SS~'Dulha Dairies'~Part 10-Pg 35-last part

VAISH

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Oneandall
sorry for the late comment!!

Thanks for this SS i am loving the writing style, i have never heard of that author but i might check him out... And off course what makes it more special and cool is the fact that you add your comedic touch to it... love it...

please update soon!!

Read "TWO STATES" its his best & my fav too ! U will love it !

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jineejiggs

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Posted: 13 years ago

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arre yaar, its too gud, u almost reminded me abt the scene when Ram cam to Sharma house for Nutz marriage, tab bhi woh kisi pakode ko khake itni tareef kiye the, ...but seriously I read 2 parts at one go and I simply loved it, keep updating as soon as u can, I will wait impatiently

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VAISH

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: leena04
awesome update yaar 🤣 you r the comedy queen of this place yaar just too fab...

kya chun chun k namune bhare hain Ram ji ki life main Maa kam thi jo ab honewali Biwi bhi itni dramebaaz nikli???????????? 😳 poor Ram aur Dost bhi kya chun kar mila hai toh ek number ka cartoon hai 😆 wah wah toh Ram ji ko gee k samose zyada pasand aaye ladki se tabhi toh kaise shock ho gaye dekh kar apni Gudiya... 🤣 yani hamare Golu ki Gudiya ❤️ wah wah sachi main toh gayi use padh padh k gayi 🤣 awesome update do update next soon waiting to read ab kya hoga aage what will be Priya rection aur inki saadi hui kaise how they agreed after so much drama... 😆 😳 😆 😛 😆 😉 😆

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VAISH

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Posted: 12 years ago

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arre yaar, its too gud, u almost reminded me abt the scene when Ram cam to Sharma house for Nutz marriage, tab bhi woh kisi pakode ko khake itni tareef kiye the, ...but seriously I read 2 parts at one go and I simply loved it, keep updating as soon as u can, I will wait impatiently

thanks yaar :)

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VAISH

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Posted: 12 years ago

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*RES*

The seemed quite wealthy & my mom almost loved the girl before even looking @ her !

"kaisi laga ?" she whispered in my ears!

"kya?"I whispered back.

"Ghar?"

"As far as I know hum ladki dekhne aaye hain right ? plan kab change kardiya?😆"

i just luv the dialogues pinky awesum ap kaya hoga cant wait for next update

pharo update😃

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cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

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priyankapatwa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Fantastic
something which can actually grab ur attention
D way u write is quite realistic
Atleast one can relate with

lovely fabulous

waiting for next update

xoxo priyanka <3

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