Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
am glad to see priya back...
jaldi continue karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uff! Kya update diya ha, aur yeh priya ke payal ki jingle, haaye! love it yaar, romance is painted vry well neha!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Where was she?? What was all that... The crap that happened.. Ram crying.. Left alone.. Etc etc.. Ye madikeri se KM kab aaye?? What on earth happened??

Lots of questions... But for now.. I loved this one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Full marks again Lesha. Wonderfully written. There is a one-of-a-kind charm in the way you write. Thank you for the lovely update. Looking for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My dear readers.. I have revealed a part of the suspense here.. I will never kill either Ram or Priya.. Enjoy!

Continued..

Ram is covered with the red velvet duvet.. He looks at Priya who is on the phone.. He feels like something is wrong.. She walks away with the phone.. A vibe he had never recieved from her.. He looks at the waterfalls to the right as as he picks up the clothes kept for him on the bed.. With the duvet wrapped around him.. He goes to the washroom..
He freshens up.. And comes back into the room.. Its spec clean... It looks like new.. Priya enters the room her eyes red and teary.. Ram looks at her worried.. She smiles clenching the phone in her hands.. Ram walks to her... She steps back.. He looks at her and stops..
Priya looks at his eyes: Maa ne bulaaya hai.. Hume jaana hai..
There is pain.. Ram senses disstress.. He says nothing he wants to ask her what happened.. But something holds him back.. She walks out side.. To the library.. He follows.. She looks beautiful in a white saree.. She walks straight and presses a button on the left wall.. Ram stands next to her keeping distance.. He didnt know why but he did.. He was taken aback. It was a lift! She got in an so did he.. He looked at her he wanted to know what had happened.. Why the tears..
Priya looked at him.. Her eyes hurt because the tears refused to flow..
Priya: Karthik aur Natasha ki reception pe jaana hai.. Aur.. She looks away..
He walked towards her she moved back.. He stopped.. He wondered why..
The lift opened.. They strpped out.. They were on the top of the hill.. An open misty place.. He cold mist touched them.. She looked at Ram who looked at her with all his love.. She knew she had to leave.. She knew he was not hers.. But her heart belonged to him.. She belonged to him.. Ram looks at her.. Thinking.. Ek aakri baar aaunga.. Bohot khubsoorat ho Priya.. He smiles looking at her lips curling into a smile.. Her tears were gone.. He ealked to her.. She stood there smiling to him..
He whispered.. Iss khubsoorat jagah ko tumaare saath kaid karna chahtha hu..
He hugged her.. She hugged him tight.. Her warmth swept him away.. He was lost in her fragrance.. He nudged her head with his.. And whispered in her ear.. I love you.. She hugged him tighter.. Her heart felt heavy.. She loved him.. He loved her back.. That hurt her.. He sensed something wrong.. He knew somehow that she would leave.. He whispered.. Tumne waada kiya hai.. Ki tum kabhi mujhe chodke nahi jaaogi..
Priya broke the hug.. She smiles looking at his eyes.. Agar mujhe kuch hojaaye toh..?
Ram: Toh mein bhi tumhaare.. She closes his mouth with her palms.. Tears trickle down her eyes.. She nods in negative.. He moves her palms..
Ram: Kya hua Priya..?
Priya looks at his eyes.. He leans wanting to take her pain away.. He looks at her lips.. She smiles.. And parts.. He softly kisses her lips.. She responds.. His hands move to her back and neck pulling her closer.. Her hands move to his back.. Her left hand digs into his hair.. It turns into a passionate kiss.. Their last kiss..
They part for air.. Priya steps back.. He looks at her and smiles..
Priya: Ram.. Aaj se aap mujhe nahi chuenge.. Kabhi nahi..
Ram looks at her eyes which brim.. There is so much love for him..
She points to a black car..
Priya: Chale..
Ram moves his hand to touch hers.. He stops as she looks at him.. They walk quietly to the car.. He feels hurt.. What happened.. Why is she in pain.. He had never done anything at all.. She slided in and he sat beside her.. He never felt so uncomfortable.. Her vibes were always calming.. But right now there was disstress.. She looked at him and gave her phone to him.. He took it and the phone rang..

Ram woke up.. He suddenly jerked sitting up in his bed sweating.. It was dark.. He was in his room.. He looked to his side Priya wasnt there.. He looked paniced.. He heard the bathroom door close.. He looked.. Priya came out.. Hairs wet.. In a nice dark blue saree.. Her sindoor freshly adorned.. Her eyes neatly lined with koh.. Her lips red and moist.. She looks beautiful in the dim light of the dressing room.. He notices she hasnt worn a bindi.. He smiles.. Everything forgotted.. His heart beats calm down..
But he seems unsure.. Was she his imagination.. Or was she there.. She smiles to him.. She comes and sits by his side on his left.. She sees that he is sweating.. She takes her pallu with the left hand and wipes his forehead..
His lifts his right hand to touch her.. Her soft skin, her aroma tantalizing him.. He smiles..
Ram immeadiately moves his hand back.. Whispering a sorry.. His eyes are teary and turn red..
Priya looks at him teary eyes.. She smiles.. She gets up and walks away to the door..
He feels like she ripped a part of his heart and took it with her...
It pains him to see her like this.. Tears flood his eyes and pour out endlessly.. He shuts his eyes tight and wipe his tears away.. He gets off the bed and walks to the washroom.. Thinking.. Yeh kya hua.. Pyaar hua.. Shaadi hua.. Aur pyaar hua.. Aur silsile hogaye..

To be continued..

I hope there is some clarity.. Some nice moments are coming up.. Trust understanding and a holiday.. :-)

Do leave your comments criticism and questions behind.. Im sorry for the suspense.. I write my emotions.. I guess it was hard to handle..

Love,
Lesha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
am still very confused whose call was that... what happened why priya said he cant touch her... was it all rams nightmare what going on.. ... please answer it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lots of questions unanswered at the moment. Will wait patiently as the story unfolds. The mystery deepens and waiting for the answers. Love the suspense. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
suspense is stil there, still can't make out, why Priya behaving so strange, why she asked Ram not to touch her, why she left the letter, still many questions are unanswered
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Posted: 12 years ago
priya HIV positive hai kya...kya hai ye mistry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
but me 😕 too y priya behave like this

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