Raya-Adhuri Kahani thread 3 part 43 page 140 - Page 28

Originally posted by: sampa123

wow.too hottt.cntinue soon.n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: akilagoud2

superb update😉
continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: armanz

I am sorry Sandhya..I have read this update with out your permission as the one who forced you to write some hot sizzling romance told me to read it as you penned it for first time.

Really Sandhya even though am new to the entire story the way you narrated romantic part was so natural and engaging.you described their intimacy,Priya's shyness and Ram's concern yet eagerness to make her his own very well.It was appealing and even sizzling.

you have ability to set fire in reader's mind with such updates.

You did fantastic job even if its first time.Keep it up.👏

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Iss lactose ki chakkar mein seedhi saadhi ladki (writer) sharabi hogayi😆😆

Raya completed their wedding😆

cheers to RaYa, the newly wed

Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan

this part was just awesome

Raya hot and romantic night which they spend together

loved it continue soon thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

Sorry kyun bol rahi hai...update koi bhi padd sakta hai...mein toh without permission sabka padti hoon😉...haan I know ur friend but I refer two person and she encourages me not forced...forced karne wali koi aur hai😆...and ur friend knows her very well.

thanks for comments Armanz🤗

Originally posted by: armanz

FFs other than Neel's and Sangautam's yours is the first ever one I read..thats why I said sorry.

By the way I thought in reverse.I know how she pesters so I thought/felt it as compelling you to write..if she encourages you thats good and haa I too know who the other one is.😆

you are always welcome ji.😊😃

Originally posted by: varshathakkar

awesome chatpata update