New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 7

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Nice update
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Precap: Ram : I thought I heard u saying mr.karpur...???

Priya : wahi toh kahan meine and runs from there, ram tries to go behind her but stops there smilingly

ram in daadi room, getting ready,he stood infront of the mirror, ruffling his hair, humming something... He stopped and looking without blinking ( remembering what happened few mins back,he remembering how priya rubbed her face ) he closed his eyes ,moving his hand all over his face, feeling her touch, her breathe so close...

here priya too, moving her fingers all over her face ( remembering what she did

Part 5 :

Priya feeling very shy , experiencing a new feeling, priya turning round around holding duppatta dancing in all over the room actually she is enjoying the moment...,

so its dinner time as today amacchi bday... special dinner organised by priya and all members , everyone is there except priya , it's a strange thing for everyone coz she is very punctual,daadi

daadi : kya hua sab aise kyu ho... shuru karo ( while taking her seat), Priya... shuru karo... amacchi lifts her head but theres no glimpse of priya, she understood , closing her eyes: neha sab ready rakho mein leke aathi hu priya ko , amaachi leaves from there

ram confusedly looks at vikram,vikram looks at neha, neha looks at peehu, peehu slaps on her forehead giving unbeleivable look at all of them

ram : kya hua peehu... tumhe patha hai priya kyu nehi aayi???

peehu : aaplog ithni buddhu kaise hosakthe ho ???, nods her head unbeleivably... samajhme nehi aaya aaplogon ko ,

ram neha vikram laughs at her antics, three of them kneels down infront of her

ram pulls peehu towards him, hemake her sit on his kneel,

ram : toh daadiamma agar aapko patha hai toh pls humein bolo

peehu : mein nehi bolungi toh aur kaun samjhayenge aaplogon ko... kithne buddhu ho yaar sab ke sab

neha irritatingly : oye ab humein thaane dena bandh karo reason bolo

peehu : haan baba ... priya isliye nehi aayi kyunki she is hurt

ram neha vikram at once frowning:Hurt???? kyu???

peehu : arey samjhona bina situation samjhe amacchi ne priya ko sorry bolne ko kahan mr.kapoor ko isliye and neha di u know na how priya is???

neha smiles, ram felt bad, vikram rubs ram shoulder , ram looks at him both blink eyes, ram releasing peehu... got up,

ram : mein priya se milke aatha hu ...

here amacchi came to priya, priyalaid down their looking at the stars in sky..., amacchi felt bad, gulping lump in throat steps towards priya, amacchi shadow fall on priya face she woke up and stood

priya : amacchi ... aap yahan kyakarrahe ho??? thand lagjayegi andar chalo... bahuth thand hai yahan pe... aur baakisab kahan margaye ki aapko iss waqt bahar aane di... shawl bhi nehi laaye ho uffo priya removes her sweater covers on amacchi... sabke sab bekaar hai... aap chalo andar.. priya makes her turn, amacchi looking at her without blinking, priya sense that looks at her questioningly

amacchi takes priya with her and make her sit,she too tries to sit on floor but priya stops, and runs from there and back with a chair , amacchi smiles at her and took her seat

priya : amacchi pls andar chalthe hai yahan pe bahuth thand hai, amacchi stops her

amacchi : now stop it priya ... ek baath bolo tum kithni derse ho yahan pe tumhe thand nehi lagegi kya ???? aur tumhe dhyan bhi nehi rahi ki dinner time hogayi sab tumhare intezaar karrahe hai aur batao kya hua??? aise kyu baithe ho tum ???

priya in tears but controlling herself : nehi amacchi kuch nehi ... aise he mann karrahi thi toh yahan chali aayi and sorry holding her ears... time ka patha nehi chala... chalo ab chalthe getting late aapko medicine bhi lena haina.. holds amacchi hand , amacchi holds priya wrist , priya turns her head

amacchi : baitho... priya sits... i know u r hurt... aur mujhe ye bhi patha hai tum kyu upset ho, mein bina jaane ram ko sorry bolne ko kahan isliye na...?

priya nods her head negatively, she is in tears: nehi amacchi mein samajhsakthi hu aap aisa kyu kahan, still mein aapko galath samajhi... i know he is our guest we have to respect him, that's why u asked me to apologise... but i forgot this for a sec i thought that he is ur grandson that's why u been unfair with me which is not true... how can i even think like that abt u even for a sec also am sorry she hugs amacchi tightly,both priya & amacchi are in tears, priya continuosly apoligising , amacchi rubbing priya back, ram witnessing every moment of priya & amacchi... he feeling very emotional

amacchi and priya both are out from hug, amacchi wipes priya tears

amacchi : ab bas karo aur kithna royegi... bacha ke rakho tumhari bidaai ki time pe kaam aayegi winks at priya ...hearing this priya blushes, amacchi starts teasing her

amacchi : hayee hayeee someone blushing here... priya smiles and mimes sorry again, amacchi ab bas karo mein tumhari naam nikuti isliye rakhi kyunki tum uss sweet ki tarah hamesha sweet sweet baathein karna chahiye aaj toh tum uss naam ko badnaam karrahi ho ye sorry bolke wo bhi tumhari amacchi ko hadh hai yaar...priya hugs her again, ram smiling hearing daadi words, he felt cold there he went inside

priya body became very cold,amacchi felt this... removes sweater and tries to cover priya but priya stops

priya : amacchi pls ye aap pehno yahan pe bahuth thand... amacchi slightly slaps on priya cheek

amacchi : isliye kehrahi hu ye pehno aur yahan se chalein bahuth derhogayi hai, priya takes off sweater again covers on amacchi, both stayed there arguing with eachother abt sweater by then they felt someone covered them with shawl, both turns back, there he is ram

ram : ab dono ki problem solve ab chalein , he gave them shawl, both smiles at him, here ram feeling cold now he didn't covered himself, both amacchi and priya looks at each other, priya moves aside holding the shawl, amacchi looks at ram

ram confusingly : what???

amacchi : oye dabbu aajao... hero banne ki jarurat nehi hai... ram smiles and occupies place in between priya &daadi

ram murmurs : daadi pls dabbu math bulao, priya giggles hearing this,

amacchi : oye chupkaro mujhe math sikhao... priya and amacchi hifi, ram smiles at them, hugs them encircling his both arms on both amacchi & priya , priya felt strange but she is happy inside

everyone ready to have dinner,

amacchi : aaj priya ko mein apni haathon se khilaungi... priya felt super happy giving a winning look to ram ,amacchi feeds priya whole dinner, and vice versa, ram feeling very emotional & very happy seeing happiness in daadi face,

dinner finished everyone retired to their room while going to his room ram noticed that priya is not in her room only peehu sleeping in bed holding her teddy, ram steps towards peehu slowly he tries to remove teddy from her grip... but priya comes there and slaps on his shoulder, ram turns, priya gives questioning look ram tries to explain but priya signals him, she keeps back peehu teddy

priya in low tone : kya karrahe ho?? yahan pe???

ram tries to talk in normal tone :mein yahan se...

priya : shh... sh... thoda awaaza neeche

ram says in low tone : mein yahanse jaaraha tha dekha toh ... peehu felt disturbed she changing sides, priya suddenly holds ram wrist and drag him outside

ram : aise kyu leke aayi ho???

priya : aur kya karu??? aapko kyapatha wo aadhi neendh mein uttegi toh poora ghar sarpe uttayegi... and pls kabhibhi wo teddy uski haathon se math nikalo esp when she is sleeping

ram : Ohhh... priya tucking her hairstrands on back of her ear

priya : ab chalein ...? ram enjoying the beautiful sight infront of his eyes,ram didn't heard what priya said...

priya shook him helding his hand... again priya hair strands came infront of her eyes again she tries to tuck... but ram held her hand, he did that honour... priya closed her eyes feeling nervous... ram observing her changing facial expressions... to tease her he pinches on her nosetip

priya opens her eyes : ouch wincing in pain by then ram left to his room by running , priya couldn't catch him

priya : mr.karpur tumhare khair nehi ... subah dekhlungi... rubbing her nose she went to sleep... priya in anger turning sides on bed... she touching her nose tip... a cute sweet curve came on her face... again her hair strands came infront of her face asusual she tucking them back while doing that remembered how ram tucked them few mins back

here ram too trying to sleep but he couldn't whenever he tries to sleep priya tucking her hair strands glimpse coming infront of his eyes...

somehow finally both slept here comes another morning...everyone gathered at lawn for prayer waiting for amacchi and priya... by then they also reached lawn just then everyone heard ram voice

ram : Bansi kaka... Bansi Kaka...coffee??? everyone reached his room... looking at ram face everyone starts laughing loudly... ram open his eyes... daadi also smiling

ram smilingly : kya hua subah subah sab ithna kyu hasrahe ho mujhe bhi bolo mein bhi hasunga

daadi comes to him : dabbu humein bathane ki kya jarurat hai ... ( while saying takes him with her towards washroom make him stand infront of the mirror) tum khud dekho aur haso ram looks in mirror and he is shocked & screams: aaa... everyone laughs loudly hearing his scream... both priya & peehu hifi each other

daadi : dabbu jaldi muh haath dhoke aajao hum sab prayer karne jaarahe hai... leaves the place laughingly , ram washing his face murmuring

ram : Priya mein chodunga nehi tumhe... ye tumhari karthooth hai chodunga nehi tumhe... mujhe joker banayi na tu...dekh tumhari kya haal karunga mein... he taunting priya continuously... he back from washroom after fresh up he is getting ready continuously taunting priya... all of sudden he smiles looking at mirror... he is in the middle way wearing his t-shirt, he collapsed on bed smilingly... remembering priya face,here priya comes to him to invite for breakfast but she stood there without blinking looking at him... priya stood there for minutes.. ram too sat there like for minutes both are drooling on each other on their own dream land... neha and vikram reach there to take them both for breakfast but they smiling at ram &priya , neha winks at vikram... vikram steps towards ram and shook him holding shoulder,

here neha shouts in priya ear

neha :Nikutiii... priya jerks and close her ear tightly, ram tries to hold vikram , ram stood there in doorway, both ram and priya looking at eachother , eye lock

neha & vikram leave the palce asap... in the middle way

neha : oye tum dono ki jab hojaye jaldi aajao, ram kapoor pls wear shirt.. look at my priya face she cant took of her eyes... saying this giggles , both ram & priya feeling very embarassed,

priya : amacchi bularahi hai breakfast ke liye, ram stepping towards priya... priya stepping back... while these too playing this stepping game both came in to the middle of the room... priya bumps to something and stop there.. priya breathing heavily... sweat all over her face...ram enjoying this... he starts stepping towards her he is just a 2-3 steps away from priya when he took first step priya stopped him placing her palm on his barechest (still he didn't wore shirt)... ram felt goosebumps, he looked at her palm.. and then in to her eyes... she pleading him through eyes... her hair strands disturbing his beautiful sight he tries to tuck back her hair strands but priya very quickly did that and pushed away ram and runs from there

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Beautiful update... so cute...👏
loved RaYa nok-jok n little romance..
Pls continue sooon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Cute n nok jok wala part plss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Just too good.. Please continue soon. N thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Peehu sahi mai Dadima hai
kaise sabko smajaya Priya ke bare mai 😉
A hurt Priya cheered up by Dadi which made Ram emotional too
RaYa cute antics to tease each other will continue like this only
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
vv sweet update.

thanks for pm.
pl continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sweet and cute update...
Ram and Priya starting romance..
Please continue soon..
Thanks for PM😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Very nice update
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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