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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Part -2

eventhough i read this im loving it again and again
botha re at peace while chatting
i so love priya shyness and biting lips
and Rams shyness and akwardness infront of vikram 👏

so sweet of u di u r again reading this ss thank u soo much for this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Me first for 3 rd part 😆👏

Aww 3rd part is super cool
atlatst Ram saw who is his Miss

aww he is soo cooll 😛
and she is so beautiful

lovely

tnx di ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: rosinagoor

Superb Update
Oh Ram find out his lady love
Priya didn't know that Ram's her Mr.Perfect
Continue soon😊


yeah priya still does not know that ram is her mr perfect...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Read both the parts awesome ram got to know who is ms attitude now waiting for next part pls continue soon

tnx dear yeah will cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
PART :5

Priya is lying on her back and waiting for his message... Her phon makes a sound.. It showing a msg from her mr. Perfect.. A smile automatically adore in her lips seeing the name... She opens the message ..
She reads the message with a shy smile... Reading the last line she gets nervous...priya is bitting her nail and thinking how to give the answer...
On the other hand ram is sitting on the bed holding the cell.. He is looking the screen without blinking his eyes.. His heart beat is making a weird sound... Plz priya reply soon na .. Ram is murmuring under his breath... Priya starts to type..

From: Miss Unknown
Subject : ...
To: Mr. Perfect
u cant disturb me mr. Perfect... I m also waiting for ur sms... So there is no way that i felt disturb... U become so good boy... May i know the reason why r u so happy ??? Nothing special lying on the bed... No mr. P i did not take my dinner.. Now dont dare to think give me a big lecture... Awww i love the way u r making face now... Hehehe.. U r smiling .. Soo sweet my mr perfect look... I forgive u this tym if second tym i heard that ur using cell when driving thn i dont know what i will do with u... Hmmm what to say ur last question... I like someone...
Now tell me what about you.. Do u find ur dream girl???

Priya touches the send button... Message send successfully..
Seeing a new message ram heart starts to beat loudly... In a little shaking hand he touches the screen... Reading the first line a big smile appears in his face.. He is grinning ear to ear reading the message.. He is imagining how cute she is looking now... Hmm so madam knows that i will give her a lecture.. Imagining Her dont dare look.. Ram smile broadly... reading the last line he scratches his forehead and smile shyly... he is typing..

From: Mr. Perfect
Subject : 😊
To : Miss. Unknown
dont scare me yaar.. I really get scare when u said dont dare to... :p ... Tell me na whom u like??? ( blushing blushing ) i cant tell u yaar feeling shy...

Ram sends the message... He knows it very well his priya will tease him now... Reading the message priya laugh out loudly... Priyas finger already start to typing..

From. Miss. Unknown
Subject : Hahaha
To: Mr. Perfect
u r teasing me right??? U r soo mean yaar...u have know idea about my dare attitude.. Be careful ohk.. It will be good for u... :p ... Oh god hahaha u r blusing... Awww looking so cute i just want to pull ur cheeks... I cant tell u now about him... Plz i m ur good frnd na tell me na dont feel shy... Waiting waiting.. Did u hear the song chura liya hain tumne jo dil ko???

Ram is now lying on his belly and waiting for her reply... He receives the message and opens it... He smiles cutely and typing

From: Mr. Perfect
Subject : really
To: Miss Unknown
i dont have so dare to touch u... I cant tell na like u.. When u will tell me i will also tell u same time... So u r not going to request me again... Really madam, i stole ur heart????
smilingly ram sends the message..within a second it shows delivery report...
Priya opens the message and scratches her eyebrows read the first line... She ignores the line and starts to read further... She smilingly bitting her lower lips reading the last line... She is typing..
From: miss unknown
subject : ???
To: mr. Perfect
when i have asked u to touch me????? So u r flirting with me ??
Ram reads the message and bits his tongue and murmurs stupid mistake...
he replies

From : Mr. Perfect
subject : ...
To: miss unknown
sorry sorry sorry that word just a typing mistake.. Dont think anything else... Yeah kind of.. Am i not allowing to flirt with u???

Priya smiles and send a message..
From: miss unknown
subject: ???
To : mr. Perfect
dont need to give any explanation i know that was a typing mistake... I was just kidding u... So u know how to flirt ha??? Impressive... well.. Feeling really tried... Talk to u tomorrow.. Tc..gd night... Have a beautiful sleep...

Ram opens the message he starts to type..
From: mr perfect
subject: gd night
to: Miss unknown
u r sooo sweetu love u for that...ohk darling take some rest.. Talk to u tomorrow... Gd night have a sweet dreams ...
both of their cell still in there hand.. They dont know when they fall sleep..
Ram is standing at his room and looking at the sky... He is lost in the calm nature... A lady stands behind him and slips her hand under his arms.. Her head is rested on his back... I missed u sooo much the lady murmurs.. Hearing this a big smile plays in his lips... He raises his hand and holds her hand, pulling her from the behind and makes her stand infront of him... He is gazing her innocent face... He caresses her cheeks and murmurs u r soo beautiful... She closes her eyes for feeling the touch beneath her skin... Ram gather her in his arms and pressing her body against him .. I soo missed u priya... next tym i m not going to any official tours without you... Priya breaks the hug and says dont be act like a child ram... Priya wants to say more but ram places his finger above her lips and says sshhh... He cups her face.. Priya closes her eyes and raises her hand, clutches his kurta.. Ram leans a little.. Few inches away his lips from her.. Before they kissed his mobile buzzed out loudly... Ram nervously awake up from his sleep and looks here and there.. He is alone in the room.. He was dreaming... He wipes the sweat from his forehead and murmurs ufff i m closed to feel her those luscious lips.. His phone is still ringing... He is feeling so irritated with caller .. He receives the call and angrily says dont u see the tym.. Is it the time to call anyone.. Ram shouting loudly.. Vikram keeps the phone away from his ear.. After he heard ram breathing he takes the phone near his ear and say, ram i m finished yaar.. I m finished..vikram is sounding very low... Hey buddy whats happened why r u sounding so low... Is everything ohk ram ask vikram in a concern voice... no nothing is ohk ram.. I made a big mistake yaar... Me nd neha vikram gaps.. Tell me vikram hua kiya han... Vikram clear his throat and says last night me and neha became drunk i went to her house to drop her but i cant hold my urge to feel her.. She invited me in her house and.. We had a sex... Whattt???? Ram shout so loudly that full room is vibrating... " tu chilla kyun raha han" in irritated voice... " kya karu mai yaar tujh to pata han neha kaisa han, mujhe chodegi nahi ufff soch ke hi mujhe kitna dar lag raha han... Vikram is very scared... Ram cant control his laugh anymore he is laughing... " ram tum mera dost han ya dusman, mera taklif tujhse share kr raha hu aur tu ki stupid k jaise has raha.. Mujhe tujhe call hi nahi karna chahiya tha" vikram is upset at ram... " sorry sorry hasungi nahi, just imagine kiya tha ki neha tere sath kya karegi soch k hi hasi aa gaya" "rammm mai rakh raha hu phone tu haste rahe" " oye shun itna tension mat le subha aa raha hu tere ghar so ja aab" ram tells him... Ohk gd night bye saying this vikram cuts the call...
Sun is removing the darkness and welcoming a new morning.. Priya is feeling lazy today... Today is sunday so no coaching this thought makes her happy.. She slips her hand under the pillow and searching her cell.. She finds her cell, without opening her eyes fully she check if she has any message from her perfect.. There is no message from perfect but 20 missed call is showing all r from neha...she sits on the bed and dials nehas number but there is no response.. Priya gets tensed... She hurriedly gets up from bed and directly goes to washroom... she wears a beautiful black cotton saree looking fresh and beautiful.. Without wasting anytime she grabs her bag and heading towards nehas house.. All the while priya is call neha but she is not receiving the call... After 20 minutes later priya reaches at her house... She is pressing continuously the bell.. Finally someone opens the door... Priya steps inside and see neha..her eyes is red.. Her hair is messed up.. " neha kya hua, aisa halat kyun banake rakha han tune?? Hearing this neha again starts to cry loudly... " neha bolegi tu hua kya han??? "wo priya mai aur vikram... Tu aur vikram kya?? Kal raat hum dono k beech sab kuch ho gaya saying this neha again start to cry.. Whattt??? Priya shout... U know na how much i love him yaar when i found her so near i could not able to control myself.. Remembering the last night neh blush a little... priyas hand is rested on her waist she gives neha a typical looks and says agar control nahi kar payi to aab roh kyun rahi han??? " i m missing him.. Usko dekhne k maan kar raha.. Mujhe soch k dar lag raha han priya agar vikram bola ki jo hua wo galat hua.. Neha again makes a sad face.. " priya makes a angry face and says aise kaise bolegi, tujhe vikram k ghar ka address pata han?? Neha nods her.head... jaldi jake fresh hoke aa hum vikram k ghar jayenge.. Hearing this neha happily walk towards her room...
Vikram and ram is sitting on the hall room.. Ram is trying to make the environment little light.. Vikram is feeling really very guilty... Ohk buddy tell me one thing do u like or love neha??? Ram asks vikram.. Vikram is silent for while.. Ram is looking at him for answer... I like her yaar but u know me na i m not ready for any relationship.. Vikram says sadly... Just give a try yaar kya pata tujhe realize ho jaye kitna khubsoorat ahesaans han ya pyaar... Ram tells him... Someone is pressing the bell continuously vikram gets up from the sofa and moves towards the door... When he opens the door he becomes nervous.. Neha and priya is standing infront of him.. Seeing neha s condition he is feeling really guilty... He give side them to enters the house... Ram turns back to see whose come this hour... Looking at priya, he become excited... He is gazing her top to toe.. She is looking soo elegant...neha priya and vikram comes to the hall room... Seeing ram priya smiles and says good morning.. Ram smile back and murmurs not good morning it is the best morning...
If u like this part thn plz hit the like button and dont forget to leave ur comment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Beautiful written di pls continie soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
read all part in one go...really awsome update

part 2
the messaging conversation was superb...

Part 3 and 4
when ram came to know that his miss unknown is just front of him...,.,.. It was super 😊

he drive as a gentle man... 😆

the way they both tease each other...,..,...
Dono ne hi ek dusre ko nahi bataya ki wo like karte hai kisiko 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Done with all parts in a go..
pleaseee next part asap..
its superb eagerly waiting for the next

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awesome & Beautiful Update
I love their message conversation lots
Aww Ram dreaming that he going to kiss priya😳
So Again Ram & Priya meet happen
Continue soon Dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: contactcharu

nice update
pls continue soon

tnx dear for liking it..

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