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lovely update
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Awesome update...plz do continue sooon
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first of all sorry for commenting late ..

this is the first time i read this story and i m loving it ...read all 4 parts in one go ..its fab👏👏👏



Raya story starts with an accident ...😆😆 hayyy this is how our balh started lovely ...and then followed tons of misunderstanding ...😛😛
love my sherni priya ...😆

understanding between amacchi n priya is great .. ..can very well imagine our dadi amma pihu ...

indeed a very realistic n gripping story ..loving it ..big thumbs up for u

plzz continue soon ..and thanks for the pm.😉
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Part 6:

priya : amacchi bularahi hai breakfast ke liye, ram stepping towards priya... priya stepping back... while these too playing this stepping game both came in to the middle of the room... priya bumps to something and stop there.. priya breathing heavily... sweat all over her face...ram enjoying this... he starts stepping towards her he is just a 2-3 steps away from priya when he took first step priya stopped him placing her palm on his barechest (still he didn't wore shirt)... ram felt goosebumps, he looked at her palm.. and then in to her eyes... she pleading him through eyes... her hair strands disturbing his beautiful sight he tries to tuck back her hair strands but priya very quickly did that and pushed away ram and runs from there

Part 6:

ram smiling crazily, priya reached dinning area breathing heavily... her hands shivering... her lips too .. everyone are busy in having their breakfast... priya came silently took her seat, but she sat there absent minded... blushing.. smiling on her own.. just doing circles in plate not even a single spoon she ate... Neha noticed priya antics... elbowed her... Priya out from her dream land

Neha in low tone : oye kuch hua kya ??? winks at her... priya stops smiling glares at her angrily

Under table priya felt some one pressing her foot thumb sometimes writing on her foot with leg fingers, priya shocked she is looking here and there... then looked at neha... neha blushingly looking at vikram, vikram winks at neha... both are drooling over each other.. now priya understood whats happening...

Priya while gulping her food... says

Priya : by the way neha ye mere paau hai... vikram ki nehi... better check before doing all these stupid things saying this priya stomps on neha feet

Neha shouts : OOouchhh... Drops her spoon , every one looks at neha

Amacchi : kya hua neha... ithni zorse kyu chillayi... aur priya ye kya bolrahi ho vikram ki pau nehi meri pau and all??? Gives questioning look at priya and neha

Now neha thinking : mein toh gayi aaj...? Priya tumhe chodungi nehi... ye kahan fasadi mujhe...

Amacchi : neha... priya... mein kuch poochrahi hu...? Jawaab do..?

Priya tries to say something childishly .. : amacchi... wo ... kya... hainaa... vikram... Aur ... nehaaa... she stops looking at someone

Everyone turns and there ram with a dashing look.. ever charming trade mark smile on his lips in addition to that he rubbing his chest with his one hand glaring romantically at priya... priya felt very nervous.. at once she gulps ac glass full of water...

Peehu : wow mr.kapoor.. looking dashing... gives hifi to ram

Ram shakes hands with peehu, winks. He is looking at priya with his corner eyes.. priya bends her head down

Amacchi : aajao baitho ithni der kyu lagadi aane mein...? Ram takes his seat beside amacchi

Amacchi : priya serve karo ram ko..., priya didn't heard as she is in her dreamland.. ram waiting but priya didn't served anything she just doing circles in her plate smiling like crazy

Amacchi looks at ram plate.. and looks at ram.. ram pouts .. amacchi looks at priya ..again amacchi this time lil sternly

Amacchi : Priyaaa... Priya frightened and looks at amacchi.. start stuttering

Priya : ha.. ha.. ama... amachiii...

Amacchi : kya hua..? kahan kho gayi ho? Tabse kehrahi hu ram ko khana lagao lekin dhyan kahan hai tumhari... wait... again tum dono ne jaghda ki kya ????,, ram & priya nods their head negatively

Priya asap served food to ram : ram glaring at her , he is enjoying her uneasiness,, her frightening look, tensed face, shivering hands, in the middle her hair strands

Ram thinking himself: aahhh... mein marjawaan... slightly punches on his chest, by that time priya done serving, she silently went to her seat and trying to have her breakfast, ram just smiling he is having his food

But whenever priya looks at him he starts rubbing his chest... where few mins back priya kept her soft palm on his bare chest, priya just bends her head down when ram does that gesture, she is eating as fast as she can, literally she is just dumping the food , ram enjoying every bit of this moment... priya finished her food without greeting amacchi she left the place amacchi felt really strange ( coz daily priya says bye to everyone when she finish her food.. esp to amacchi)

Amacchi strangely : ye priya ko kya hua aaj thoda ajeeb behave karrahi hai, khaana bhi bahuth ajeeb thareeke se khaayi hai aaj, pehle toh plate mein rangoli dalthi rehgayi... ab achanak aise finish ki jaise koi race lagaye uske peeche... aaj ho kya gaya usko???

Everyone just pouts their lips saying like they don't know, ram still kept his hand on his chest..

Amacchi worriedly : ye tumhe kya hua... tumhari tabiyath toh theek haina???ye haath aise kyu rakha hua hai ??

Ram jerks his hand, and kept that asusual : mu...mu...mujhe kya hua am perfectly fine... saying this opens his both arms

Amacchi : oye ye shahrukh khan wala pose bandh karo aur batao ki abhitak ye haath aise kyu rakha tumne ???

Ram stammers: wo... wo... isliye ki wahan pe bahuth accha feel horahi thi daadi... sukoon milraha hai aise yahan pe haath raktha hu toh saying this again he kept his palm on his chest... neha & vikram giggling, ram looks at them and smiles

Amacchi slapping on her fore head: patha nehi sab ko kya hogayi aaj... sab ke sab pagal hogaye ho... saying this amacchi starts to leave the place...

Ram : daadi ... Daadi turns back, ram runs to her and hugs tightly

Ram : love u sooo much daadi... daadi felt strange.. but she didn't said anything just left from there murmuring : sab pagal hogaye hai...

Ram just grinning when he turns back ... whole battalion stood there just like ready to attack with their weapons...

Ram shocked steps back : kya hua aise kyu dekhrahe ho sab???

Peehu steps forward : ab bolo kya hua amacchi ko love u kyu bola ???

Ram talking under his teeth : kyun ki kisi aur ko kehne ke liye abhi time hai... peehu taps on his hand

Ram : haa.. haa.. coming out his dreamland..

Peehu : bolo achanak kyu kahan aapne??

Ram kneels down to her height : holding her kyunki I love her... she gave me so many things ... so many precious things... that's why

Peehu : ohhh... then its ok

Ram : ok hope u r doubts are clear now... then please go & get ready for school

Here priya in her room just looking out from the window .. she completely absent minded she just sat there curling her hair ends with her finger

Peehu all set for school, she said bye to priya but she didn't get any response.

Peehu nodding her head like unbelievable, drops her both hands in air : patha nehi aaj ye priya ko kya hua ... late horahi hu jaake amacchi ko bolthi hu.. peehu leaves room

Peehu came in to amacchi room.. amacchi sat there looking some account books

Peehu : amacchi .., amacchi looks at her

Peehu : ye priya ko kuch hua hai... ajeeb behave karrahi hai... amacchi laughs at her antics

Amacchi : ab kya kiya priya ne

Peehu : wo aise he window ke paas khadi hoke , apne hair ko aise aise karrahi hai.. shows what priya doing there... amacchi thinks for a while...

Amacchi : mein dekthi hu tum school jaake aao tabtak aapki priya aapke saamne hogi..

Peehu gives hifi , amacchi hugs her and gives a peck on fore head, peehu leaves

Priya busy in phone talking with someone.. actually yelling

Priya :mere bina ek din kaam nehi sambhal sakthe aaplog...mein aarahi hu wo client ko thodi der rukne ko kaho... am coming ill be there in 15 mins.. talking on phone priya reached amacchi room holding medicines box in her hand

Priya continuously taunting someone , she is very angry on someone.. while blabbering she took all medicines and handover to Amacchi, amacchi didn't asked anything

Priya : amacchi ye med lelo aur aap rest lelo...aaj mein lunch ke liye nehi aaungi have some work mein kahin bahar kuch khaalungi pls aap medicine math bhulo... bye love u take care.. she rushed from there

In the middle she met ram... she didn't showed any uneasiness or nervous ,ram felt weird

Ram : hey kya hua??? All ok ???

Priya checking something in her bag: yeah everything fine...

Ram : ok starts to move.. priya calls him

Priya : mr.kapoor , ram turns to wards priya

Priya: accha hua aap milgaye ho...? Mein lunch ke liye nehi aaungi kuch kaam hai am leaving now and don't know ill be back tonight so please aap amacchi ko med time pe dedijiyega .. med list mein box mein he rakhi hu so u don't get confuse.. ok then byee getting late

Ram tries to say something: but priya mobile again ring

Priya : whats the hell yaar??/ aise kaise karsakthe hai wo log... mein aarahi hu... ill talk to them aaplog kuch math kaho, she is really worried.. seeing her like that ram too worried

Whole day passed .. ram really worried for priya... he called her on mobile but she didn't picked after a while her mobile went switched off ram really worried for her .. he just walking from one end to other in a room in tension..

Neha & vikram came there laughing with each other... their smiles vanished when they saw ram tensed face.. vikram rushed towards ram

Vikram : ram kya hua... why u r so tensed???

Ram : arey mujhe kya hua mein theek hu mujhe priya ki chintha horahi hai... jistarah se wo phone pe baath karrahi thi really she is in some problem... she left for office.. I tried to call her but her mobile switched off...

Vikram squeezing ram shoulder : ram keep calm... kuch nehi hoga sayad office mein kuch problem hogi

Neha comes to them : uffo ram just chill... wo ek purana client hai... kal humdono chutti mein haina

Toh team members ki work unko pasand nehi aayi toh they are creating some scene.. but now everything sorted u chill... ram in a jerk stood up

Ram : r u sure ? now all settled?? Agar sab settled hotoh why her mobile switched off??? Asked worriedly

Neha smiles : arey wo meeting mein thi na toh switch off kardi... abhi dusre client se milne gayi hai thodi der mein she will be here u chill...

Ram felt lil bit relieved... afternoon se evening hogayi sab bacche school se bhi aagaye except peehu... sab bacche khelrahe hai.. ram , amacchi sat there looking at playing children

Just then they heard some giggles, ram very sure that sweet voice is priya's voice, he rushed towards her amacchi felt strange by ram reaction

Priya & peehu entered giggling.. licking icecream... ram bumps in to priya... priya icecream smudged on rams shirt... but ram didn't bothered he just adoring priya calm face.. again same her hair strands disturbing ram , he tries to tuck them back.. but peehu disturbs

Peehu : kya mr.kapoor dekhke nehi aasakthe... priya asap tucked her hair strands back... ram smiles at priya and looks at peehu ...dekho poora icecream neeche girgayi... peehu made sad face

Ram : sorry peehu... holding his ears

Peehu smiles : its ok , she leaves the place... ram & priya stood there looking at eachother.. both are talking through eyes

Ram questions frowning his eyes : what happen

Priya answers blinking her eyes with a smile on lips saying : everything fine...

Amacchi calls : priya... priya..., ram & priya comes out of trance...

Priya : aarahi hu amacchi.. she goes towards amacchi and hugs her says missed u... how r u... med liya ne aapne??? Khaana time pe liya na???

Amacchi slapping on fore head: skip karne ki koi chance hai... meri pothe ko he rakhkhe gayi thin a tumne meri dekhbaal ke liye.. saying this looks at ram.. ram smiles looking at priya...

Amacchi : jaao jaake fresh hojao priya.. and please wo neha kahan hai jara bulao???

Priya frowns, looks at ram... ram pouts his lips saying I don't know

Priya : ok amacchi mein dekthi hu... While leaving the place she slightly pulls ram shirt saying come with me..

ram understood he excuses himself

Ram : daadi mein abhi aatha hu... amacchi just nods her head

Ram goes behind priya.. here priya in her room waiting for ram ... she biting her nails ram noticed that and slaps on her fingers.

Priya : ouch... Took off her fingers from lips... ye kya hai

Ram : it's a bad habit... priya glares at him angrily...

Ram : mujhe ghoorna band karo.. aur bolo ki mujhe kyu bulayi ho???

Priya : yeah neha kahin bhi nehi hai... vikram kahan hai???

Ram : vikram ko toh mein subah mila... tabse nehi mila hu mein...

Priya thinks for a while... Suddenly she starts smiling , ram confused

Priya holds ram hand : chalo mujhe patha hai ye dono kahan milenge humko...

Ram : kahan??/

Priya : arey chalo na... she drags him with her... both reached terrace there neha & vikram chatting with each other

Vikram kept his head on neha lap... neha playing with vikram hair... both are talking with each other

Vikram : neha ithne din hogayi hai... aagey ka kya kuch socha ki nehi tumne... tum kab kahogi priya se daadi se.. humare baaremein

Neha : arey samjha karo na... tum aise achanak tapak padoge mujhe kya patha... ab mein priya ko kaise kahu... ki humdono bahuth pehle se ek dusre se jaanthe ... we are madly in love with each other...

Ram & priya are shocked hearing this... looking at eachother

Here vikram : arey priya samajhdar hai... vikram gets up from her lap... took her in to his lap.. neha starts giggling

Neha seductively : kya karrahe ho... vikram nudges on neha neck.. both ram & priya closed their eyes

Vikram bites on neha shoulder

Neha : ouch... Priya too yells

Vikram and neha turns back and shocked seeing them there


Part 7:


Neha and vikram startled : both in unison : Tum...

Priya became silent she is just giving angry looks to neha but ram overjoyed runs towards vikram hugs

Ram : tu toh chupa rustam nikla yaar... kabhi patha he nehi chala ki tu kisise pyar karraha hai... well done bro... vikram also very happy thinking that ram not upset with him... he takes off ram from hug

Vikram in unbelievable voice : toh... tumhe koi problem nehi haina meri neha ki rishthey se...

Ram smiles : arey mujhe kyu problem hogi... its love yaar it just happens we don't know when it happens so no issues bro but felt lil bad that u didn't shared with me but its ok yaar... tu khush haina bas aur kya chahiye again both hugs

Vikram winks at neha... signals to talk with priya ... neha looks at priya... her face clearly showing that she is hurt and very upset on neha

Neha steps towards priya ... took priya palm in her hand... slightly rubbing : wo... mein tumhe bathane waali thi yaar wait karrahi thi sahi waqt ka...

Priya just glares at her ...

Neha : arey priya pls yaar... mein kehnewaali thi achanak se ye sahib tapak pada mujhe thodi na patha hai ki ye aise bina bathaye aajayega... pls

Priya silently takes off her palm from neha hand.. leaves the place without saying single word

Neha bends down her head in disaapointment ... vikram and ram comes to her

Vikram side hugs... rubbing her shoulder : thoda time do priya ko she will be ok ...

Neha crying : bahuth hurt hai wo patha nehi ...

Ram irritatedly : arey ismein gussa honewali baath kya hai yaar ... neha ye tumhari life hai... tumhe kisiko kuch kehne ki jarurath nehi hai... bolo vikram shaadi kab karrahe ho... ... priya overhears this she just left the place asap

Neha and vikram are shocked

Vikram : ram pls pehle priya aur neha ke beech sab theek hojanedo then will we think abt that

Ram now pissedoff : hothi kaun hai yaar priya tum dono ki life ki decisions choose karne ke liye ... aap dono ekdusre se pyar karthe ho... eksaath jeena chahthe ho... bas kisi maane ye naa maane ya upset honese kya farak padega...

This time neha glares at ram angrily.. looks at vikram : agar priya nehi chahthi toh hamari shaadi kabhi nehi hogi vikram... priya kya hai kaun hai ye mujhe tumhare dosth ko explain karne ki jarurath nehi hai ... she leaves the place crying

Ram looks at vikram : ye kya hai yaar aisa kya kehdi meine ki ??? ajeeb log hai tujhe duniya mein koi aur mila nehi kya... iss priya ki chamchi ke alawaa... hadh hai yaar... he drops his hands in air... leaves the place

Vikram follows ram explaining : arey ram aisa nehi hai samjha karo... both reach daadi room.. both stopped hearing daadi and priya convo

Priya : amacchi... neha aur vikram ek dusre se pyar karthe hai... dono aagey badna chahthe toh...

Daadi observing priya... priya telling a other story her words telling some other story... her eyes telling how hurt she...

Before daadi could say anything here

Ram to vikram : dekho kya karrahi hai ye... wahan ithna drama karke ab daadi se ye sab bolrahi hai ajeeb ladki hai yaar ...

Here in room

Amacchi : priya yahan aao mere paas..baitho yahan pe priya silently goes there and sits beside amacchi

Amacchi caressing her hair : vikram ke parents se baath karna padega pehle unko ye rishtha manjoor hai ya nehi..

Priya just nods her head... amacchi hugs her.. priya tightens her grip shed tears silently... both separates amacchi wipes off priya tears nods her head negatively saying no .. priya wiping her tears leaves the room on the doorway she see ram and vikram .. vikram just a gave a fade smile.. priya too just reciprocates and leaves

Vikram and ram in amacchi room ... vikram takes blessings

Amacchi : meri beti ka khyal rakhna kabhi chodna nehi uska haath.. vikram smiles and negatively nods head

Amacchi : apne parents se baath kab karwaoge????

Vikram : daadi pehle priya theek hojane do pehle wo iss rishthey ko accept karne do... uske baad he mein apne parents se baath karunga

Amacchi smiles hearing him : accha laga ye sunke par tu priya ki chintha math karo usko iss rishthey se koi problem nehi... agar hothi toh wo mere pass aake baath nehi karthi...

Vikram : pls daadi pehle priya aur neha ki misunderstanding clear hone do ...

Ram interferes : oye jyada math karo... unki misunderstanding wo log clear karenge tu apni life ki socho.. jo daadi kehrahe hai wo karo chupchaap

Amacchi glares at ram angrily , : vikram tum tumhare parents se baath karo uske baad mein baath karthihu raath bahuth hogayi hai jaake sojayiye ... waise ek baar neha ko mujhse milne ko kaho...

Ram and vikram met neha . she is very upset..

Ram : badhai ho madam... neha turns and looks at ram angrily

Ram : arey ab tum aise math dekho tumhari aur vikram ki shaadi ke liye daadi green signal dedi ... side hugs vikram .. vikram blushingly bends down head he moves towards neha side hugs her

Vikram : congratulations... neha smiles

Neha : lekin mein tabtak shaadi nehi karungi jabtak priya... ram intervenes

Ram : arey tumhari priya he daadi se baath ki tum dono ke baaremein .. madam bekaar he drama karrahi hai .. dikhthe nehi ho lekin dono ke dono bade dramebaaz ho

Neha hitting ram on his hand : ram trying to stop , vikram interfers held neha hands

Neha looking at ram : isko kaho chupchaap rehne ko ek aur baar priya ke baaremein kuch bhi bola na patha nehi mein kya karungi

Vikram pleads ram : ram pls yaar tu chupkar... tum kabhi nehi samjhogi...

Ram : arey samajhne wali baath hai toh samjhungi na .. again neha starts to hit him... ram runs from there

While he going his eyes fell on priya room.. she shedding tears silently sitting near the window... she held a pic in her hands... in between she tucking her hair strands on back.. ram felt bad looking her like that.. ram steps from there silently

In his room

Ram thinking : ye ladki bahuth ajeeb hai yaar.. aise bhi kya hua ki wo ithni upset hai neha se... aur wo ithna ro kyun rahi hai ... ithni sensitive huh... merese toh Jhansi ki rani ki tarah jaghdthi hai... he recollects their moments... road accident...cake shop incident... especially her hair strands the way she tucks them everything.. he recollecting a cute smile crept on his lips

Everyone retired to sleep except these four... ram thinking abt priya.. priya in her own land.. neha don't

know how to react .. vikram giving her support... aise he ye log raath bhar sonehi paaye

ye log raath ko soye ya nehi subah toh hona he hai... ye rahi unki sabki zindagi ki ek neyi subah nayi shuruat.. from morning neha trying to talk with priya.. but priya didn't talk a single word with neha.. even she didn't shared her morning chai with neha.. even at breakfast table also priya didn't said anything just discussing abt their marriage things with amacchi.. she announced this news at whole ngo everyone congratulated neha except priya

neha going behind her but priya didn't replied now neha pissed off she don't know what to do

priya preparing chai for everyone in kitchen... neha came there ... priya arranging tea cups in tray.. whe she turned neha stood there crossing her hands... priya glares at her... neha didn't moved so priya tried to go from other side again neha came infront..priya just shifts her gaze

neha : priya pls yaar meri baath toh suno... Mein tumse kehne waali thi yaar usse pehle sab kuch tumhe khud... she stops and bends her head down... priya just glaring at neha ... neha moves aside...priya starts to leave

neha looks at priya : priyaaa... priyaaa she yells her name and stomps her feet priya stops and turns

priya : kab kehne wali thi tu jab teri shaadi hojane baad ya tere bacche honeke baad... aur kya kahan tune waqt aane par.???? Kis waqt ka intezaar tha tujhe ...kithen din hogaye aapdono ko pyar karthe huye... I think nearly 2 yrs vikram nehi bathaya mujhe... 2yrs mein ek minute nehi mili tujhe mujhse ye kehne ke liye... wo chodo jab cake shop pe jaghda horaha tha tab bhi kehsakthi thi... lekin nehi ... jab wo dono hamare yahan aaye tabbhi kehsakthi thi... lekin nehi... ab jab wo log hamare saath rehrahe hai tum dono chupchupse milrahe hai... mein tumhe tease karrahi hu tabhi bhi tumhe laga nehi ki mujhse kehne ko ????? all through the convo tears are flowing down to priya cheeks...neha understood that she hurted her a lot... Priya wiping her tears kal mein aur amacchi jaarahe hai tumhari aur vikram ki rishthe ki baath karne unke parents se tum dono bhi saath mein aana padega... saying this she starts to move at the doorway priya stops and looks back

priya : Anyway Congratulations ... good choice ... mein tumhare liye bahuth khush hu vikram accha ladka hai... and he loves u a lot... Ab tumhara hogaya hotoh chai peene aajao priya leaves from there

neha also follows her... priya serves tea for everyone.. she give a angry look at ram... ram gives attitude wala look.. priya serves tea for vikram also... vikram smiles at her

priya took her cup and sat beside amacchi.. sipping her tea : so vikram aapne bathaya na ghar pe ki kal humlog unse baath karne aarahe hai????

Vikram : haan priya meri baath huyi hai mummy papa se they are very excited to meet u all.. especially neha.. he looks at neha.. neha not at all in her sense... she just looking at priya...

Ram : hitting on vikram shoulder playfully : congratualtions yaar am very happy for u... ab jaldi shaadi ki tayyariya shuru karna padega... vikram blushing...

Neha : mujhe nehi karni koi shaadi... koi kahi jaane ki jarurath nehi hai she leaves the place saying this...

Everyone shocked... vikram very disappointed ...ram looks at priya

Ram : ab khushi mili tumhe...?? Huh... ithni attention seeker ko mein kahi nehi dekha absolutely selfish...

Amacchi shouts at ram : Raam... ye kya tareeka hai ladkiyon se baath karne ka... ram glares at priya angrily and leaves the place throwing tea cup aside

All children frightened hearing loud noise and voice from living room... priya looks at them and fakes smile... slowly picks the scattered cup... amacchi steps towards priya keeps her palm on her fore head priya liftsher head.. presses amacchi palm tightly gives a smile

Vikram : sorry priya wo... ram...

Priya stops : its ok vikram mujhe aapko sorry kehna chahiye .. am sorry and don't worry kal humsab jaarahe hai aap dono ki shaadi pakki karne...

Vikram knotted eyebrows : par neha...

Priya : mujhe patha hai usse haan kehlana aap chintha math karo ... everyone retires to their room

When priya reached her room neha waiting for her .. priya ignores.. went to prepare her bed .. she unfolding the bedsheet neha snatches from priya hand.. priya didn't say anything just she continue her work she changing pillow cover... neha snatches that too.. priya still didn't say anything... she silently took a book from book shelf... lays on bed keeping another pillow under her elbows... priya facing the bed.. holding book in her hand using her elbows as book stand she is trying to concentrate on her book.. neha stood there like that for a while... priya didn't said a single word to her ... now neha cant take it anymore she steps towards priya and sits on her back (spinal chord place)

Priya yells in pain : aaa... ye tu karrahi hai???? Utto neha

Neha stubbornly : nehi jabtak tum meri poori baath nehi sunogi tabtak mein uttungi nehi yahan se bahuth hogayi roothna manaana

Hearing priya yelling sound amacchi . ram , vikram comes there

Priya looks at amacchi : amacchi pls help.. dekho ye pagal kya karrahi hai...

Neha : noo amacchi .. aap iski help nehi karoge.. ab bahuth hogayi... meine shaadi ke liye manaa ki abbhi ye mujhse baath nehi karrahi hai... socha ye kahungi toh ye jhat se baath karegi mujhse lekin nehi???? (typical neha style she is said all these)... mein tabtak nehi uttungi jabtak thu mujhse pehle ki tarah baath nehi karegi

Priya cant move ... just she can move her hands and limbs... priya tries to turn again neha sat on her back making sure that she cant move a inch...

Amacchi , ram , vikram laughing at them ...

Priya : vikram pls aap toh kaho isse ki mere se uttne ko... phir baithke baath karengey

Vikram tries to say something:: Neh... Neha stops him

Neha : chup bilkul chup ek word bhi iske support mein bola na toh dekhlo mein sacchi mein shaadi cancel kardungi

Ram enjoying priya state : neha sacchi matlab kya abhi tak tum jhoot bolrahi thi kya???

Neha : haan... kyunki iss sherni ki wajahse .. kamsekam ye baath sunke mujhse baath karegi lekin nehi.. neha pressing herself more over priya... : tumhe kya laga priya mein tumse share nehi karna chahthi mere aur vikram ki baaremein... mein pehle iss buddhu (pointing to vikram ) se personally milna chahthi thi uske baad tumhe aur amacchi se milwaana chahthi thi.. issi mein ye dono yahan tapak pade rahi baath wahan cake shop ki intro... uss din humdono ki jaghda hogayi thi isliye mein tumhe uss waqt nehi bathayi.. jab ye dono yahan aaye toh tereko kehne ke liye himmat nehi thi mujhe.. aur tum... tum mujhe tease karrahi ho jab sach saamne aayi toh mere se gussa kyu... mere shaadi ki baath bhi set karrahi ho mere liye ithna sab kuch karrahi ho ye gussa dikhaane kya jarurat thi???? Maanthi hu galthi huyi... kaafi hurt ho...

Priya wicning in pain : neha neeche uttro ... nehi toh kal ki shaadi program sachmein cancel kardungi sochlo...

Neha with in a sec get down from priya back...

Priya stands up and make sure that spinal cord is ok or not...then glares at everyone...

Priya steps towards neha , and twists neha one hand back...: shaadi ki naam sunthe he oont pahadke neech aagayi na...??/ neha wincing in pain

Neha : pls priya sorry sorry yaar. Mujhe aur kuch sooja he nehi... pls meri haath chodo mere liye naa he sahi bechara vikram ke liye... kaisa lagega unko unki honewali biwi handicapped... meri inlaws ke baaremein socho yaar... pls

Priya twisting her hand more : waah beta abhi shaadi huyi nehi abhi se sasural ki fikar.. aur mera kya bachpan se leke aajtak tere saath di mujhe kya silaah di tu...

Neha wincing in pain : priya pleaseee yaar ab bas karo...

Priya leaves her hand.. neha sets her hand properly.. vikram witnessing this crazy friendship .. both neha and priya hugs eachother tightly..

Amacchi steps towards them.. caresses their hair take them in to her hug... gave a peck on their forehead

Everyone very happy... kehthe haina anth bhala hotoh sab bhala...

Neha and priya sharing same bed... both laid down hanging their heads out from bed...

Neha : priya am sorry ...

Priya : arey ab bas karo jaane do tumhari khushi se jyada important mere liye kuch bhi nehi... mujhe isliye bura lagi ki tum ithni waqt se mujhse share nehi ki .. aise toh kabhi nehi hua aajtak har choti choti baath we shared... ab ye tumhrai life ki sabse badi baath and u didn't shared aisa laga ki mein parayi bangayi hu mein akeli hogayi... With a sad tone ... neha didn't said anything just took priya hand in her

Neha : tum aur mein kabhi paraye nehi hosakthe ... tumhare alawa meri iss duniya mein hai he kaun...tum kaho toh mein sacchi shaadi nehi karungi... hamesha tumhare saath he rahungi... Priya smiles at her wiping her tears

Priya : oye drama queen ek aur baar ye baath ki hai na tu mein khud tumhari...

Neha frowns : meri???? Kya???

Priya keeping her pointer finger on her chin : sach mein tumhari shaadi rukwadungi... by then all of sudden neha gets up

Neha : nehiii... priya smiles at her

Priya holds her ear: manmein laddu phoot rahi hai.. mere saamne dikhawa karthi ho???? Neha wincing in pain

Neha : pls priya... mere liye tum sabse important but vikrammm.. saying this she lowered her gaze

Priya smiles at her... pats on neha forehead...

Priya : patha hai ab vikram he tumhari sab kuch hai am very happy for you.. side hugs her tightly neha blushing

Neha lifting her head : toh ab sab kuch set haina hum dono ke beech

Priya : haan yaar all of sudden vikram jumps in between them..both priya and neha astounded

Vikram : thank u thank u sooo much priya ye suspense ko thodne ke liye... iss pagli ki wajahse neendh nehi aarahi hai mujhe subah se mere dil baitha jaaraha tha kabhi haan kabhi naa...

Neha gives a deadly look to vikram.. by then ram too joins them priya looks at him with corner eyes

Priya : vikram am sorry mere wajahse tumhe ithna sab kuch...

Vikram stops : nehi priya tumhari wajah se nehi ye hum dono ki galthi yaar tumse chupana nehi chayiye tha... its ok ab johogaya so hogaya...

Priya : mein selfish nehi thi vikram just mere life mein kuch log hai jinko mein khud se bhi jyada pyar karthi hu.. unmein se ek hai neha... bachpan se leke aajtak kabhi bhi humdono ek dusre se koi bhi baath chupayi nehi.. aaj achanak neha ki life sabse badi baath mujhe usne khud nehi share ki isliye mujhe bura lagi ... mein koi selfish ya aaplogon ki khushi se mujhe koi dikhath nehi hai.. neha ki khushi mujhe sabse jyada important hai... While saying all these tears are rolling down from her cheeks.. priya lowered her gaze she closed her eyes tightly

Vikram neha : kneels down infront of her

Vikram took priya hand inhis hand : hey priya... tumhe mujhe safayi dene ki jarurat nehi coz I know everything about u and neha... pls yaar

Neha too joins : priya ye sab kyu bolrahe ho .. I know yaar agar tum selfish hothi toh meri liye ithna sab kuch kyu karthi... Waise ye sab kyu bolrahe ho pls priya tum meri priya hum sabki pyari si nikutiii.. tumhare liye hamari khushi sabse jyada important hai ye baath kehne ki jarurat nehi hai

Vikram looks at ram.. ram just shrugs his shoulders but inside he is feeling very bad for priya

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#75
Wow it's just superb update
Priya maan gayi n Neha k sath misunderstanding Bhi clear
Neha on priyas neck n then Priya caught Neha hand
Wow very nice update
Continue soon
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#76
Superb parts 2 upates wow di n love ur ff always pls continue soon
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wow .superb update.
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pl continue.
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awesome update
beautiful story
thanks for pm
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Superb updates
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Very nice update.
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