Tumko Dekha Toh.. PG 71 note - Page 39

yeh kya hai... why sab last time change whatever idea you have... its so sweet so romantic story i dont want such end...

Yr yeh kya twist daal diya... bichare ram ko yaha toh uski priya ke sth rhne do...plz neha usko alag mt krna... update next prt soon..

Continued..

Ram looked at the vacant sky.. Stars twinkled.. It was dark and cool.. A huge gazebo beautifully decorated.. Neha walks to him in a beautiful saree.
Neha: Kya hua fatty?
Ram gives an empty smile..
Nehas eyes brim.. She looks away.. Fatty woh.. Karthik chahtha hai ke tum gaao! Woh mein abhi aayi..
Ram looks at her walking away and smiles.. He walks looking at the freshly wet grass.. He smiles.. He hears Priyas payal jingle.. Chan chan matching his steps.. He looks to the sid of his feet.. Her bare feet on the grass.. The grass touching her soft skin as she walks.. Chan chan chan.. He is lost.. He reaches the gazebo..
Its lit beautifully.. The flowers adorning the place.. He looks to his side.. She not there.. He smiles.. He walks in wondering what she looks like tonight..
A lot of people around are enjoying themselves.. Talking about the wonderful evening.. Ram smiles as he sees the spotlight on karthik.. The other lights aredimmed and there is silence..
Karthik: Jiju.. Aap humaare di keliye ek gaana? Please.. Everyone clap as karthik walks to him.. He gives him the mike..
Ram looks in a corner.. Priya has turned to her side.. Her hair straight long and silky left untied..she wears a simple beautiful white saree.. He smiles.. She turns to him.. Her maang neatly filled.. Her bindi neatly in place.. Her eyes twinkle neatly lined with kohl.. Her red lips smile to him..
Ram: Tumko dekha toh yeh khayaal aaya..
Her mangal sutr dangles as she walks to him.. Wind blowing her hair back.. Her hands held together.. The bangles complimenting her skin..
Zindagi dhup tum ghanaas aaya..
Tumko dekha toh yeh khayaal aaya..
She walks to him saying in her veautiful soft voice..
Mein chali jau toh..?
Ram singing with a smile.. His eyes moisten..
Tum chale jaoge toh soche dil..
Tum chale jaoge toh sochenge..
Waqt ne aisa geet kyu gaaya..
Zindagi dhup.. Tum ghanaas aaya..
She walks by his side behind.. He turns..
Shes gone..
Tumko dekha toh yeh khayaal aaya..
Everyone clapped.. Ram smiled he eyes watery.. He greeted everyone with a broad smile walking out of the gazebo..

To be continued..

I hope you liked it.. Do leave your comments.. Its a progression in the story..
Do critisize I will change updates accordingly..

Lots of love,
Lesha.

Wow Lesha! What a twist! Very beautifully written. I believe that after every storm there is a calm, around every dark cloud is a silver lining, so if in your story the dark clouds and storm threatens to engulf us in sorrow, we will wait for the calm and the silver lining to take away the sadness and pathos. Please do continue and do not keep us waiting for too long. I simply love the way you write.

Hey...y kya h last time...i think tum es ff ka end krne k soch rhi ho... 😭

Priya kaha chali gayi..wht happen yr... plz plz plz ..update soon...yeh acchanak kya hogaya...

nice but what happend to priya

kya ho rha he??????? pichle part me to wo dono sath the???? jaldi suspense clear karo...