ek din bann jaaunga, famous singer.

Ram- peehu tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho.

Pee- papa mai jaa rahi hun.

Ram- peehu tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho.

Pee- bye papa n she go with him.

Vikram came behind him n said- ladka bahot accha hai dikhne me.

Ram- vikram chup kar.

Vik- kya chup karu.

Ram- ek toh iss ladki me bachpana bhara padha hai aur ye bandar aaya aaj naya, peehu choti hai.

Vik- peehu 21saal ki hai ram usse aapna bhala-bura pata hai.

Ram- lekin mere liye wo abhi bhi wahi 5saal ki peehu hai.

Vik- ab tu emotional ho raha hai.

Ram- emotional ka sawal nahi hai, baap ka dil hai.

Vik- itne saal se kaha par tha ye dil n he point to his heart.

Ram didn't said anything.

Vik- issi chupi ko tod de aur peehu ko baata tu kitna pyar karta hai usse, tune aaj tak teri zimedaari samjhkar protect kiya hai, ek baar baap bankar protect kar, ek baar baap ki eihsiyat se gale laga phir dekh tujhe peehu ki itni fikar nahi hogi.

Ram nodded in yes.

At park, peehu and samar seat on bench, they both are silent.

Samar asked her- aur kitne din tumhe chahiye.

Pee- thode din aur.

Sam- peehu tum Mumbai aayi thi papa ke ehsaas dilane k liye ki unnki bhi ek family hai, usse kahi jaada tum ek baat ke liye aayi thi, wo hai father touch, jise tum bahot saal pehle bhul gayi thi, uss touch ko dhundne, kya mai puch sakta hun, wo touch mila tumhe?

Peehu nodded in no.

Sam- peehu shaadi ke liye sirf 13din baaki hai.

Pee- pata hai mujhe aur yaad bhi hai, lekin itne saal ki duriyan hai samar waqt toh lagega na.

Sam- i miss you so much yaar.

Pee- i miss all.

Sam- papa ko baatya shaadi ke baare me.

Pee- nahi abhi tak nahi baataya, wo mai aayi hun iss baat ko lekar bahot jaada khush hai, shaadi wali baat bol ke pareshan nahi karna chahti, waqt aayega tab baata dungi.

Sam- hmm, kuch aur pucha na hai.

Pee- maa kaisi hai.

Sam- phn kar ke puch, bahot miss kar rahi hai, maa tujhe.

Pee- hmm aaj karti hun, ek sachi baat baata.

Sam- konsi.

Pee- maa ko tune bola na.

Sam- maa ki tabiyat thik nahi thi aur tere baare me pucha to baata diya, gussa nahi hai.

Pee- hmm ok.

Sam- ab kaha jaana hai.

Pee- roj ki jagah.

Sam- papa ko pata hai tu kaha par jaati hai, aur raat ko late aati hai tab puchte nahi hai.

Pee- puchte hai lekin uncle hai na bachaane k liye.

Sam- good, ek hugged to mil sakta hai.

Pee- try karti hun.

Sam- ok, n peehu hugged him but little moment she lose her grip.

Sam- its ok, i can understand, but thodi improving hai, 15days pehle wali hugged aur aj ki hugged me.

Peehu little blush n said- shut up! N drop me jaldi.

Sam- haan chalo.

At 7pm ram walking here n there n minute by minute he look towards there door, vikram observe him n asked.

Vik- koi aane wala hai.

Ram- peehu abhi tak aayi nahi hai, kab se wait kar raha hun, tujhe koi call kiya tha.

Vik- nahi lekin subhe to uss ladke ke saath Honda car me gayi.

Ram little bit shocked- Honda car!.

Vik- haan tune nahi dekha.

Ram- na n he dialled peehu's number but her phn not reachable.

Ram- ye ladki aapna phn network me kiu nahi rakhti, n again he dial her number.

Vikram look his worries towards peehu n little smile create on his face n he thinking, ram called vikram, but no use ho go n jerked his thoughts.

Vik- kya hua.

Ram- mai jaa raha hun peehu ko dhundne.

Vik- kaha par.

Ram- kahi par bhi, tu bas gadi ka number aur color bol.

Vik- number to nahi pata lekin car ka color red hai.

Ram- thik hai mai jaa raha hun peehu ko dhundne n came out from the place.

At mid road ram found one car, which is Honda red color, ram go near the car.

Ram- yaha car hogi n he look here n there- kon hai, silent for sometime n then then he again listen some talking noise, man n women talking in car, in wearied tone.

Ram listen, n pop up hiatus eyes n he search something for back side car glass broken n he found one rod n he broken that glass n stand there, two people came out of that car.

'kon hai re tu, tune mere car ka, ruk tu idhar hi, man said in angry tone.

Ram look at that man n said- sorry wo galti se hua.

Man- galti se! Haath me rod lekar khaada hai aur bolta hai galti se hua, ruk mai abhi police ko call karta hun.

Ram wide his eyes n he throw the rod.

Next scene in police station, ram in jail lady inspector is incharge there.

Edited by Arpipatil - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yet again a nice update.
But I need Priya and miss her so much.
waiting and continue soon.
Thanks for pm.

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