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sandhya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: ic_2000
Awsum story...
Thanks for pm.
Keep writing.

Thank you😊

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cloud121

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

👏 👏 👏
Sandy kya baat hai 😉
😆 😆 😆
Raya k exam ka kya hua 😆
Are bacche bhi aa gye
Aage continue krogi kya 😉

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: SouLScOREr
👏 👏 👏
Sandy kya baat hai 😉
😆 😆 😆
Raya k exam ka kya hua 😆
Are bacche bhi aa gye
Aage continue krogi kya 😉

Raya bahut brilliant hai...paas ho gaye😆

tumhe badi chintaa hai raya ke exam ki😆

nahi kar rahi aage..😆

thanks for comments🤗

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Suriya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

lovely update... Beautiful ending.. Thanks fr pm..

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

grrr the last for first Part...
never mind I read it long back but didn't get time to comment u know the busyness of mine anyway I loved the way up just narrated half story in one part its really awesome to the way u did...
Esha & Rajat both r head cha no doubt in that but u also brought gud msg via this story as Neel Di said no too much trust nor too much doubt is good for healthy relation its so true as I also believe "if u love some one let the person free if he or she came back then it is urs for forever either if it was never urs... just like what Ram did he set free Priya n see now they r married for the whole birth... as trust is gud but blind trust will only betrayed u in life which Priya proofed any way some how I liked the story a lot now moving for next part...

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leena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

awww Sandy its superb yaar Neel Di is lucky now I also one on my birthday too...
btw I loved this one a lot its so gud to see & read just awesome the way RaYa fall on love & blessed with twins loved Ram's & Vik'so bit of mast I at end awesome update it was... romantic naa sahi but everything Is worth to read from our penned down writing.. I loved do write more will be waiting...

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peeyara

@peeyara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

So here come my comment 😆

first of all thanks for writing n sending PM to me 😆(pata hai sabko pm kiya but spl thanks de rahi hoo 😉😆)

coming to OS, I read it yesterday morning 😆 and finally got the tym to comment wo bhi aapke bhulne se pehle 😆

Pran jaye par story se Rajat aur Esha na jaye 🤣

yahan bhi dono aaye, aur upar se dono ko dialogues bhi 😲 😆 wo bhi itne zyaada especially ESHA ko 😲

Priya ko pasand tha Ashwin but proposal aaya Rajat ka (iske bina kuch nhi hosakta na😆)

Esha ne Priya ko slap kiya 😡 reverse reaction bhi likhti na k priya/ram ne slap kiya

abhi seriou wali comment:

i liked the way Ram approached Priya n talked to her, then he decided to marry priya without her will 😆

then the irritation part was very good especially the one where Ram tores assignment papers n made priya write once again 😆 liked the authority with which Ram kept interfering in Priya's life n her belongings

his gussa wala scene was also good itna gussa k divorce ki soch liya 😲 😆 typical ram kapoor

didnt liked esha slapping priya 😭 slap return kar deti toh accha hota 😆

that hospital scene was good

ram saying to vikram to keep his son away from his daughter 😆

fantastic end , mast wala OS⭐️

p.s. Malati wala chotu sa trailer 😉 i am missing her

Ashwin shaadi tak ready tha aur shaadi ke din hi bhaag gaya aur info ek choti bacchi k through letter send karke diya, Ram bhi on the spot tayyar hogaya shaadi k liye aur sudhirji ne Ram ke baare mai kuch bhi jaane bagair shaadi karadi 😆 isiliye EK ki sis bolti hoon 🤣

(kahan ho Malati, come soon)

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sssabcd
lovely update... Beautiful ending.. Thanks fr pm..

Thank you😊

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: leena04

grrr the last for first Part...
never mind I read it long back but didn't get time to comment u know the busyness of mine anyway I loved the way up just narrated half story in one part its really awesome to the way u did...
Esha & Rajat both r head cha no doubt in that but u also brought gud msg via this story as Neel Di said no too much trust nor too much doubt is good for healthy relation its so true as I also believe "if u love some one let the person free if he or she came back then it is urs for forever either if it was never urs... just like what Ram did he set free Priya n see now they r married for the whole birth... as trust is gud but blind trust will only betrayed u in life which Priya proofed any way some how I liked the story a lot now moving for next part...

Thank you so much for comments🤗

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: leena04

awww Sandy its superb yaar Neel Di is lucky now I also one on my birthday too...
btw I loved this one a lot its so gud to see & read just awesome the way RaYa fall on love & blessed with twins loved Ram's & Vik'so bit of mast I at end awesome update it was... romantic naa sahi but everything Is worth to read from our penned down writing.. I loved do write more will be waiting...

Me too lucky that I have many good friends here😳

hahaha only I know how much i took to complete this OS😆

Thanks you so much that you like it🤗

will try to write more on Raya