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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: varshathakkar

need women s day special update

update sooon

Thank u so much Varsha🤗 u made my day...very very beautiful.

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: varshathakkar
update sooon

will update soon😊

Edited by sandhyasn - 11 years ago

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
are kya karu...lactose seedhe emotional blackmailing karne lagi...muje laga ek baar de dungi toh phir chup ho jaayegi😆
newly wed...achha toh aapne maan liya...ki raya ki shaadi hui hai...achha hai

bahut sweet smilies hai

thanks for comments🤗

Mere maanne se kya hoga, raya maane isse, lekin duniya se chupke shaadi karna risky for women always, kyunki socially ye rishta legal nhi kehlaata.

meine abhi tak comment nhi ki hai. Mujhe priya ko lekar tension hai, when she comes out of her trance she should not feel guilty or shame or insecure. For bearing kids n jissko apne pita ka naam nhi desakegi , bcoz still we do not respect such kids nor accept them whole heartedly but feel pity for them. Sad but true. Finally har koi woman pe hi ungli uthayega. 😭😭

I loved the mother in priya n her restlessness n impatience of seeing her child.

Very well portrayed. Good job.

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: varshathakkar
need women s day special update

update sooon

Wow superb pics varsha , thank u for sharing.

Beautiful gorgeous elegant sakshi with her expressive eyes n simplicity, superb creation.

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: bpatil3
chalo abb aap guess kar sakte hai ki why Raya separated...aur soch sakte hai ki Priya Ram ko sach kyun nahi bata rahi

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Wah wah what an update ..
That was extremly beautiful brilliantly moulded the way you have shown their suhaag raat had complete perfection ..

Achha theek hai will come from first onwards .. The update started sensually tying of her dori ..
The surprise of Ram for Priya is just beautiful .. 😳Romantic ...
Their dance made the wether perfect for both ...
Her inability to move on ...his security towards her just well presented ..
And the romance was icing on the cake for this update ..THat was potrayed very neatly ..
Hawww did you write this ??? I just got doubt but I know you will write for someone so no doubts about it ..Lol dont get confused ..Im just kidding ..

I saw some replies ..everybdy is surprised to see you have written the hot part .. 😆But life me everything should mixed up ..kabhi kabhi hotha hai .,... 😉

I loved it ..expecting more romantic moments between Raya in future ..I mean present story .. 😉

Thank you so much for the ROMANTIC pm 😆😉
continue soon 🤗
And extremly sorry for late reply 😭Muze patha tha you will update today because Iam not on the forum na 😡

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago

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ParusDivs

@ParusDivs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Waw... Sandhya!!! Really, It was a hot update!!!!!!!!!!!! ... Omg Finally Raya Consummated... ... Well portrayed their emotions and the love making scenes ... Ram truly cares for Priya and her feelings..

Now both are very much comfortable wd each other .. So Myra and Pari are the result of their that wonderful night .. Eagerly waiting to know, then, what lead them to separation ... please continue soon ...

Edited by ParusDivs - 11 years ago

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sinalbest

@sinalbest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Hi Sandhya.. 😊

Excellently executed.. 👏 ⭐️
Raya romance superbly written.. 😳
thanks for pm
continue soon... 😊

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: luvsakshi
Wah wah what an update ..
That was extremly beautiful brilliantly moulded the way you have shown their suhaag raat had complete perfection ..

Achha theek hai will come from first onwards .. The update started sensually tying of her dori ..
The surprise of Ram for Priya is just beautiful .. 😳Romantic ...
Their dance made the wether perfect for both ...
Her inability to move on ...his security towards her just well presented ..
And the romance was icing on the cake for this update ..THat was potrayed very neatly ..
Hawww did you write this ??? I just got doubt but I know you will write for someone so no doubts about it ..Lol dont get confused ..Im just kidding ..

I saw some replies ..everybdy is surprised to see you have written the hot part .. 😆But life me everything should mixed up ..kabhi kabhi hotha hai .,... 😉

I loved it ..expecting more romantic moments between Raya in future ..I mean present story .. 😉

Thank you so much for the ROMANTIC pm 😆😉
continue soon 🤗
And extremly sorry for late reply 😭Muze patha tha you will update today because Iam ot on the forum na 😡

haan Neel undoubtedly meine hi likha hai...kuch log blackmail acche se karte hai😆

haan kuch log surprised hai lekin meine bhi friends ki request par kar diya...

aage bhi romance honge...but not hot one😛

no need to say sorry...muje pata tha aap nahi ho...lekin koi mere peeche hi pada tha ki abhi karo...

next time I wait😉

Thanks u like the part and thanks for comments🤗

will continue soon

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: sandhyasn
haan Neel undoubtedly meine hi likha hai...kuch log blackmail acche se karte hai😆
haan kuch log surprised hai lekin meine bhi friends ki request par kar diya...

aage bhi romance honge...but not hot one😛

no need to say sorry...muje pata tha aap nahi ho...lekin koi mere peeche hi pada tha ki abhi karo...

next time I wait😉

Thanks u like the part and thanks for comments🤗

will continue soon