OS- Raya Milan next part dated 27th jan updated in page 9

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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Ok Next time No Rajat only sameer😉. I will send you separately ashwin -shruti scene...is it okay for you😆
happy to hear that you love this😊

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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Ramsakshi
Awesome OS plz continue soon n Thanks for the PM

thank you🤗

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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Wowww
Sandyyy .. This is tooo Gooddd ..Muhaa for this lovely gift ..

I was just running with the flow but stopped at their actual milan ..
hawww
That was utterly romantic ..

The way their life started and understanding improved
and both trusted each other .. lovely narration
when Ram didn't understand why she didnt come on time he bursted out in anger . later he realised the reason and told sorry and that hug remebered me march 10 th wala hug 😉

Than their love grown deep before confession everything happend .. asd so beautiful and i so so loved it ..

Vikram &Ram convo made me ROfls you know .. super
so they have twins and vikram has baby boy .. lovely family .. loved their bonding 😆👏👏

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Amazing short story ..
keep writing more ..

Thank you
tight bear wali hugs for this .. 🤗

Thank you so much Neel u like it.

March 10 hug...konsa🤔

even i ilke Ram-vik scene at the end😆

Im so happy...thanks for comments🤗

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan
Woow superbbb OS beautifully penned down keep writing
more love the last para Ram-vik convo
Ty for Pm😛

Thanks for comments 😊

even i too like ram-vik scene

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
just awesome story
thanks for pm

thank you😊

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: shakshithebest
beautiful story.Your stories are always interesting.This os is simply superb.

thank you so much🤗

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peeyara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

i have read it sandy in the morning, will comment soon 😆

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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
The journey of Raya continue with their little nok jhok to their sweet gestures for each other. Ram Priya getting close understanding the need of love, his anger melted as soon as he get to know the truth why his wife got let. Their desire and love overtook on them and the two soul Ram Priya became as one Raya.
Thr little bantering at hospital between Ram Vik regarding Priya Neha delivery was very cute. They both share a unique friendship.
Pls continue soon writing another story or Os on Raya missing the style of your writing. Thanx for the pm...

lovely comment aanchal

thank you very much🤗

will try to write 😊