OS- Raya Milan next part dated 27th jan updated in page 9 - Page 11

Originally posted by: youandme272000

Very nice ...

Originally posted by: peeyara

So here come my comment 😆

first of all thanks for writing n sending PM to me 😆(pata hai sabko pm kiya but spl thanks de rahi hoo 😉😆)

coming to OS, I read it yesterday morning 😆 and finally got the tym to comment wo bhi aapke bhulne se pehle 😆

Pran jaye par story se Rajat aur Esha na jaye 🤣

yahan bhi dono aaye, aur upar se dono ko dialogues bhi 😲 😆 wo bhi itne zyaada especially ESHA ko 😲

Priya ko pasand tha Ashwin but proposal aaya Rajat ka (iske bina kuch nhi hosakta na😆)

Esha ne Priya ko slap kiya 😡 reverse reaction bhi likhti na k priya/ram ne slap kiya

abhi seriou wali comment:

i liked the way Ram approached Priya n talked to her, then he decided to marry priya without her will 😆

then the irritation part was very good especially the one where Ram tores assignment papers n made priya write once again 😆 liked the authority with which Ram kept interfering in Priya's life n her belongings

his gussa wala scene was also good itna gussa k divorce ki soch liya 😲 😆 typical ram kapoor

didnt liked esha slapping priya 😭 slap return kar deti toh accha hota 😆

that hospital scene was good

ram saying to vikram to keep his son away from his daughter 😆

fantastic end , mast wala OS⭐️

p.s. Malati wala chotu sa trailer 😉 i am missing her

Ashwin shaadi tak ready tha aur shaadi ke din hi bhaag gaya aur info ek choti bacchi k through letter send karke diya, Ram bhi on the spot tayyar hogaya shaadi k liye aur sudhirji ne Ram ke baare mai kuch bhi jaane bagair shaadi karadi 😆 isiliye EK ki sis bolti hoon 🤣

(kahan ho Malati, come soon)

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

pehle sirf Rajat the abb Esha bhi...mein kya inn dono ke liye forum aati hoon😡

itna chotu sa dialogue diya Rajat aur tumhe usme bhi problem ho rahi hai😆. tum hi batao Rajat nahi toh aur kiska naam deti proposal mein😆

hihihi..thank you so much for comments🤗...muje bhi irritation aur hospital part achha laga😆.

PS reply

muje lagta hai Malu ke paas aur bhi honge bolne ko ki exam ka kya hua😆😆...Ashwin- shruti final exam paas kiye ki nahi😆 etc etc

Originally posted by: sampa123

as usual too good os dear..

Originally posted by: jodude

heyy dii finally mai comment kar rahi hoon...😆😆

thats superb os...

very well written

bike ride,, vik- ram convo was very nicee

romantic os...!!

raya ka exam kaisa gaya .? 😉

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

finally me done.sorry for late yaar..

its awesome os..just superb..mind blowing.. jealous love ..friendship..all in single..

after so many days read urs so feeling happy.. write more dear

thank u for ur pm

Originally posted by: peeyara

Achha tumhe yahi lagta hai mein R aur E ke liye yahan aati hoon

kitna dekha hai unke liye comment karte hue😡

S kon hai😆

malu bahut dur ka sochti hai😆