New Story Ajeeb Prem Kahaani Part 16 last part B updated on page 29 - Page 9

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Part 8:

Recap : Neha too joins : priya ye sab kyu bolrahe ho .. I know yaar agar tum selfish hothi toh meri liye ithna sab kuch kyu karthi... Waise ye sab kyu bolrahe ho pls priya tum meri priya hum sabki pyari si nikutiii.. tumhare liye hamari khushi sabse jyada important hai ye baath kehne ki jarurat nehi hai

Vikram looks at ram.. ram just shrugs his shoulders but inside he is feeling very bad for priya

priya looks at ram with teary eyes... ram for a sec looks in her eyes after that leaves the place...

everyone sleeping peacefully... Except priya and ram...

priya thinking : aise kyu react ki mein... mr.kapoor ki baathon se ithni bura kyu lagi , wo kya sochthe hongey mere baaremein... unhe kaisa laga hoga ... aur mujhe gussa hona chahiye unpe... aur mein... she gets up from bed... reach terrace... she sat looking at the sky...

Here ram in room : ye kya kiya meine... bechari... bahuth hurt huyi hai mere baathon se... ek minute mein kyu aisa sochraha hu... mein kuch galath thodi na kaha... wo aise react ki wo uski problem ithni sensitive hona uski problem hai mera nehi... He tries to catch some sleep... he close his eyes... he saw priya tucking her hair strands back of the ear... he gets up in jerk... ruffles his hair... steps out from room he too reaches terrace there he sees priya asusual tucking her hair back

Ram rubs his eyes thinks : ye kya mein khule aankhon se sapna dekhraha hu kya???? Again rubs his eyes ...

He steps towards her very calmly sits beside her... priya looks at her side and again shifts her gaze..

Its been so many minutes both sat there like that looking at sky... priya gets up to leave... Ram holds her wrist... priya looks at him ... theres no emotions in her eyes... ram felt bad.. priya turns her gaze

Ram : am sorry priya... I didn't mean it ... wo...toh..

Priya makes herself free from his grip very calmly : its ok mr.kapoor... bas ek baath kehna chahthi hu... jab kisike baaremein humein kuch patha nehi hothi hai ... unko judge karne ki humein koi haq nehi hai...

Priya leaves from there... ram sat there for a while.. thinking abt what priya said to him

Nect morning it's a great day in nevik life... everyone ready to start their journey to meet vikrams family

Priya giving instructions to someone to look after Ngo and kids... just then ram came there in night suit yawning .. he looks at them.. vikram smiles

Vikram : good morning ram.. hogayi subah???

Ram comes to daadi ... encircling his arms around her neck : good morning .. good morning daadi... looks at neha and priya good morning..

Neha and priya : good morning.. still priya upset with him.. she not even look at him...

Ram : so aaplog tayyar ho??? Goes to vikram side hugs: all the best mere yaar.. .

Daadi slaps on his shoulder : uska chodo tum pehle jaake freshup hojao... abhitak hum bhi chai nehi pee.. chai peene ke baad hum nikalthe hai... priya jao beta jaake dekho...

Priya nods her head and leaves but one question eating her mind thinking : mr.karpur nehi aarahe hai kya???

After a while everyone seated on living room having their tea... Ram constantly looking at priya.. but priya didn't bother to look at him she completely avoiding him...

Priya keeping her cup aside: am done.. ab sab tayyar hojayiye... humein nikalna hoga warna pahunchthe pahunchthe der hojayegi... Looks at ram.. ram sipping his tea smiles at her..

Vikram understood whom priya indicating : priya ... ram nehi aayega humare saath

Neha : kyuuu?

Vikram : mere parents ko pasand nehi hai hamari dosthi??? Priya knotted her eyebrows later she murmurs

Priya : mujhe lagtha tha sirf mujhse problem hai ...mr.kapoor ko lekin dosth ke parents se bhi problem.. mr.kapoor se jyada mr.karpur suits him... glares at him angrily...

Daadi : chalo bhai meri hogayi chalein.. everybody starts to move.. priya turns without looking at ram

Priya : jab aap yahan rukrahe ho toh ek favour karsakthe ho???

Ram feeling happy.. a smile crept on his lips : haan ... haan sure... saying this he comes to priya

Priya looks at him (sherni look ) : pls peehu ka khyal rakhna... mere bagair wo kabhi akeli nehi rahi hai so...

Ram blinks his eyes saying yes : yeah sure...u don't worry

Here nevik, daadi, priya reached vikrams house.. they met with their parents... as mr& mrs shergill already know daadi and moreover very close to them... everyone had a great time... vikram parents very happy with nevik relation ship.. now they want to do their marriage asap ... actually they want to do engagement ceremony that day only they arranged everything.. at evening they fixed engagement part with only family relatives...everyone gathered .. nevik exchanged rings... now time for exchanging shagun from girl parents to boy parents and vice versa... everyone don't know what to do as neha don't have anyone other than priya and daadi... she left the place crying... Vikram and priya runs behind her

Priya rubbing her shoulder side hugs neha : neha... neha... ye kya yaar tumhari life ki sabse badi din hai aur tu rorahi hai... very bad turns neha and wipes her tears.. smile darling... kya hua hai yaar ithna ro kyu rahi hai... uncle aunty kuch nehi kahan na???

Neha nodding her head negatively : I know maa-papa kabhi kuch nehi kahenge.. unko kabhi problem nehi hogi.. par

Priya frowns : par??? Par kya..

Neha wiping her tears : khud socho yaar... abhi sirf engagement ki rasam hai toh maa baap ya koi bade ki jarurat hai kuch rasmein hothey haina jo sirf apne nibhana padega... aur humari kismath dekho... again she burst in tears... controlling herself... mere wajahse maa-papa vikram ko aagey kithne problems face karna padega????

Vikram comes to her takes her into hug : rubbing her back ???pagal ho kya tum teri wajahse iss ghar sirf khushiya aayenge koi problems nehi... Ab boldiya lekin aagey ye sab math bolo tumhare liye hum ye sab rasamein karrahe hai .. kyunki tum he kahan tha ki tumhe proper traditional wedding chahiye with all rituals ab tumhi khush nehi ho... vikram lifts her face holding with palms.. both are still in hug... vikram wiping her tears with his thumb... now stop this... mujhe tum aise acchi nehi lagthe ho??? Please smile... Neha smiles and again hugs him\

Priya witnessing these love birds... love between them... how caring vikram.. he loves her so much... she is very happy for neha.. releasing a sigh she steps towards them and pats on neha shoulder

Neha looks at prya.. lowers her gaze : ab chalein.. jaadu ko jhappi milgayi nay a fir aur bhi kuch chahiye winks at neha indicating vikram..

These three reached hall. There they saw some rituals are performing with some middle aged couple.. vikram very well know them.. he runs to them.. takes blessings ..

Lady caressing his cheeks : meri beti kahan hai??? Vikram points finger towards neha...

Lady comes to neha .. both neha and priya are clueless...confused why she addressing neha as daughter

Vikram signals neha to take blessings .. neha bends to take blessings but lady stops : kapoor khandan ki betiyon ki jagah pairon pe nehi..yahan ( pointing to heart) hotha hai... and hugs neha with all love

Priya goes to daadi : amacchi ... kya horaha hai mujhe kuch samajme nehi aarahi hai...

Amacchi smiles just then that lady comes to amacchi and touches her feet.. amacchi caresses her head.. with teary eye

Amacchi : kaise ho Krishna... krishna holding amacchi palm which caressing her cheek

Krishna kapoor : mein acchi hu beeji... aap kaise ho.. hamari yaad nehi aathi kya aapko.. ngo aane ke baad ek baar bhi palat kar nehi dekhi aapne

Amacchi : mein bahuth acchi hu.. bahuth khush hu.. ye accha kiya tumne.. neha ki maa-baap ki farz tu aur amar nibha rahe ho

Krishna smiles and looks at amarnath , amaranth comes and takes blessing from amacchi

Amarnath : kaise ho maa aap?? Ghar aane ka iraada hai ya nehi ???? priya aur neha stealing looks ... priya just shrugs her shoulders.. Krishna noticing neha and priya signalpathy

Krishna taking neha steps towards amarnath : ye lo ji hamari beti se toh milo pehle??? AK looks at her caresses her cheek.. neha felt fatherly love in his touch.. tears welled up inher eyes.. she bends down to took blessings..

AK : arey ghar ki beti.. ghar ki laskhmi hothi hai.. aur lakshmi rothe nehi hai...side hugs neha.. neha wipes her tears

Neha : uncle... AK stops her

AK : uncle nehi..Papa kaho... neha hugs AK.. KK caresses neha hair

Priya in tears vikram stood beside her : ab tum kyu rorahi ho priya

Priya wiping her tears : khushi ki aansu hai vikram... mein tumhe kaise thanks bolu... u gave neha the worlds best gift.. uski life ki sabse badi khushi dedi tumne... thank u thank u soo much

Vikram nods his head : mein nehi priya... ram ki wajahse hua hai ye... priya frowned .. yes ram ki wajahse hua... ram ke parents hai.. Krishna kapoor .. amarnath kapoor... Ram ne he unko hamare baaremein bola and then he asked them will they accept neha as their daughter and perform every ritual in marriage priya very proud hearing this abt ram ...

Vikram : wo dil ka bura nehi hai priya...

Priya : then aapke parents...???

Vikram : ram ki life mein kuch din pehle aisa kuch hua ki wo poori tarah tutgaya hai.. ram apneaap ko sabse alag kardiya tha... sirf mere saath touch mein tha... Tab ekdin mujhe ek badi company mein interview ke liye bulaya gaya tha.. but I couldn't .. am with ram... coz he was in very bad condition... Krishna aunty asked me just one favour that take care of my son... I want his happiness... usko pehle ki tarah dekhna chahthi hu... so from that day am with him.. where ever he goes ill accompany him... mummy papa ko meri future ki bahuth fikar hai... ram toh mujhe bahuth baar kahan ki mein usko chodke apna life pe dhyan deno but I cant I never leave him... soch bhi nehi saktha mein uske baaremein.. he means a lot to me... While saying this his eyes are wet... isliye.. wo unko face nehi karna chahtha...

Priya feeling something for ram.. she is feeling proud... she don't know reason but she is very happy.. she feeling like freed herself from some burden... she goes to amacchi and hugs are tightly... amacchi talking with Kapoors and shergills... all are taken aback by priya move.. priya looks at them

Priya mimes : sorry... amacchi slaps on priya forehead

Amacchi : pagli... taking priya in side hug.. ye priya hai aise he hai poora ghar ghoomthi rehthi hai beechmein beechmein aake aise harkathe karthi rehthi ... kabhi jhappi toh kabhi pappi... meri sabse pyari hai.. sabse jyada merese pyar karthi hai... meri bahuth khyal rakthi hai.. gives a peck on priya forehead

Krishna smilingly : toh tumhi priya ho???

Amacchi questions : haan kyu???pehle kahi dekhi ho kya..???

Krishna nodding her head : nehi beeji... inke baaremein bahuth kuch suna meine..

Amacchi : matlab

Krishna teasingly : sherni... Jhansi ki rani...??? Etc etc... by then priya tightly closed her eyes in embarassement

Priya cursing ram : so mr.kapoor ye sab tumhara kiye daraar hai... mein chodungi nehi mr.karpur...

So everyone had a great time sharing so many things.. chatting abt nevik marriage and functions... arrangements... they had their lunch everyone gelled up very well with neha and vice versa

Its almost tea time Priya standing alone looking at sky with tea cup in hand krishna noticing priya continuously ...all of sudden priya took out her mobile dailled

One side convo

Priya : helooo... mein priya peehu se baath karwao

Priya : heloo princess... gussa ho kya???

Priya : pls gussa thook dona darling... merese gussa ho..??? tumhari priya se...

Priya : ye huyi na baath... love u sooo much... gave a peck to mobile

Priya : accha sunona... wo mr.karpur hai wahan pe .. hearing mr.karpur Krishna frowns..looks at vikram

Vikram giggles : mr.kapoor... wo ram ki nickname

Krishna : lekin kyu???

Vikram : wo isliye kyunki priya ke hisaab se ram jaghadlu hai...toh... Kk shows her palm saying to stop... she too smiles

Kk : waise indono ke beech kuch chalrahi hai kya ??matlab...??

Vikram nodding head negatively : nooo...chance he nehi.. mujhe aur neha ko bhi ye hi lagtha tha...lekin chance he nehi hai aunty... Jab bhi saamne aathe hai dono ladayi karthe ...inn dono ki pehle mulaqat se aajtak jaghda he hothi rahi hai...

KK :Hmmm... Ram sab bathaya mujhe... Aajkal jab se phone karthe haina jyaa time priya ke baaremein he kehthe hai wo... isliye mujhe laga... Dekthe hai...abhi mein ati hu priya se milke... may be uski taraf se kuch... giving a smile she goes to meet priya

Priya in call

Priya : so... aap aapke maa se meri aise tareef ki??? Sternly

Ram startles : mein... mein kya..kya tareef ki...I don't know anything

Priya : don't act smart mr. kapoor.. kya kahan aapne sherni...jhansi ki rani... hmmm

Ram still trying his level best..biting his tongue : arey ... arey .. meri baath tho suno... wo.. wo..

Priya enjoying this : wo.. wo.. kya kya aagey bhi bolo... very bad... ek ladki ke baaremein aise kehthe hai kya koi very bad...

Ram smiling : arey... mujhe baath karne ka mauka toh do ... tab mujhe aisa laga isliye maa se wo sab kahan... waise let me tell u... mein jhut thodi na bola

Priya angrily : still. U saying same... hadh hothi hai yaar... Very bad... u know what mr.karpur suits u best huh...

Ram : oye helloo stop stop kya hai tumne... karpur???

Priya :haaan...

Ram : sherni... Drama queen...

Priya : mr.karpur... dabbu

Ram childishly : dabbu math kaho... priya

Priya : dabbu... dabbu...dabbuuu..saying this she turns there kk stood there crossing her arms towards chest ...priya stops

Ram : priya enough ... bahuth hua... he didn't get any response ... hellooo..helooo..

Priya in low tone : mein baadmein baath karthi hu.. peehu ka khyal rakhiyega.. she keeps the call and smiles

Priya : wo.. bas...aise he...

KK smilingly : meine kuch poocha ??? priya nods her head negatively..

KK : thank you priya ... Beeji ka ithna accha khyal rakhne ke liye... thank you so much

Priya : aunty aap thank you math boliye.. (looking at amacchi.whos busy with nevik) amacchi ke liye hum sab kuch bhi karein wo kam he hoga... she is very very special ... she is the best ... jab bhi humein humare apno ki jarurath tha tab humare kehne se pehle humari saath khadi hoke ..humein hosla di.. humein jeene ke aaas di amacchi ne.. agar amacchi nehi hothe toh patha nehi hamara... tears welled up in priya ears... she controlling herself...KK felt very happy talking with priya .. KK caresses priya cheek.. tears rolled down from priya cheeks...

KK to lighten priya mood : toh hogayi mere bte ki class lena... aaplogon ki language mein jaghda karna??? Hearing ram name Priya smiles

Priya : aisa kuch nehi aunty... Wo...toh ...aise he

KK looking in to priya eyes : mere bte se pyar karthi ho??

Priya cant figure what she heard : kya kahan aunty???

KK again caressing her cheeks : mere ram se pyar karthi ho?? Jhoot math bolo.. jab tum ram se baath karrahi thi.. tumhari zubaan kuch aur kehrahi hai... tumhari aankhen kuch aur.. abhi bhi ram ki naam lene se hasi aagayi tumhari hoothon pe.. aap dono ki ladayi... ram ki mooh se ek ladki ke baaremein ithna sabkuch isse pehle kabhi nehi suna mein...

Priya lowers her gaze : aisa kuch nehi hai aunty...

KK : hmm.. its ok beta.. mujhe jo laga meine... sorry

Priya cuts her in middle : aunty please.. sorry math bolo... aap bade hai... Aap kuch bhi poochsakthe hai.. pls sorry math bolo.. looks at her pleadingly.. KK smiles at her antics

KK extends her hand : friends????

Priya hesitatingly forwards her hand : friends both shook hands.. KK hugs her... .. priya out from hug

Priya : ab jab hum friends bangaye hai toh ... dosthi ka ek oosul hai.. dosthi mein no sorry no thank you...

KK nods her head positively : Yes mam agreed... both laughs.. both gelled up very well with eachother..

Its time to leave ... neha, priya, vikram amacchi ready.. kapoors also ready to leave ..

KK takes priya aside : ek waada karogi ??? KK extends her palm for promise

Priya entwining her palm : poochiye kya waada hai ??

KK : mere bte ram ka khyal rakhna..mujhe mere bte wapas dedo... mujhe nehi patha ye mein tumse kyu poochrahi hu.. lekin meri mann kehrahi hai ek tum hi ho mere bte ko phirse jeena sikhasakthi ho... kyunki ... she couldn't complete her lines AK comes to take her

AK : ab kya baathein horahi hai Krishna... chalo na derhorahi hai.. KK looks at priya.. priya stood there

Mr& mrs. Shergill wants to spend some time with vikram... but vikram stubborn that he wants to be with ram...

Priya comes to vikram : vikram... aap yehi rahiye... mr.kapoor ki chintha math karo.. mein acchese khyal rakhungi... aap thoda waqt uncle aunty se beethayiye .. trust me

Vikram saw something in priya eyes .. without protesting he said : OK smiles

Priya : thank you...

at night neha,priya, amacchi reached NGO.. ram waiting at doorway.. neha took amacchi to her room..priya came there holding bags .. she saw ram..ram looking at her without blinking.. she saw something in ram eyes for her... ram very happy seeing priya... he want to hug her..but he cant...

both are looking at each other... their eyes speaking a lot of emotions... theres a respect for other in eachother eyes..love for each other... asusual priya hair strands disturbing ram sight..he tries to tuck them back.. they hear neha calling priya.. priya tucks her hair strands back of ear.. good night mr.kapoor saying this she leaves

priya : aarahi hu neha... kya hua...

neha : mujhe bahuth neendh aarahi hai.. mein sone jaarahi hu.. neha looks at ram

neha : thank you so much ram... u cant imagine what u did for me... I cant express how am feeling... am always greatful toyou

ram smiles : ab humdono rishthe se bhai behen hai toh pls no thanks and all.. tum aur vikram khush raho.. that what all I want .. neha smile

ram : good night ..

neha : good night.. priya looking at ram without blinking

priya thinking : mein aapko galath samajhrahi thi mr.kapoor.. thank you for everything... ram snaps his finger infront of priya eyes..she comes out of trance.. she smiles

ram too smiles : chalo ...

after few minutes... priya coming out from her room.. she freshly bath.. wearing capri pant..tee.. folded hair like bun... Some hair strands asusual falling on her face she tucked them back of ear.. ram saw her

ram : hii... iss waqt kahan jaarahi ho.. soyi nehi kya... I though u slept ..?

priya : nehi mr.kapoor neench nehi aarahi hai .. aap jayiye mein thodi der terrace pe baithke aajaungi..

ram : if u don't mind may i???priya smiles

both reached terrace .. both sat there silently.. no one is talking with eachother.. both just staring at sky..stars..moon... its very calm... priya remembering KK words... ram remembering about a old lady words about priya and her past .. finally priya broke silence

priya : patha hai mr.kapoor... mein harroz sone se pehle yahan terrace pe baithke taaron bhari aasmaan dekthi hu toh bahuth sukoon milthi hai.. zindagi ko dekhne ki nazaara he badaljaathe hai.. ye chand aane ke liye suraj hardin marthe hai.. ye jo sitare hai .. kehthe hai ki jo log marjaathe hai wo log sitare banjathe hai.. ye sitare apno ki ehsaas dethe.. ye jo thandi hawa... din bhar ki takaan ko mita dethi hai.. sochne lagthi hu ki insaan bhi kithna pagal hai... kuch log future banaane ki chaah mein.. kuch log past ki yaadon mein... aaj jeena he bhooljaathe hai... aanewaala kal kya hoga kisko patha... kal johogaya wo hamare basmein nehi tha.. hum kuch karsakthe hai toh wo sirf aaj... kya chahiye ek happy life ke liye.. ek accha pariwar.. maa baap, bhai behen, bacchon ki chehre ki hasi... jab mein aathe he peehu ki hasi dekthi hu toh saari din bhar ki tension patha nehi chaltha kaise bhuljaathi hu... priya looks at ram.. ram thinking...

ram : tum bahuth strong ho priya... sab aise nehi rehsakthe... tumhare liye mere mann mein respect aur badgayi .. aaj savitha aunty ne bathaye mujhe.. aur peehu se ... am speechless... and am very sorry...

priya gets up and starts to leave .. ram holds her wrist.. priya looks at him teary eyed

priya : sabki life mein kabhi na kabhi kuch aisa hotha hai ki unko sambhalna.. accept karna mushkil hojathi hai.. iska matlab ye nehi ki hum jeena chode.. hamari apno ko takleef dena.. hamari responsibilities se bhaagna... galthi karke sorry kehna its not worth actually it doesnt mean... galthi ko sudharna chahiye... so please mr.kapoor... ram understood what she saying

ram looks in to priya eyes : am decided kal jaaraha hu mein... priya feel happy hearing his decision...priya smiles.. ram too.. he gets up... ram booked his flight for return to his family... 3am his flight.. priya said him that she will accompany him ...both decided to take a nap... but they couldn't slept.. both are changing sides on bed... priya thinking abt kk words..

priya : kya mein pyar karthi hu mr.kapoor se??? then she strikes off that thought .. its impossible .. how can i..

here ram trying to sleep.. whenever he close his eyes..priya image comes infront of him.. especially she tucks her hair strands

finally time to leave for ram... priya also ready to go with him

priya : ek baar amacchi se ..?? ram cuts her in middle

ram : nehi abhi disturb math karo.. subah tum inform karo... please

priya : ok... chalein..

both raya in cab... both are feeling very bad thinking abt their separation...both feeling miserable... just stealing glances... whenever they face eachother they just smile.. both reached airport.. still theres time so raya sat there .. unknowingly ram holds priya hand tightly.. entwines... priya too responds.. both looking into eachother eyes... their eyes speaking what they didn't said eachother.. a tear line formed in priya eyes... even ram eyes also wet... they heard announcement saying flight delay for 15 mins.. both are very happy

ram : priya coffee??? Priya nods her head.. both sat in caf, ordered cappucino

ram sipping coffee: patha nehi phir kab milenge...? Priya faking smile

priya : yeah.. naseeb mein hotoh jaldi he milenge again silence prevails.. both looking here and there

priya : aapko contact karsakthi ??? ram smiles

15 mins over.. they here announcement

Ram : so then.. bye take care

Priya : u too have a safe fly.. happy journey..pls inform m..ram looks at her priya bits her tongue.. I mean amacchi ko ..?

Ram murmuring : Jhansi rani... Dil ki baath zubaan pe laathi he nehi..priya heard Jhansi rani word

Priya : kya kahan aapne Jhansi rani..? mr.karpur..

Ram playfully : tum kabhi nehi sudhorgi??

Priya : aap bhi ??? hadh hai yaar.. mein aapke liye yahan aayi hu aur aap ye hai ki.. she turns her gaze smilingly..

Ram holds her hand : I know tum mere liye yahan aayiye lekin mujhe tumhari wo upset wali face pasand nehi hai.. ye sherni wali attitude bahuth pasand hai... ye jo smile haina kabhi chodo math... eye lock.. priya hair strands disturbing his sight.. ram tries to tuck.. but asusual priya tries to do.. ramholds her hand.. looking in to her eyes.. he tucks back them.. slowly pulls her head towards him both joins their forehead.they stood there like that for few minutes again announcement they hear

This time ram turns in jerk closing his eyes.. priya held his wrist.. priya blinks her eyes... ram smiles..

Sorry for mistakes

Beautiful update...
Raya falls for each other...Pls continue soon...

very nice update

Dee just superb update
Krishna ji thinking correct Priya is in love but Priya hasn't realised it. Please make Priya realise it and confession
The raya conversation at the end before ram decides to leave is just mind blowing. It was so emotional.
Please continue soon.
And you didn't tell me you were updating.. :-(
Thank you for your pm

Awww very cute n sweet kk was right priya has fallen n ram too want them to be in contact n be in touch n plss continue soon

Superb update...