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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: priyajan12

Sorry Sandhya di

i had nt checked ur previous reply

😛...hey it's ok

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
haan meine hi likhi hai...mein nahi likhti lekin jaise ki update ke upar likha hai kisi ne force kiya likhne aur kisi ne encouragement aur damki bhi ki comment nahi karenge toh likh diya
early😲...nahi ji Ram toh bahut pehle chahte the...aur yeh dono kaafi time se saat mein hi hai...haan confess bahut late kiya...agar aur late kiya hota toh PMs milte ki u r stretching it😆

flashback is near to its end...u will get to know the answer...may be in next part only

thanks for comments🤗

Hahaha..emotional blackmailing..😆 frnds mein chalta hai😛

Arey itna shocked kyun ho rahi hun😆..yup i felt its early..Ram ke chahne se kya hota hai😆..i m talking about in whole..sath mein hai but never been close na...like Priya accepted her feeling nd confessed only a day before..her fears nd all...thats why

chalo sahi hai..sabko romance chahiye tha lagta hai😆 kyunki uske baad toh fb mein zyada kuch nhi hai..misunderstandings will happen nd they will get sep..then back to present..😛

Ok..will be waiting for answers..

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Mi_AmOR

@Mi_AmOR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

😲 aapne likh ke post bhi krdya,...iam so late... 🤢

update super hotty hotty... 😉 😳 😉 😳

jisne bhi req. kiya usko thnq... 😆 😉 😛 😉 🤣

jaaanu thnq.... 🤣

ramji bht fast nikle...!!!!!

kal confess krdya...aaj kr bhi lia...!!!!!!

his dialouge," tumhare chakkar mein..." rofl...!!!😆

priya hai boss...drool hon bnta hain... 😆

contn soon...wid raya... 😉 😆

thnx fr the pm...!!!

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sampa123

@sampa123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

wow.too hottt.cntinue soon.n thanks for the pm

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akilagoud2

@akilagoud2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

superb update😉
continue soon
thanks for pm

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armanz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

I am sorry Sandhya..I have read this update with out your permission as the one who forced you to write some hot sizzling romance told me to read it as you penned it for first time.

Really Sandhya even though am new to the entire story the way you narrated romantic part was so natural and engaging.you described their intimacy,Priya's shyness and Ram's concern yet eagerness to make her his own very well.It was appealing and even sizzling.

you have ability to set fire in reader's mind with such updates.

You did fantastic job even if its first time.Keep it up.👏

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Iss lactose ki chakkar mein seedhi saadhi ladki (writer) sharabi hogayi😆😆

Raya completed their wedding😆

cheers to RaYa, the newly wed

Edited by bpatil3 - 11 years ago

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: vironikajain
haan Emotional blackmail kiya hai😆
early nahi hai...Balh mein confession ke din hi sab ho gaya tha😆...meine toh ek din late kiya😉...haan abb flashback jyada nahi bacha hai...I think one more part...

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
awesome n romantic

thank u😊

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: chillpc
😲 aapne likh ke post bhi krdya,...iam so late... 🤢

update super hotty hotty... 😉 😳 😉 😳

jisne bhi req. kiya usko thnq... 😆 😉 😛 😉 🤣

jaaanu thnq.... 🤣

ramji bht fast nikle...!!!!!

kal confess krdya...aaj kr bhi lia...!!!!!!

his dialouge," tumhare chakkar mein..." rofl...!!!😆

priya hai boss...drool hon bnta hain... 😆

contn soon...wid raya... 😉 😆

thnx fr the pm...!!!

haan fast thi na

tum toh directly hi use thanks bol do😆...achha jaanu hai kya...haan jab dekho ladte jo rehte ho😆...achha jaldi aur jo aapne diya tha uss din toh aap humse bhi jaldi thi😉😆

Thanks for comments🤗

will continue soon

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