Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 41

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Short and sweet. Beautifully written Lesha. Your command over the language makes your writing so real. I'm carried away to another world whenever I read your work. Can't wait for the next part.

Arey yeh priya ko kya hua yr... plz yr clear a suspense... varna yeh jaan lena jaisa ho jayega...plzzz... nd second apni bakki os ff bhi update karo yr...wating...wating...

That's something interesting
lets c Wat u have in store for us

waiting
I.think its tym for some emotional updates :-P


xoxo Priyanka <3

This is Leesha... you said in last comments.. To enjoy the story..
That's exactly I m gonna do...
You have brought Smile to reader till now.. and I trust you will continue to do so...

Toda Jaldi update karoge toh Raya jaldi milenge... lol..

Continued...

The sensors of the hospital doors open.. He walks in.. Its a standstill.. The white lights the strechtchers moving around.. The pathway to the wards seems endless.. He walks in.. Everybody seems to be moving in fast motion.. Panic when strextchers are rushed in.. The movement of people.. There is a strange smell.. A sterility liquid used to clean perhaps.. He walks in noticing nothing.. His vision blurrs because of his tears..
He walks straight and turns right.. There are wards on either sides and one straight ahead.. He walks straight.. The door is slightly open.. He wipes his tears and closes his eyes tight as he opens the door.. To his left is a bathroom door.. He can see a small sofa oposite.. Shipra crying endlessly.. Sudhir looks at Ram.. His eyes red.. Ram walks in.. And looks at the bed.. Its empty.. He looks at Sudhir.. He walks to him and kneels down..
Ram chocking.. Pr.. Priya kaha hai?
Sudhir is in so much pain.. There are no tears.. His eyes are red: Woh ab kabhi lautke nahi aayegi Ram..
Rams eyes well up.. Turning red.. He stands and walks to the empty bed..
Sudhir: Ram ek chitti chodi hai usne tumhaareliye.. And points at the table near the bed..
Sudhir and Shipra leave they walk supporting each other.. Ram stands looking at the table..
He sees a red envolope.. He walks to the white table.. He lifts the glass and takes the envolope.. He turns it around.. It smells jasmine.. Just like Priya.. He opens it.. It has a white paper with a beautiful handwriting..
It reads..
Nagme hai.. Shikwe hai..
Kisse hai.. Baatein hai..
Baatein bhule jaathe hai..
Yaadein yaad aathi hai..
Yeh yaadein kisi dilo jaanum ke chale jaane ki baad aathi hai..

He shuts his eyes tears flowing endlessly.. He holds the envolope and the paper close to his heart.. His heart aches with pain.. His eyes pain..
He looks at the paper puts it back neatly into the envolope and put it into his pocket.. He says nothing.. And walks out.. He leaves to KM..
He has nothing to say.. He just drove quietly.. His tears had dried up..He parked the car and entered the house.. Everyone had tears in their eyes.. He walked heartlessly to his room.. Nothing said..

To be continued...

Its a story about Ram and Priya through Rams eyes.. I hope you liked it.. Do leave your comments and questions behind..

Lots of love,
L.

me first yay!!!

are yaar.. kahan chali gayi???😭😭

i m first...but yr jaldi karo na sad moments khatam...cant c my golu like dis...Priya kb ayegi wapis?

N im not liking this... Grrr... Where is she?? Get her back to ram.. No separation... U promised...