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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

mai thodi na dekhti rahti hoon k kisne kiske liye comment kiya😆
s se koi bhi hosakta hai samrat, samar, sagar, shashank etc 😆 u can choose any S 😉
haan software walo ko dur ka sochna padta hai 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thx for the pm.
Im very sorry for being this late.
so mere liye neel ki bday aaj bhi jaari hai 😆 , so sandhya say thanks to me 😛 😆 , ki maine aapki dedication ko itne din tak taaza rehne diya 😉 😆

part 1
rambabu toh pehle se hi fida hai, uffo priya baar baar ek hi galat aadmi se uljhti ho, stupid naalayak ashwin par, but a big thank u to ash, jisne shruti k saath bhaaga, nhi toh polar bear aur sherni ka milan nhi hota, so gadhe ashwin ko big thanks 😆
esha, kitni stupid hai, ram ne kabhi bataya nhi ki he doesn't love her. Kitni badtameez hai yaar, the way dhe behaved with priya is out of hurt n hatred, and loosing ram justified, par itni rok tok ram pe, itne saare restrictions, hey ram accha hua ramji ne mauke pe chuaka maara seedhe shaadi kar liye priya se😆 , ye hui na binness man k lakshan, I like it.
kitne turns twists, saare k keede first part me hi khtam 😆 very gud.
Ramji ne kapde rakhne ko jagah banadi thi ya bikhar dene ko, itne clumsy ram 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2, uyi maa itna ego madam ko ki notes, assignment pe itna gussa 😆 , chalo ramji ne apna avtar dikha diya phaadke 😆 , priya ki chori chupe likhna ram ka usse side look se dekhna n billi ko pakadkena awesome.ho mast bike pe wah, ram enjoying g priya's proximity, priya forgetting where she is 😉 😆 , kya mast bike ride thi yaar 😆 😳
well ram kitne baar confess karega, 😆 first part me bhi bola tha, diary me itne accge se describe kiya tha, priya ki har ek posture ko, ada ko, smile ko, nazar ko, ab kya kahe itni subdar to wo hai hi, har koi kavi ban jaata hai 😆
exam ki tension thi dono ko ki, ilu bolne ki 😆 , mujhe lag rha thaexam prep se zyada ilu prep kiya tha dono ne 😆
raya ka koi bharosa nhi kab , kaise, kaha , kya karein 😉 😆

well, mere liye the best part was last hospital convo, just classic hilarious 😆 😆 😉

Yhi hospital mila tha, abhi pregnant hona tha, koun hai samjh nhi aa rha n all so nice n beautiful ly sketched.
Mujhe abhi bhi maxa aa rha hai wo svene yaad karke.
viks boy n ram ko beti mubarak ho 😆

kudos madam sandhya.

thx for the pm of thus part too 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara



haan mujhe iss kahani me toh bas lag rha hai, sabhi college aaye the shaadi k liye ladka ladki dhundne 😆 😆 , dekho har koi vik neha, ash shruti, ram priya, bechari Esha , oye sandhya aapke r ko laa sakti thi na for esha ki jodi 😆 and then neel se kick zaroor milte 😆 😆

naseem idhar kisine dxam nhi diya sabhi patane ko aaye the pat gye maa baap ne industry bana rkhi hai , toh life set hogyi, ambani k bete ki padhne ki kya zaroorat hai bolo 😆 😆 😆
Waise main software me itna shayad nhi sochti jitna ki idhar raya stories me sochti hoon

😆 😛 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Thx for the pm.
Im very sorry for being this late.
so mere liye neel ki bday aaj bhi jaari hai 😆 , so sandhya say thanks to me 😛 😆 , ki maine aapki dedication ko itne din tak taaza rehne diya 😉 😆

part 1
rambabu toh pehle se hi fida hai, uffo priya baar baar ek hi galat aadmi se uljhti ho, stupid naalayak ashwin par, but a big thank u to ash, jisne shruti k saath bhaaga, nhi toh polar bear aur sherni ka milan nhi hota, so gadhe ashwin ko big thanks 😆
esha, kitni stupid hai, ram ne kabhi bataya nhi ki he doesn't love her. Kitni badtameez hai yaar, the way dhe behaved with priya is out of hurt n hatred, and loosing ram justified, par itni rok tok ram pe, itne saare restrictions, hey ram accha hua ramji ne mauke pe chuaka maara seedhe shaadi kar liye priya se😆 , ye hui na binness man k lakshan, I like it.
kitne turns twists, saare k keede first part me hi khtam 😆 very gud.
Ramji ne kapde rakhne ko jagah banadi thi ya bikhar dene ko, itne clumsy ram 😆

Chalo at last aapka comment aa hi gaya😆
Ashwin- shruti ki kahani bhi likh deti lekin phir OS aur bada ho jaata. Ram ne socha bhi nahi hoga ki Priya uski zindagi mein aayegi😆. Ramji ka clumsy behaviour hamare real life mein kaafi match karta hai😆.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Part 2, uyi maa itna ego madam ko ki notes, assignment pe itna gussa 😆 , chalo ramji ne apna avtar dikha diya phaadke 😆 , priya ki chori chupe likhna ram ka usse side look se dekhna n billi ko pakadkena awesome.ho mast bike pe wah, ram enjoying g priya's proximity, priya forgetting where she is 😉 😆 , kya mast bike ride thi yaar 😆 😳
well ram kitne baar confess karega, 😆 first part me bhi bola tha, diary me itne accge se describe kiya tha, priya ki har ek posture ko, ada ko, smile ko, nazar ko, ab kya kahe itni subdar to wo hai hi, har koi kavi ban jaata hai 😆
exam ki tension thi dono ko ki, ilu bolne ki 😆 , mujhe lag rha thaexam prep se zyada ilu prep kiya tha dono ne 😆
raya ka koi bharosa nhi kab , kaise, kaha , kya karein 😉 😆

well, mere liye the best part was last hospital convo, just classic hilarious 😆 😆 😉

Yhi hospital mila tha, abhi pregnant hona tha, koun hai samjh nhi aa rha n all so nice n beautiful ly sketched.
Mujhe abhi bhi maxa aa rha hai wo svene yaad karke.
viks boy n ram ko beti mubarak ho 😆

kudos madam sandhya.

thx for the pm of thus part too 😆

muje bhi cupboard, assignment aur last scene achha laga😆. Ram ke dairy mein likhne se kya hota hai...directly bolne par effect jyada padta hai na😆. Yahan kaafi logo ko yahi tension thi ki Raya ke exam ka kya hua...mein bhi toh wahi keh rahi hoon kuch bhi hone do bade ghar ke log hai unhe konsi tension,😆
Ram ko beti beta dono hue.
Thanks for comments🤗. kaafi time se wait kar rahi thi.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

sach mai kisis ne exam nhi diya phir bhi sandy ne sabko pass karwa diya 🤣 kash wo meri HM hoti 😆
i liked one of your observation "exam ke liye prep kar rahe the ya ILU bolne k liye" 🤣 this line was awesome 😆
aap raya ki story mai sochte hai thats good, writers ka bhala karti ho 😆 acche kaam jaari rakho😆

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