RaYa OS - phir le aaya hoon.........updt last part pg 5

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Dsudipa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

sry 4 late reply wonderful OS loved every bit of it 👏👏 finally Raya married perfect ending thx 4 PM

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ujjaini thx for clearing my doubts. But one thing here i found was , they realized their love afterwards i mean after spending a night. Bcoz before the party there were no such feelings for each other. The feelings started in Ram the day when he saw her in the party. but priya realized it at the later stage i feel.

yes both realized afterwards, though Ram liked Priya but he couldn't understand his feeling till before the party but that night he understand but Priya realized later, more precisely after knowing about Meesha, that's the reason she left Ram and her job

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Part 1
awww awesome start loved Priya is alone child of Sharma's so she had past with Ram at lest i felt with that look Priya gave to Ram... & story is progressing so nicely so moving on to read next to know more abt RaYa's past that what had happen which made RaYa seprated...

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leena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Part 2

awww awesome no doubt u r gud writer u have all the the gud tactics which can make readers amezed with story... ya it was some where kind of filmy but when it was on RaYa i completly enjoyed it... the way story progressed was its USP it goes in one way no loops anywhere & fast forward lovely... do write more waiting for them more..

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.sangs123.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Part 1
Superb dear
Just mindblowing
Everything is so beautifully writren

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.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

wow dear
take a bow
so beautifully written
priya did nt marry becoz she loves ram and vice versa
but they wasted 7yrs by hiding their loves
but at last they became 2 bodies 1 soul
everything is written so beautifully
just loved it
thanks for pm

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