small narration (PART-6) in page 13

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small narration-part-1
this is not the end but the beginning(raya sharing everything)

SCENE STARTS FROM THE HOTEL ROOM,WHERE PEEHU saw priya and started insulting her,

priya again started giving lecture to peehu,

ram came there,
the same scen"when peehu asked ram to choose between her and mom"

ram said to priya"you came here as as employee,so concentrate on your workdon't interfere in

my daughter's life,why are you forcing her,to do what you want to do,she is not a toy,
my daughter will do whatever she want and will get what ever she want to get,

priya is shocked to here these words from ram's mouth and started,walking away from the room,

ram asked peehu to take rest ,i will handle priya,

peehu mind voice"now u knew my power mom"


(priya came to her room and angrily took her already packed bag since their trip was over after that presentation,priya came out from the hotel,
priya is walking on the road alone,thinking about what ram told,ram comes behind in his her and asks her to sit in the car,priya ignores,and starts walking,ram holds her hand,and drags her and makes her sit in the car and both go back to the ram's room in the hotel,without talking to each other
(at that time peehu went to search sammy,by searching in all nearby bars)


ram and priya come to the room,
ram comes near priya and asks how long will she be slient and asks her to listen what he is trying to say or atleast,

priya: tell,whatever you want to tell me ,i will listen,BUT THE ONLY PROBLEM IS"you have a pbm if i talk and decide to do something,
and you have aproblem if i don't talk too...then what can i do,,,,i told everything what i wanted to do,

ram:you are mistaken again,i didnot want to talk about peehu and sammy's marriage and marriage life,i just want to talk about our life i mean our peehu

priya:we had talked everything about our peehu mr.kapoor,you will do whatever you feel as rigth and on that day when,peehu,wanted to marry sammy,eventhough she knew about sammy-suhani relationship,
if you would have tried it would not come to this stage ram,she is not happy in her life ram,they are not happy,

you thought she is the,ram kapoor's daughter so she should not be in pain,

ram:priya listen to me once:

priya:as a mother i know everything about her mr.kapoor,i was tried to straighten up her,but i couldnot,i know everything about her mr.kapoor
and also you were ready to let me go away from your life mr.kapoor,

i expected to you to stop me,but i should not expected that,

(ram tells if she'll go on talking and will she allow him to talk or not)

priya:what will you tell ram,just that your daughter can get every thing in the world irrespective of the things and matters,if you want to repeat everything that "i should let your kids to be free ,i shouldnot interfere in your kids and your life,if you didnot want my presence here i will move out of the room

priya starts walking

ram falls on knees and says don't go priya ,i can't live without you priya that is why i bought that office,if i didnot give everything to peehu,that she wants,she will kill herself,
she many time commited suicide in these 7 years in your absence priya,we all needs you priya

(priya is shocked to hear this)

(she came back to him,and says)

priya:what did u say ram is it true our peehu commited suicide

ram:yes priya,when u was in coma,many things happened in our life priya,(at that time ram's BP raised so priya gives him some water and asked him to sit on sofa and asked him to relax and tell her everything,she sit near to him )

priya:what happened in these 7 years ram

ram:when i heard about your accident,i rushed to the hospital,the docters side you went to coma stage,

peehu had some minor injuries,since she fell out from the car


at that time i thanked god for atleast saving his daughter from major injuries

after that you are in coma,we were taking care of you,but,peehu always looking at the sky,by standing in terrace,i thought she need some time to relieve from stress

since rishab was frequently went for business trip sowmiya also went with him,

when i was in business trip juhi was taking care of our kids

one day when we gone for a shopping we met sruthi,peehu behaved ubnormally suddenly,

i asked juhi to took her to our room,then sruthi showed me all the SMSs and phone records of varun and she said me that she would file the case,
i begged her for not filing the case,finally after knowing the mental condition of our pihu and your condition sruthi stepped back from filing the case,

at that time when i came to know about our peehu's another side i want some one to console me,you are not with me,i missed u a lot priya

once when i refused to send peehu to the party,she cut her hand vein(like natasha cut her hand vein once upon a time)

she did something like that frequently,after that we consulted a psychiatrist secretly psychiatrist,will come to our home like a business partner come friend,and will observe our peehu,he told me to give everything she wants,to control her temporarily,

at that time ,juhi was taking care of our kids and especially peehu,at that time i relieved from some stress my kids got a mother figure,

after you came out from coma i wante to ell everything to u but suhani told me that you shouldnot be in stress,that is why i kept it within me

after hearing that from ram, tears rolls down from priya's eyes(she cried uncontrollably)

ram:don't worry my dear we will solve this pbm together,

(about to stand for bringing water for priya,the priya holds ram's hand,and said)

priya:ram i knew that varun matter already mr.kapoor,by considering your happiness,and innocent heart i hide that matter and peehu's behaviour .
i am sorry mr.kappor

and one more thing

ram:what
priya :peehu and sammy are...

ram:peehu and sammy!

priya :peehu and sammy are...

ram:not happy,i knew it

priya:how did u know that

ram:i knew that from the day of their marriage,,u are staying outside u knew that,i am staying with them,obviously,i knew it

this,marriage is only for contolling peehu,

suhani is in need, so wait till suhani's delivery,till that i will control peehu,

after suhani's delivery we should arrange some body to take care of her,i will bring you to our home,

because we can't let suhani alone she did manything for us,when you are in coma, in hospital,and when she came here for taking care of you,

so stay with suhani,till her delivery,
still you are with suhani pihu will not listen to you,
after that we should handle our peehu together,

priya:everything will change with time we will get our princess back soon,

hope for the best(hilding ram's hands),

*********ends here with ray raya's hands*******



part-3::::::
i am always with u:::::::::::

part -4 :::::::how can i let::::::::


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/3950087/small-narration-part-6-in-page-13?pn=9


PART-5::::::that is my child::::::::

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Posted: 11 years ago
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marvelous
awesome post

mujhe nhi maalooom mei kya kahu

no words
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyajan12

marvelous

awesome post

mujhe nhi maalooom mei kya kahu

no words



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Posted: 11 years ago
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just great too good
fantastic imagination
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Posted: 11 years ago
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since peehu is little bit mentally disturbed the court will dismiss the case,even though they file the case against her




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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayee,,
ff mein sahi ram behaved as a tycoon. BALH miss this intelligent tycoon yaar. frankly in my opinion if this weding is a arrangement the child need to be with father. obviously if the paternity is tested sammy will be the papa. suhani sammy ment to be with each other for the child sake atleast. pihu's mad pakka

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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼Very smooth and clean write up.you seem to be an all-rounder,keep it up buddy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one..
Very well handled..Pihu is mentally disturbed..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvbalh

hayee,,

ff mein sahi ram behaved as a tycoon. BALH miss this intelligent tycoon yaar. frankly in my opinion if this weding is a arrangement the child need to be with father. obviously if the paternity is tested sammy will be the papa. suhani sammy ment to be with each other for the child sake atleast. pihu's mad pakka


this is high time instead of discussing who left whom,who let to go,
they should act together to bring their kids on right path

whether suhani leads a life as single mother

or going to give all the responsibility of child's upbringing to sammy,

or going to give that baby to shergills,or going to disappear after giving that child to shergills

or finally that child will reach pihu sammy,


we should wait and watch

every body will take some wrong decision in some important and critical situation

and error is human😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahana747

👍🏼Very smooth and clean write up.you seem to be an all-rounder,keep it up buddy.


thanks buddy😊


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