RaYa OS - phir le aaya hoon.........updt last part pg 5

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

it was beautifully written loved it

u have justified the os

liked raya union of love

thanx for the pm

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shreya

@Ramdeewani

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Must say this is one of the beautiful story on RaYa loved it i could actually imagine RaYa in this very well shaped characters

would love to read more

Thankyou

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shavii

@shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

first thing after reading it i just want to say👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
an perfect love story presented in form of ur os
kitna achha likrahi hoo write more

the feeling the hurt perfect description.. and positive vibe which i felt reading it was wonderful.
pagal priya ke baar ram se milkar poochto letii to wo kehdeta, if she had ask 7 yrs mein 7 bachhe hojate😉😆 but phir bhi achha laga ki akir mein priya mangayi ya phir ram ne manaliya😉
it is sooosooo nice after seeing soo many negative vibes ib balh this is really nice to see an good thing loved ur os.. wish to see more and more😳
from the starting time to now u have developed as an writer it is soo good👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

thanks for this wonderful os👏👏👏

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

you have fully justified the OSbeautiful love story with perfect ending. it shows true love never disappear...Raya hide their feeling for long 7 years in the hope that they will unite one day..hoping more OS from you😊thanks for PM

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haribol79

@haribol79

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

wonderful ending and very well written...

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youandme272000

@youandme272000

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Very nice os... lovely... 😊

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Beautifull OS ujjaini with perfect happy ending..
It shows how much u try not to accept, supress or hide it but Love never dies..nd one day if its true it will surely come to u no matter what happens nd in what time.. 👍🏼
Well written with perfect description of characters, emotions nd every single imp thing...fab job 👏
Loved it...
Thanx for pm

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Advitha

@Sakshiram

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Superb Superb Superb Superb Superb dear loved it ...pls do such os often it really feels good to read such os..justified your story a lot..love,disappointment,romance,emotional...loved it loved it loved it

Edited by sakshirambalh - 11 years ago