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thelostgirl

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

good one !!!!

a very happy holi to u

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Thx for the pm.

Wow raya in single how elegant, smiley n happy raya, a couple to adore, mera bas chale toh Ican continuously stare them without blinking my eyes.

Update real good lila.

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Cute_Saakshii12

@Cute_Saakshii12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Superb update😉
continue soon...

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Malati

@bpatil3

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Thanks for the pm.

The highlight for me was sammy n peehu's dreaming the note at the end lol😆😆

Good one, peehu with her arrogance, juhi with her plan continues.

Ram n priya with their ever fading love for each other.

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Part 2..

Nice update..
Ram- Priya re going to handle Pihu together..
Awesomly narated with little little fb in btw..
Their plan is working..Priya is back in KM..but this Pihu 😡 how can she say such things to Priya..on top of that Juhi.. 😡
Good one..

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Part 3..

Nice update..
Atleast in this Pihu will realize her mistake soon..her dream nd tears shows that she still love her Mom..good..but Juhi.. 😡
Nice RaYa scene both re ready to do anything for their kids even if they have to stay away from each other for that..pure nd unconditional love of parents..nicely shown
Loving ur story nd progression in it..
Ur P.S 😆😆
Plz pm me if possible..😊

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raya50-50

@raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
Peehu is insulting priya but raya is bearing all this as they love her
Kush and suhani also helping them in their task
Why can't juhi leave KM and let live raya in peace she is very evil always behind raya and peehu and brainwashes her
Continue soon and thanx for the pm

Thanks for your valuable comment buddy

juhi had become unavoidable character in balh from the day she had got married to sid,

so it will take time to send her out or to make some changes in her character,

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raya50-50

@raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: anupam_dil
he he he😆 ...ye aap ki Q and A mujhe bahuth accha laga😆 ...and why do you want this much big holiday...we won't give you leave ...these are working days...so come back and join writing right now...got it...😉😆

will be waiting to see your update soon..thanks for pm...😛😛
very nice story❤️

Thanks for your valuable comment di

and i tried to come this thread on tuesday day,but couldnot come,

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raya50-50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: priyajan12
good one !!!!
a very happy holi to u

Thanks for your valuable comment priya and sorry for late wish,i had send wish through pm at the time of holi ,but now only i got time to reply here,happy holi to you dear