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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: .pia_12.
superb update😊
yeh juhi 😡i just hate her presence in RaYa's life!!!
continue soon
and thanks 4 pm!!!

thanks for commenting

i will try

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: luvbalh
PArt 5

mind blowing...

simply awesome..

this part

sammy: : how ,one girl on earth,who always used to roam with BOY FRIENDS and dumping a BF once in a month,and ready to seperate their parents to show her power,and married a man who never loves her by blackmailing him,can call another woman as characterless

how i wish sammy in balh speak these words..
how come sammy fellow realize its his own child.. connected with blood kya..

questionnaire is so funny

thanks for the PM

thanks for your valuable comment😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
happy that priya is trying to bridge gap between herself and her kids but that juhi is still trying to cause rift
yipee neha is back misses neh vik cute nok jhok
glad sammy accepted his mistake
let's see wat is next in the store
continue soon thanx for the pm

yes neha is back

thanks for commenting buddy😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: lpsakshi
suprb now i m eagr to know all reactions

i am also,thinking about their reactions😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
kaash Sammy mein sach mein itni himmat hoti...ki Peehu ko sach bata sake in Balh
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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
That was a nice update again
and a quick one too
yOU MADE SAMMy realization in this and gave some good dialogues 👏
Loved it ..
hope suhani is fine ..
Pihu atleast realizes in next
cont soon

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Thanks forthe pm lila

thanks for your valuable comment di😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Hi dear,

Just read all the 5 parts. Awesome work dear. Kaash CVs aise soch pathe...😭😡

Really fantastic narration.

If possible, plz pm me for ur updates. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Hi dear,

Just read all the 5 parts. Awesome work dear. Kaash CVs aise soch pathe...😭😡
Really fantastic narration.

If possible, plz pm me for ur updates. Waiting for the next part.

thank u so much di

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

special thanks to veena di aka anupam_dil

part- 6

******************god would have something better for you************

Sammy: : that is my child,no one can stop me,I am going to save my Suhani

Peehu: :(while Sammy leaving from there... in shock) Sa.m.myyy...

(Sammy rushes towards Suhani's house,Khush is in shock and he is hesitating to lift her,

Sammy without wasting a single minute lifts Suhani in his hands,Khush is about

to stop him but for the sake of Suhani and her child he does not say anythingand follows Suhani and Sammy

he calls Shipra to inform about Suhani's condition)

Peehu is in big shock,her mind is not in this world,

suddenly it starts raining,

Peehu is walking towards her car slowly,and started the car

(Madhuri Dixit fans please forgive me if you can)

"o saathi re

kaisa sila diya yeh vafaa ka kaisa sila diyaa"

how much she believed him

she supported him,when all were asking about Suhani's child

she told Ram that Suhani's kid was not Sammy's but it was Khush's child

"tere vaade vo iraade"

Pihu is getting the flashes of the scenes when

Sammy said "I want to grow old with YOU"

Sammy said "I love YOU "

(she is driving her car and crying badly)

"sab kuch bhula diya yeh vafaa kaisa silaa diya"

Sammy said"that is my child"

"meri yaadon mein tum ho meri saanson mein tum ho"

how much she was excited during their marriage ceremony,

how she felt happy when he told that they were going to honeymoon

peehu crying...crying...crying

**************(she reaches the KM gate,after getting down from the car,she walks towards the entrance rain had diluted her tears)****************

"kisi begaane ki khaatir tum ne apnon ko bhuula diyaa"

Sammy went to save Suhani without listening to her words

****************( she stepped into the KM)******************

"tum ne apnon ko bhula diyaa haan tum ne apnon ko bhula diyaa"

( covering her face in her palms,she screams loudly)

Peehu: :Nooo...

(she collapses on the floor crying madly )

(everybody rooted to the spot in shock looking at the site in front of them Priya rushes to Peehu)

Priya holds her,

Priya's heart broke into pieces by looking her princess in this condition

Priya: :Peehu...what happened...

(Peehu starts crying again)

Priya: : Peehu what happened baby,bolna beta kya hua hai (Priya asks Myra to bring the towel)

Peehu tells everything while Priya is toweling Peehu's head

Pari and Myra who are standing there,were also in shock by listening to the conversation

after witnessing the consequence of stubbornness...Peehu starts her talk

Peehu: (adds)mumma I should have listened to you at least once,how many times you were trying to stop me,I am sorry mumma...

Priya: :no baby ,don't cry baby...aise rote nahi baccha...

Peehu: I am sorry mumma...(she said that continuously with tears as if she is half mad ,at the same time it is heart wrenching)

Sammy left me mumma...

Priya: relax baby don't talk like this

(Priya hugs her)

Priya: (in her mind) "god would have something better for you my princess"

**********************at the airport************************

one man is waiting for receiving someone

after few minutes,he goes towards the person(that is our anti hero) ,for whom he was waiting there,

that person: :welcome to India sir...(about to give bouquet)

our anti hero: :(with out even receiving the bouquet,dialing a number in his phone asked the person who received him)bring the luggage fast,

(through phone)haan dad,I have reached,I will be there in 15 minutes

while he came out,the car driver brings the car...but he comes late by 2 minutes,

car driver: :sorry sir(he comes to open the car door for that new person),

(suddenly that new person slapped him)

car driver: :(while keeping his hand on his cheek)looking at the new person with shock😲

our anti hero: this is the punishment for being late by two minutes, after this you won't be late in your life (with evil smile)

*************************(in KM)**************************

Priya takes Peehu to her room,Peehu is still crying,

Priya calls ram and asks him to come home,

Ram: :what happened Priya???why are you tensed??????

Priya: :don't ask anything Ram please ,without any delay come here, we will talk about that in our home ,come fast Mr.kapoor

(Ram wonders what happened to Priya)

******************(in KI)***************************

JUHI: : mamaji,Priya is now settled in KM,but Khush is still staying outside,

do one thing first find where he is living,

mamji: :tk,now I have to start my investigation, CID Shiney starts working

in KM,

RAM ENTERs the house,Pari and Myra run to him,and hug him,

Pari and Myra: dad...Pihu di

Ram: : Pihu...????what happened to her,tell me clearly

Pari and Myra: : dad... (they tell entire story to him)

Ram: : Sammy...I will show who am I,you did a big mistake today,you won't forget the consequences of this mistake till your last breath...I swear to god

(when Ram enters Peehu's room, Peehu was leaning on Priya's shoulder,Priya was caressing Peehu

Ram is in shock to see his Rock star in this heart wrenching condition,he is speechless,he looks at Priya...)

****************It ends here with Ram's angry(on Sammy) and Priya's helpless faces,they are looking at each other***********