Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 45

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Posted: 12 years ago
Still many questions remaind unanswered, confused ... hmm
Patiently wtg to get the story unfolded!

Nice suspense!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey lesa i m still confused..yeh kya ram ka dream tha...what is this?
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Posted: 12 years ago
finaly kahani wahan pahunchi jahan se cnfusn shuru hua...waitng for raya momentz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
im reading ur FF, not completed,
very quick update, good story, loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Still totally clueless at what exactly happened...
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Posted: 12 years ago
No, Priya doesnt have any illness.. uff! aap sabko writers banna chahiye.. kya kya ideas aathe hai.. wow..


My dear readers.. What is a dream.. What is reality.. That is for you to imagine.. As for the suspense.. Here is a litle more light..
Where are they right now.. Well you are Ram.. You see what he sees.. I am Lesha I show you what Priya wants you to see..

Enjoy..

Continued..

Ram walks out of the bathroom wiping his hair dry with the towel.. He sees that hot tea is placed on the teapoy with todays paper.. He sees Priya siting and brushing her straight silky hair in from of the dressing table accross the bed.. She keeps her brush down and turns to him.. He looks at her.. The sun is not up yet.. But his room is dimly lit.. He looks at her eyes with all his love.. There were so many questions.. He had to answer.. He had to apologize.. He didnt say anything.. He watched her walk to the teapoy in front of the bed.. She sat on one of the sofas pouring hot tea into two cups.. He walks and sits opposite to her..

Ram: Priya.. Tum kaha chali gayi.. He looks at her eyes..

Priya: Hospital mein thi.. Unko observation mein rakha gaya..

Ram: Woh.. He looks at her.. His eyes brim with pain..

Priya takes the towel from his hand and gives him a cup of tea.. Ram smiles.. She gets up and walks behind him.. He sips the hot tea.. It comforts him.. She takes the towel and ruffles his wet hair.. To dry it.. He smiles.. He keeps the cup down.. And closes his eyes.. He puts his hands on hers pulling her close to him.. She whispers in hisears.. Aapne kuch nahi kiya..

Ram's face lights up.. He left her hands and got up.. He turns around with tears.. Par.. Woh saare baatein joh tumne suni..

He walks around the sofa.. And hugs her.. She hugs him back and patts his back soothing him.. Ram.. Meine aapko apne aapse sirf ek din keliye door kiya..

Ram interrupts hugging her tightly.. Toh sach mein nahi jaaogi na.. Ek pal ke liye bhi tum mujhe chodke nahi jaogi.. Priya hugs him.. Nahi jaaungi.. Ram breaks from the hug and looks at her.. Her beautiful eyes have no questions.. He smiles naughtily..

Ram grinning at her walks closer.. She steps back.. He looks at her eyes naughtily.. She bites her lips and looks down.. He walks towards her and she walks back.. She hits the door.. He leans.. Her heart beats faster.. She clenches her fist.. And looks at his brown eyes.. He raises his hand and locks the door.. Her heart skips a beat.. She bites her lips.. He lowers his hands to her shoulders.. He looks at the crook of her neck.. The red marks are still there.. He smiles.. He bends nuzzling her neck.. She arches closing her eyes.. He moves his hands down to hers feeling her soft skin.. She reacts.. Her breath pacing.. He places a feathery kiss on the crook of her neck.. Her handsmove to his back.. Ram traces his lips to her ears.. She holds his kurtha tight.. And whispers.. Priya tumhe kaise pata.. Priya opens her eyes slowly and smiles.. Mujhe nahi pata.. Mujhe vishwaas hai.. Ram kisses her ear she closes her eyes.. Mein iss vishwaas ko kabhi nahi todunga.. He traces his lips on her jawline.. Placing feathery kisses.. She arches.. Bending her head to the door.. She opens her eyes.. He looks at her and smiles..

Priya smiles: Meine chunese mana kiya tha..

Ram smiles naughtily.. Pati hone ke naathe.. Yeh mera haq hai..

He moves back and looked at her worriedly.. Priya tum tik hona.. She smiles turning pink.. He leans to whisper in her ear.. Im sorry.. And places a soft kiss entwirling his fingers with hers..he looks at her soft lips.. She smiles biting her lips.. He looks at her eyes frowning.. She giggles.. He smiles.. He is lost in the twinkle of her eyes.. His eyes brim.. He lets fo of her hand and hugs her tightly.. She hugs him back.. Ram yeh sab Ashwin aur Siddhant ne kiya hai.. Ram breaks the hug.. Siddhant? Yani.. Sid?

Priya: Haan.. Aapka bhai Siddhant..

Ram and Priya look at eachother and smirk..

To be continued...


Hello! Aap sab ka din kaisa tha? Suspense is going to go.. With Siddhant and Ashwin.. Hehe.. Enjoy the romance and Raya moments.. And a holiday..


Hmm.. Will clear the air.. And end this fan fiction.. :)


Lots of love,

Lesha..

Goli..

L..

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Posted: 12 years ago
my expression while read the update same like thisso but in end some like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
Leesha... dear I am still CONFUSED!.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx lesha fo r update kuch cnfusn clr hui h... update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lesha,i m still 😕.but continue.m eager 2 know what has exactly happened. will wait till suspense is cleared.

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