Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 40

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Posted: 12 years ago
ye achanak kya hogaya where is priya abhi to shadi hui thi ab priya ko kya hogaya 😃
update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh!u have created a suspense now.plz update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
neha darling am back...
last 4 partz were awesome yaar... too gud mmuuah..

aye ab priya kahan chali gayi????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Continued..

Ram walks towards a lake.. Its dark.. The waters are disturbed by a small waterfall.. He smiles.. The night glooms on him.. He looks at the bridge which leads to something that looks like a house.. Its dark.. He can only see the start of the bridge.. He walks to it.. He can slowly make out that its a wooden bridge..
Priya stands in the middle of the bridge.. The wooden railing seems to dissapear..

He opens his eyes profusely sweating.. He is worried.. He looks around.. Its morning.. The waterfall to the right.. He turns to the left.. Priya walks in smiling..
Priya walks to him saying good morning..
He looks at her with tears in his eyes.. She sits beside him.. Ram looks at her... Something had happened.. Something was wrong.. Something held him back.. He couldnt touch her.. She smiles to him.. He looks at her eyes..
Ram takes her right palms in his.. Priya looks at his eyes.. They overflow with love.. Purity..
Ram: Mein tumse waada leraha hu.. Ki tum mujhe chodke kabhi nahi jaaogi..
Priya holds his palms.. Smiles to him.. Kabhi nahi..
They look at each other contempted..
Her phone rings.. She lets his hands go.. And gets up walking to her phone.. He looks at her and smiles..

The mist clears and the railing is seen.. Priya walks to him in the white saree..He hears her payal jingle as she does.. He looks at her thinking.. Waada kiya tha mujhse.. His eyes brim.. He feels a palm on his right shoulder.. He looks to his right.. He looks at his mother.. Her eyes well up..
KK: Ram yeh sab.. She looks away.. Tears flow from her eyes..
He looks at the bridge.. Priya isnt there.. He shuts his eyes tight tears flow from his eyes..
KK: Ram woh.. Tumhe jaana chahiye..
Ram looks at her abd nods.. She takes her hand off his shoulder.. He smiles to her and walks..
The wind blows by his face.. He walks along towards his car thinking.. Yeh kyu hua.. Everyone is so unhappy.. Aur Priya..
He looks at the sky.. The stars twinkle.. He smiles.. Thinking.. Ek din tum zaroor samjogi Priya..
He gets into his car and drives away..
He looks at the traffic, people around.. The night lights.. He is lost..

He drives quietly.. No thoughts only emptiness.. He arrives at the parking lot.. He parks his car.. He doesnt want to get down.. He shuts his eyes with anger and bangs the steering wheel.. He takes his seat belt off and gets out.. He looks at the main building brightly lit with the board.. + Apollo Hospital +
He looks at it helplessly.. And walks to the huge entrance devastated..
There are no tears.. Only pain..
Dry pain in his eyes..

To be continued..

My dear readers.. Priya is not a ghost! Woah.. Where did that come from.. And no I am not going to separate them.. And No.. Im not giving any time leaps hehe.. Yeh serial nahi hai..

Please do not worry.. And hehe.. No.. Im not Ekta Kapoor undercover.. Lol..
Im just Lesha.. Enjoy!

Fo leave your comments behind.. Will giv longer updates.. Hope you liked it... Yes I know.. Hospital kyu aaye hai.. Aap hi guess karo!
:-)

Lots of love,
Lesha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think Priya is in coma or something as such.. maybe after giving birth to a baby; heavy bleeding that's y coma mein chali gayi woh or she had health problems before.. 😲

Thank you.. Update soon dear.. Do continue the Week 2 OS, and if possible write one on the Thursday's precap... 😎
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...pr y suspense jaan l rha h meri...tum ekta kapoor nhi ho...pr etne suspense de rhi ho ki usse km bhi nhi ho...jldi suspense clear kro...continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oyeee... Now im even more jumbled up!! Totally confused!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
thankgod you are not seperating them please batado kya hua priya ko...
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Posted: 12 years ago
cant handle suspence wot hapeen 2 priya
but 2 write too good love it
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi kya hua priya ko aswin has done some thing or she met with accident plzz clear it fast she is alive only naa

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