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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys ..


this is for all my ff readers.. for thos who appreciated me for my work..




Ram took priya to change room. priya is not in a state to balance herself ..
R: priya .. chalo naha lo. yelo lo towel aur yeah raha bath room .
P; mr. kapoor aap ne kaha ki aap meri madhath karega..?? Starts crying.. meri chaar chaar haath hai aap mujhe meri haalath pe chod rahe hai . This is not fair .

R: am helping u na .. tum jao nahaloo . he take her to bath room

P; yeah kya .. aap mera saath kyu agayi . ?

R: priya plz dnt torture me more . ab chup chap nahalo .. am going out.

P; tik hai mr. kapoor aap she turns to walk . ram is watching her.. she is dancing and singing. she . suddenly trips

ram see's this and holds her make her stand straight .

P; aap gaye nahi abhi tak .. !! l will manage.

R: tum manage karpaungi . Leave it priya.. uff!! Mujhe karana padega.. sit here. make her sit on the rim of the bath
tub.

Ram turns to cling the towel to hanger.. priya stood and walk towards mirror.. starts singing there.. .. .. ram goes to her and stands behind her.. hold's her by shoulder. Looking her in mirror..

R: priya .. dekho tummari tarah .. ur in colour .plz nahalo naa.. [priya starts crying turns towards him. They stand so close.. ram hold priya ] ab kya hua y r u crying again..

P; aap ne tho kaha tha ki u ill help me .. but see .mera baal, aur mera chudiya nikala bhi nahi ab mein kaise nahalo.. kaal raath ko bhi aap ne mera chudiya nikala nahi aur jhor se mera haath pakda ki mujhe chot lag gaye..

R: oh oh !!! ok .. mein ill do it. Take her to change room and now ram takes priya to change room unwinds her hair .. and slowly removes her bangles.. ram made her lean against the dressing table .. priya looking to his eyes intently.. ram looks to her beautiful intense eyes and removes the bangles. Without his knowledge one bangle breaks on her hand and priced to her skin..

P; ouch .. aww!!!

R; kya hua ..

P; tut gaye na.. ab adath ho gaye.. iss dardh ka

R; blushes. See her hand . he saw the mark on her hand. which is a memory of their wonderful night . ram took her
hand kiss her hand .. where the hurt is been made. Looks at her deep remembering when he broke her bangle

P; ab mein jao nahalo ..

R: tum karsakthe hai kya ..

She turns to bath room walks few steps and trips again..

R: u need my help priya can I [priya nods her head]. chalo il help u..

Both reach bathroom and ram lock the door. priya turns to him

P; mr.kapoor u also need to take bath . see u too have colour on ur face

R: haan first tum karo .. aur baadh mein.

P; kyu baadh mein abhi kijiye .. abhi '.

Ram's dint mind her words go near to her . un pins her saree pin .. priya moves away from him and sit on the tub ..

P; app bhi abhi kigiye na.!!

R; ram startled at his wife's drunken state and at her words and said yes..She stood with the help of shower
tap .as soon as she stood her pallu fell down. She unintentionally on the tap of shower . water started to fall on her.. she got completely wet in a min. ram was staring at her .. she is so beautiful in her wet clothes .. her deep neck blouse exposed her cleavage.. .. he is scaning her wet, hot body.. Priya who is not in senses started dancing under water.. ..

Ram came near to her after a while.. stood under the shower.. looks her longingly , turns on the tap to fill the bath tub and kept soap in it. Priya is dancing but she was about to fall ram hold her waist.. his hot hand on her wet cool waist made her feel nervous to his touch no matter she is talli she gave her response to him she suddenly become quite. ram now understood how he could calm her. He pulled her towards him.. pulls her sari off..

P; mr. kapoor aap ! ur drenched ..

R continues to see her. She looks amazing to his eyes.ram cant even take his eyes off her.. ram takes off his
clothes .step into the tub pull priya on him she sit in front of his . she starts her singing again. Ram started nuzzling her wet shoulder. Priya stop's talking. Priya then turns to ram'. He un hooks her blouse .. shy priya turns towards ram hides her head in his chest. He removes her blouse..

P; kya kar rahi ho

R: help'

Priya blushes to her husband's words.. she hugs him tight. Ram starts cleaning her colour off her cheeks.. priya lifts her hand up took some water in her hand pour it on his cheeks and wipes the colour off.ram holds her close. Kiss her fore head ..

R: I love u

P; thanku Mr. kapoor. Love u too


R: thanks kisliye ..

P: issliye ki aap ne mujhe rang lagaya.. u dnt like holi colours still u allowed colour on ur skin for me. [kiss on his
cheeks ] thanku so much mr. kapoor . am so lucky ..
Ram lips her face to him tugs her hair to her ear traces her trembling lips with his hand his eyes are fully in need of her . he want s to kiss her. Priya got the message in his eyes .. she move close to him . she is totally comfortable in his arms their lips are inches apart.

P: soch kya rahi ho


She closed her pretty eyes. Soon she ended her sentences the very next sec ram kiss her on lips both kissed passionately . ram nuzzled her neck , shoulder, her back nape . he kissed her very passionately pouring all the love that he have for her. He loved his wife. She is very hot . he kissed her again intensely. Both finishes their bath. Ram first dry's himself and then dry's priya.. he covers her with the towel and lead her to change room . he made priya stand leaning to wall . she watched long, she likes him taking care of her, she walked to wards him hugged him from back . in wet eyes .

P; I love mr. kapoor.. thank you for being my life

R: arey tumme kya hua priya ur my life my everything.. now let me do what I have to now k..
He then turns to cupboard and picks some clothes for both of them. Ram dress her combs her hair soon then bansi kaka brings food to the room. Ram feeds her. And make her lie on the bed.

P; mr. kapoor app mujhe chode ke math jao

R: ram laughs at his beautiful child like wife. Priya tum bhi na .. tik hai . am here beside u. k

P; haan .. ab tik hai
Priya came close to ram cuddled him and drift to sleep ram kiss her on her fore head ..both drift to sleep'.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay me first!
that was one hot take 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya yaar paagal banane ka irada hain? Waise bhi bahut saare log asylum mein admit hone ke liye ready hain aur upar itni hot hot takes. Ooohhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
It was sooo
hot.
You are a superb writer. ;-)
keep it up. :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it... Superb... Mazedaar scene tha..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful OS...

it was so hot...


you write awesome...
btw thanks 4 the dedication...


do continue to write more OS.. i'm sure you can write many superb OS...






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Posted: 13 years ago
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All I can say is.. Thanks 😉

This was a treat... suddenly...so many days after 12th March.. out of the blue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ...once again hot romantic os ...superb thank you ..when she told i just ran and open the lappy to see your story, such a beautiful thought ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESUM,MINDBLOWING .WONDERFUL,SENSUOUS@ ABOVE ALL HOTTT UPDATE MOLLY(am i correct is this ur name)SORRY FOR LATE REP BUT BETTER LATE THAN NEVER CONTINUE SOON THE NXT OF UR FF ALSO WEEKENDS HVE ALSO STARTED SO PLZZ CONTINUE SOON THANKS 4 SUCH A LUVLY OS🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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saw ur os just nw...goodness knows how i missed reading it...😕...thanks a ton for such a memorable piece of os...seriously u do mesmerize your readers completely!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏no words can describe how well u write..👍🏼🤗🥳...thanku for such a lovely os😛😛😛😛😛😛

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