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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved raya cute moment in car
RamPriya is having tough time with peehu
Neha vik are true friend raya are blessed to have them as friend
Peehu is still in diliema about her mother love for her
Continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for your valuable comment😊,i am happy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

Loved raya cute moment in car
RamPriya is having tough time with peehu
Neha vik are true friend raya are blessed to have them as friend
Peehu is still in diliema about her mother love for her
Continue soon thanx for the pm



thanks for your valuable comment😊,i am happy,i will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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small narration


PART-5
*************that is my child**************


(IN PEEHU'S ROOM,She is looking at the dress,while crossing peehu's room lady ju found,priya was coming out from peehu's room)

Juhi: :(in her mind)what is priya doing in peehu's room,is she breaking all the bounds that i have created between these two,i should find what is happening now,

Juhi: :(while entering into peehu's room)peehu...what are u doing,are u getting ready for party

Peehu: :just i have to buy few things from outside

Juhi: :(after taking that dress that is priya's gift in her hand)wow..this is pretty peehu,when did u by it without my knowledge

Peehu: :she gave me just before

Juhi: :is priya given this(she kept the dress as it is dissapointment in her face)

Peehu: :haan...juhi maa

Juhi: :oh tk,(priya i won't let u to come close to peehu)bye peehu,see u later

(after juhi left from there)

Peehu: :where is this sammy!!!!!!!!!

(priya in hall,after coming out from peehu's room,pari and myra are coming at the entrance from their trip,they are surprised to see priya here(ram kept it secret(that priya had come back to their house))

pari & myra (together):mom...are u here(they run to hug her!!!

priya:(while hugging both of them)yes babies,i came here,how was the trip


pari & myra: :it is fantastic mom we really enjoyed,in these four month we really missed u mom,

Priya: :don't worry my dear now i came na,...

Priya: :who are all came to the trip

pari: :all girls and all...(pari is about to tell about the boys presence in the trip,myra signlled her to stop,suddenly pari)all thae staffs from our school

Priya: :tk go and take rest

pari & myra: :tk mom

******************in shergills house**********************

while vikram entering into the house,no one is there,suddenly

neha: :surprise..

vikram: :neha,,,,,,(with surprise) did u come earlier,

neha: :i kept it secret to give surprise,ok leave it and tell me what is going on here

vikram: :nothing yaar,cady is preparing food for us,and i am keeping our room neat,and...

neha: :how sweet ,vikrammm... i am not asking about those matters,i am asking about our fatty and his affair

(he looks at cady,kaddy nods her head as if she told everything)

vikram: :neha it is not..(suddenly vikram jumped into taunting mode),yes,neha ram is having affair with is employee,initially i was trying to convince him,but i couldnot convince him,he told me everything about her,now i came from his new office only,that employee is really talented,
nothing surprise in "ram fall for her"

neha: :(keeping her hands on her wrist,what are you saying,you should nt support your friend in this situation,we should thing about priya now,there is some differences between me and priya in sammy pihu marriage,but,i can't let this to happen

vikram: :if you see her once, you will not tell like that

neha: :whoever it may be i won't leave her easily,who is trying to take our priya's place in ram's life,i will show who am i!!!,i am ging to ram's office give me the address

vikram: :no yaar,i can't

neha: :give me first

vikram: :if u come to know who is that you won't do like this

neha: :who is that sooo talented woman

vikram: :it is priya


neha: :(without getting the name properly)whoever it may be...may be,who is that

vikram: :yes,it is our priya,

neha:vikrammm...are you playing with me,she is about to hit him,vikram running neha chasing

(cady had a smile after knowing that)

Vikram:(after there running and chasing) now priya is staying in KM

neha:really...I WANT TO MEET HER IMMEDIATELY

kaddy:i am also want to meet her,and ram sir i have to ask sorry for misunderstanding him

vikram:ram is busy in office and priya went for shopping
so,neha you take rest and we will go there tomorrow morning

**************in peehu's room*******************

(peehu is calling sammy he didnot pick the phone,sammy is following suhani from her clinic to her house peehu is keep on trying,sammy reached the tea stall infront of suhani's house,finally he attends the call)

sammy: :(with harsh tone)what peehu???????

peehu: :(with even more harsh tone)where are u sammy???????????

sammy: :i am here with my friends,,,

peehu: :tell me exactly where are u now, Are u still following suhani?????????????


sammy: :no,i am with my friends...stop spying me(then one man who is next to sammy is dictating the tea stall address to his driver though phone,he is waiting for his driver to pick up him from there)
peehu overhears that and records that call,after keep on playing the recorded call ,she got the exact address ,

peehu: :(in mind)now i am coming sammy, i will be there in 10 minutes

***********(she angrily starts the car)**************

**********at suhani's place************
(sammy is keep on watching suhani's house to get her darshan,suddenly peehu come between sammy and suhani's house)

peehu:so,you are here,where is your friends i couldnot find them,can you introuse me

sammy: :why are you following me

peehu: :(shouting)do you remember who am i ,i am your wife

(suhani is preparing coffee in kitchen ,she hears the sound so(since it is peehu's vioce she does not want to come out and see,so she takes one small table and stands on that,and looking from the window)

sammy: :stop it peehu all are looking at us

peehu: :(even more loudly)let them to watch,they should know how you are cheating me.

(then suhani lost the balance ,she fell down from the stool,suhani is screaming in pain ,sammy heard that)

(in tea stall)

sammy: :let me go peehu,suhani in trouble

peehu: : don't go sammy,

(khush runs to suhani and he is in shock, in that tension, he doesnot know what to do, ,and he tries to make her stand for taking her to the hospital)

(in tea stall)
peehu: :you shouldnot go sammy,

sammy: :(shouts)let me!!

peehu: :are u shouting at me????i am your wife,for that characterless ,cheapo suhani you are shouting at me

sammy: : (first time sammy fumes on peehu) what characterless and cheapo????that is you not suhani,

(peehu is speechless,and sammy adds)

sammy: : how ,one girl on earth,who always used to roam with BOY FRIENDS and dumping a BF once in a month,and ready to seperate their parents to show her power,and married a man who never loves her by blackmailing him,can call another woman as characterless

peehu: :after knowing all this,you accepted to marry me,now what...

(again suhani screams in pain)

sammy: :(again i should go)

peehu: :answer me first,she is khush's wife and that is khush baby...

(before peehu complete)

sammy: : (with louder voice)that is not khush's child that is mine

--------------------peehu's face become thunderous--------------------------
**************it ends here with peehu is standing there,and sammy runs towards suhani's house****************



P.S:Q &A(SENTIMENTEL)

Q:HOW THIS SUDDEN CHANGE IN SAMMY IS possible ?

A:

Blood is thicker than water

means that the bonds of family and common ancestry are stronger than the bonds between unrelated people





part- 6:::::god would have something better for you::::


Edited by raya50-50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: .pia_12.

lovely update
continue soon
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thanks😊

i will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
nice part kaash show mei bhi peehu ko aisa dikhaye tho thoda tasalli hojaati(we will get satisfied)...
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
part-5: Nice part❤️ by looking at the heading I thought that pihu may change in this update so priya said those words...
but when I completed the update I got to know why the heading
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupam_dil

nice part kaash show mei bhi peehu ko aisa dikhaye tho thoda tasalli hojaati(we will get satisfied)...

thanks for pm
continue soon


this will not happen in the serial,

our cvs ego is bigger than our mr & mrs ramkapoor,

if they are not ,

they will use so many ff,

from the beginning of this forum(not mine i am junior)

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