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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
PART 2
ram reads the msg and smile..he types

From: Mr Perfect

Subject: No

To: Miss Unknown
i m not fine and sorry darling not
sending u a good night sms... last
night i was so tried that coming from
the office i directly went to bed...
sweetheart u r forgetting something
our rule...and by the way u r such a sweetheart that it is almost impossible
to get angry at you...now stops biting
your lips...whats it faults?? will u now
stops blushing every one is watching
u...

priya s mobile beeps a sound... she
grabs the phone from the table...she is
biting her lips and reading the msg...
when she read the line stops biting
your lip..she leaves her lips and
blushing hard... reading the last line..priya immediately looking
around yes her colleague looking at
her in a suspicious way...she is happy
at heart that he knows her every
movement... also shi is a little worried
about his health she knows his every habit.. she types..

From; Miss Unknown

Subject; R u ok

To : Mr Perfect
whatever u r doing stops that and go
to home... how could you so
careless?? you should take good care
of your health... i know u dont take
food in time and also eats unhealthy
food thats why u r not feeling well... plz stop your work..i dont want to
hear any excuse if u dont go home
than i will stops talking to you for 2
days..is it ok for you... plz plz plz i
begging u dont neglect your health
plz...

she press the send button... priya is
along into the teacher room..she is
pacing up and down.. she is feeling
restless... on the other hand ram is
going through a important file he
does not notice that his mobile showing a msg from miss unknown...
in one minute priya several time check her phone there is no reply
from he... is he ok? if he is ok than
why he takes so much time to reply??
priya is so engross in her thought that she does not hear the bell...some
moment late a peon comes and
inform her that students r waiting for
her... looking at the last time to phone
she moves towards her class.. Befor
entering there..she types..

From: Miss Unknown

Subject: Plz reply

To: Mr Perfect
where r u? plz reply? r u ok? ur silent
is killing me??? after two hour later ram leans back
and close his eyes... before he meets
her his life is like a colorless but now
there is so much color and
happiness that he gets scare if he
loose that...whenever he tries to imagine her a blurt image comes in
front of his eyes... looking at him a
beautiful lady is smiling her smile her
e yes her lips everything is blurt but he
can feels that...he has no words to
thank god he gives him a precious gift which makes his life like a
heaven...but sometimes he gets
scare...he is little healthy and today s girls dont like healthy man... if he
meets with her and she rejects him
than he will not able to live a normal life again...is anything matter to him
that is her happiness..he is ready to do
anything for her happiness... they now
it very well that they share a special
relationship...they never see each
other even they never heard each other voice...but they feel that they
know each other for a long time...ram
opens his eyes... there r so much
peace and happiness in his eyes... he
grabs the phone from the table...his
phone showing two msg from miss unknown.. he hurriedly opens the
msg... looking at the msg he is feeling
contend...yes he knows that she is
mad at him but the thought of
belonging makes him smile... he
presses the reply button and types..

From: Mr Perfect

Subject: Sorry sorry
To:
Miss Unknown sorry sorry sorry plz dont mad at me...
i know i made a mistakes..plz dont
angry at me..that time i was going
through a important file i did not
notice your msg... i
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
I Am First😉
Awesome Update👏
I love Ram & Priya Message conversation very much
Both of them understand each other very well
Thanks for the Update
continue soon 😊
Edited by rosinagoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
PART 3

scratching his forehead ram is smiling
like a teenage lover... he takes the
phone in his hands and again read all
the message that miss unknown send
him... he is feeling a unknown
happiness in his heart... finally he finds someone who really cares about him...
ram leans back a shy smile is still
dancing in his lips..he closes his eyes
and tries to sketching a picture of her..
a beautiful blurts eyes image lingering
in front of his eyes.he tries to sees the face but all he sees is darkness...
folding his hand above is chest vikram
is standing in front of his table,,,he is
carefully staring him... almost 5 min
later vikram clear his throat.. hearing
the sound suddenly ram almost jumps from his chair... when his eyes fall into
vikram ram makes a angry face and
says what r u doing here? and why r u
staring me like this?? without saying
anythings vikram pulls the chair and
sits in front of him... he takes deep breath and sadly says, i m really feel
pity on you ram.. u will be gone mad
very soon.. ram narrows his eyes and
sits on his char and reply hey buddy r
u all right i think u need a
drink...vikram smiles and not me ram u need a drink.. look at urself in the
mirror u will understands what i m
saying... ram makes a confusing face
and he touches his face and says why r
u telling all this tell me whats the
matter... vikram sigh and says my dost u r in love it means ur life will be in
hell very soon... oh god vikram u r
such a jerk.. now i really want to
paunch in ur face.. hey hey hold on
vikram raise his hands.. look at ur self
ur shyly smiling like a new bride... saying this vikram laugh out loudly...
vikraaammm today i will not spare
you...oye stops now tell me my would
be bhabh's name i want to meet her...
vikram says.. ohh vikram i mean i did
not meet with her we r online friend..i have never seen her nor she has seen
me... ram shyly says.. oh my god ram
dont say that without seen each other
u r fall in love... vikram teasingly says..
tu sach mari mar khayegi agar mujhe
cheda bandh nhi kiya to.. ram irritatingly says... lets go.. vikram says,
where? ram asks him.. yaar itna accha
news diya han ek drink to banta han
vikram reply..
warping the shawl around her
shoulder priya comes out from her class room.. she moves towards the
main road.. she is trying to stops a
auto but no one willing to stops.. she
takes out her cell phone from her bag
and dials neha s number...after one
ring neha pick up the call.."hey where r u yaar, i need ur help.. priya says.. tu
ruk mai aa rhi hun neha reply and cuts
the call... almost 15 min later neha
stops her car in front of priya ..priya
opens the front seat door and steps
inside.. sitting on the car priya throw her bag on the bag sits.. she leans
back and says uff i m so tried yaar...
hmm wo to dekhi de rahi hain, neha
reply... neha starts the car.. priya play
a soft romantic music and closing her
eyes she leans back.. she is thinking about mr perfect,,, after 30 min later
when the car stops in a jerk priya
immediately opens her eyes.. opps
sorry neha says.. tu kaha le kar aay
mujhe priya littile irritatingly says..
chal to mera shate teri thakan dur ho jayege.. neha reply..neha parks the
car..both get down from the car and
moves towards a bar.. neha r u crazy
dont u know that i dont like this type
of place.. priya angrily says.. neha
takes her hands in her hand and says i know baby but vikram like this place
so i just want to spend my evening
here plz come with me plz plz neha
makes a puppy face.. oh god neha u r
impossible lets go.. priya and neha
enters the bar.. the bar is very crowded.. all table r full.. neha lets go
yaar look the bar is full..neha eyes is
searching someone when she sees
him..she smile and say i dont think
baby the bar is full.. holding priya hand neha moves towards a corner... she stops in front of a table.." hi vikram"
neha smilingly says.. can i and my
friends sits here she point to the
empty char beside him.. ram is going
to take two glass wine... looking at
priya vikram smile and say yeah sure.. vikram is cursing his luck..he knows
that if ram sees those girls he will eat
him alive.. neha hurriedly goes near
vikram and sits beside him.. i hope u
have no proble if i sits here neha
says... vikram gives her a fake smile and says off course not... priya sits on
the opposite chair... priya is feeling
really very awkward.. she is looking
here and there.. ram brings the wine
and puts them on the table.. looking
at neha ram frown.. vikram makes a sorry face.. and murmurs dont insult
me in front of them.. he turns and look
at his sits.. for a moment he becomes
speechless... after a ages he is seeing a
beautiful woman... without saying
anything ram sits on his char.. neha breaks the silent and says hi she
extends her hands in front of ram i m
neha ram takes her hands in his hands
and says hlw i m ram..ram kapoor.. u
mean the ram kapoor the owner of
kapoor industries. neha excitedly says ram smile and nodded his head..
vikram extends his hands towards
priya and says hi i m vikram.. priya
handshakes with him and smilingly
says hi i m priya sharma... again silent
engulf them... priya cursing herself for calling neha and takes her help..if she
does not call her than now she will not
in such a awkward situation... a loud
music playing on the background
priya s head is paining like hell... neha
gets up from her chair and pulls vikram with him... for a dance..vikram
has no other choice left so he goes
with her on the dance floor... now ram
and priya alone... priya takes out her
cell phone and checks whether her mr
perfect send any message or not.. she is getting worried for her mr perfect..
she told him to send a message when
he reached home..he did not send any
message that means he is still in the
office... ram takes out his phone and
stars to type

from: mr unknown

subject: sorry

to: miss unknown

hi where r u? i m sorry, i m messaging
u so lately.. .. i m fine now and i took
my lunch on time...

he presses the send button... and
waiting for her reply..
priyas cell vibrate, she unlock the
phone and opens the message...she
does not know why she is missing him
so badly..

from: miss unknown

subject :missing u.

to : mr perfect..

hi i m in a bar with my friend.. feeling
very awkward... i dont know why.. i
m missing u badly... want to chat with u...
priya send the message.. message
deliver show..
ram read the message he gets little
tensed..he immediately types ..

from: mr perfect

subject : r u ok na..

to: miss unknown

hey r u ok na.. which bar r u right
now??

ram send the message...
when priyas cell phone vibrate ram
looks at her...

from: miss unknown

subject: ...

to: mr perfet

my head is paining like hell. right now
i m at party palace...sitting beside a
unknown person uff sometimes i wish i could kill neha... because of her i
stuck in this situation...

ram opens the message... reading the
message he looks at priya who r
looking somewhere else.. he cant
believe his eyes.. he is actually sitting
with his love.. his miss unknown.. for a
moment he wants tell her that he is mr perfect..but he stops himself and
thinks... priya is not showing any
interesting towards me that means
she doesn not like me.. if i tell her i m
mr perfect she will takes it wrong
way.. at first i need to know what types of man she likes...


from ; mr perfect

subject: ...

to: miss unknown

leave the place right now and go to ur
home.. if neha denial to come with u..u take a taxi and leave the place...


reading the msg priya smile.. his msg
is showing how much possessive he is
about her ... ram is lost in her smile...
he wants to feel this glossy lips.. ram
shakes his head and says whats wrong with u ram... vikram is right i will go
ne mad very soon.. priya excuse herself
from ram.. and goes near the dance
floor for searching neha... there is no
sight of neha..every passing min priya
is feeling sick.. a man suddenly push him from back,before she falls into
the floor ram holds her in his
arms..and murmurs r u ok?? priya is
holding his hands tightly.. when she
feels that ram is holding her she stands properly and says yes i m ok thank u... i dont think so u r ok... u r sweating very
badly... ram asks her... priya gives him
a sweet smile and says it just i m
feeling a little sick... if u dont mind can i drop u at ur place... ram says her..
right now priya wants to run away from this place hm ok but neha? priya asks
him... dont worry about neha vikram
is with her i m sure vikram will drop
her at her place... ram reply... in all
side people r pushing them
backwards.. ram forwards his hand priya has no option if she does not
hold his hand she will definitely fall
onto the floor... priyA holds his hand
ram pulls her near him.. he circle his
hand around her shoulder..pushing the
crowed they move near the exit door...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Part -2
eventhough i read this im loving it again and again
botha re at peace while chatting
i so love priya shyness and biting lips
and Rams shyness and akwardness infront of vikram 👏
Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Me first for 3 rd part 😆👏
Aww 3rd part is super cool
atlatst Ram saw who is his Miss

aww he is soo cooll 😛
and she is so beautiful

lovely

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Superb Update
Oh Ram find out his lady love
Priya didn't know that Ram's her Mr.Perfect
Continue soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Me first for 3 rd part 😆👏


But i comment first Baby 😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: rosinagoor


But i comment first Baby 😛😛😛


so what
i posted first na 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


so what
i posted first na 😆


Shall we continue this in your thread 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Read both the parts awesome ram got to know who is ms attitude now waiting for next part pls continue soon

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