my random thoughts.. ff pg .16. 21-1-2012

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part 1

I start this with ram and priya fighting'

Ram in the office thinks he is tiered of fighting with priya' he go to house late .. by then priya is sleeping in the couch sitting with book in the hand'

RAM enter the room , priya is awake .. as usual she greets him

Priya : arey agaye aap.. bahut dheer ho gaye'

Ram remain silent , lokking at her, priya came back to her senses and remembers how rude he was with her in the morning'. Stand up and go near intercome and as the cooks to come to ram's room '

BAnsi kaka : aap ko kuch chahiye madam

Priya : nahi mein kahana kha chukka hu ' mr. kapoor abhi ayi aap unse puch lijiye..

BAnsi kaka .. sir aap kya khayege aaj '. Befor ram could answer bansi kaka says we have strict orders to look after u sir .. and spells his menu out and the rest all cooks and servents are there in the room

Ram looks at priya '.. who is reading her nbook and lost in her own way but enjoys all that is happening.. as ram habit of ordering his food is gone after priya came in his life.. he finds to order his own food very difficult

Soon food came inn .. they took the food inside his room .. while bansi kaka and troop are about to leave.. priya calls out kaka

P: arey aap kaha jar aha hai.. yehi ruk na mr. kho kaun serve karega ' aur upper se yeah baadha mein chillathe hai ki iss ghar mein serve karne kha koi aur nahi '.

KAKA: gi madam ''. And remains at the place'.. ram is stirred up with anger with priyas words..frowns at priya through eyes'

Ram finish his supper and was on bed priya went near to take pillow' and move towards couch..

R: kaha ja rahe ho''

P: sone .. aur kaha ja sakthe ho ..

R: itna din tumnne bed par sogaye na .. shouting at her ab zayada natak math kar.. ah yeaha so javo

P: ohhh ab aap yeah decide karega ki mujhe kha sona hai.. waha kuch option nahi hai chen se sone ka' ab mujhe chen se sona hai.. and moves towards couch

R: kya kha tumne .. very angry ram 'chen matlab tum mera karatom ki baaath kar raha ho na'

P : aur nahi tho kya.. kisi engine ki souch se kam nahi hai.. jitna bhi ruhe dalo phir bhi avaz tho ayega'''.

R: haan dalo .. kaun mana kiya tha aap ko '. Mera karma hai mera bed hai .. mera marzi.. jo chao karlunga '.. gana jana gan hai tho gaunga , agar nach na hai tho nachunga ..

Mara marzi hai..

Priya turns on cd player haan tik hai nachna mujhe kaya pharak padtha hai aap ka karma and aap ki marzi'

Ram sees at her angriy who is standing near to him and repeating his words. Seriously pulls priya to his arms holds her tight by her waist..

R: haan nach na chati hu '.. nacho mera sath '..

P: feeling nervour her pitch became less'.. trying to get out of his arms' mein kyu aap ki saath nachna hai .. sab kuch aap ka hai yeah par mein nahi hai na'. aap ki sath mera ristha samjotha hai na .. ab mein kyu aap se nachu' aap ka zinda gi mein mera koi hak nahi banta hai ' kis adi kar se mujhe pakda '' angry ram jholds her still close

R: mein kaun hu ' tum bhul gaye mein kaun hu tummari.. for ur kind information mein tumara pati hu.. tum par mujhe hak hotha hai..

P: oh rally aap mera pati hai tho aap ki patni nahi'. Mera koi haak nahi bantha hai na aap ke uppar'''..

Ram immediately leaves her .. seing tears in her eyes' priya switch off the cd player and go near couch and sleep .. ram got shocked and was thinking of all the questions he was put by priya''..

Ram was sleep less as well priya both think of the days they spent together' ram remembers priyas hand on his'priya remembers she ask ram s permission to hold his hand and sleep'

Both drift to sleep thinking of both of them''..

Tune plays .. Bade ache lagthe hai '''''''''.

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Originally posted by: chak

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Originally posted by: neha445

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Originally posted by: hbuy

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recap

Here in Sharma house everybody is happy'. About Natasha' Ayesha suggest to call ram priya for dinner tonight in order to celebrate as ram was not told abt nuts officially.. he wil be really happy for her sister ' and isse bahane humme toda time milega di aur jiju ki saath..Priya 's mother and father say's yes to the idea.. sudhir ji says that after their marriage they had never had a family dinner along with ram .. they decided to call ram to the dinner after all he's become their family''''''''''and proud of their damath

In kapoor mansion:

Ram feel literally bad for treating priya. But he want to avoid her by the time he woke up he could not find priya in the room '' soon he freshen up and sat with paper but could not concentrate'''. Called her mobile .. it was lying on the couch'..

R: yeah priya bhi na'. mujhe kya hai ' ram tu itna pareshaan kyu ho raha hai'.

Then he went to dadi 's room dadi was alone and went in and enquired abt priya'

DADi: arey golu iddar ah tumse baath karna hai

R: wo priya '. Ghare mein nahi hai kya app ko batha kar gaye

DAdi: mujhe bataya tha par mein na tumme nahi batihu '''.

R:yeah kya haio dadi'.. mera dam gutraha hai ' kaha gaye yeah priya'''

DAdi: kyu bathay tumme tum mera bahu ko itna duk de raha hai' na' mat karo puttar'.. biwi ko duk dena acha baath nahi hai' tum kyu apnre kam ki takleef us par utar raha hai' bechara sab kuch sehan raha hai.. uska cheharepey muskan hai par unka dil ki duk akhome dika deti hai' tumme kyu nahi dikhate hai in akhome tumariliye paayar aur duk bhi.. hai

Tu mujhe promise kart um mera bahu ko khayal karha hai .. aur usse duk nahi detha hai.. tabi tak mein tumse baath karlunga''..

R: plz dadi aise mat kahiyega mein promise kartha hu .. mein priya kha khayal rakhunga pakka ''.. aap naraaz math ho jaye ga.. waise wog gaye kha'.wo bhi akhele'

Dadi: puttar won a bahut dull hai . mujhe keha diya ki wo pehale mandhir aur phir se NGO mein kam tha waha jate hai.. pjikar na karo tera biwi akhele nahi .. rishub gaye priya ke saath.. tum jao nastha karo aur office kheliye dher ho raha hai na..

Ram says thanku to daadi and leave from there'. All the day in the office he was thinking of priya' how rude he behaved with her.. all his shouting for priya'' her tears and every thing' he opens his laptop to work but he could not work '. He decided not to bother priya.. any more and dosent want to hurt her' ''then with all his efforts he tried to call priya but his ego hurted and stopped him.. and finally texted her'.. "when will ur classes finish'." '. Priya was shocked to see the text from ram as she is in the class she replied " am now in class will finish in an hour' kuch kam tha mujhe?" '. With that ram decided not to interrupt priya in the class.. and reach there to pick her home..

Priya came out of the coaching classes soon finds ram standing out near the car.. '' whos waiting to pick her up' aap yeha ' . then ram answers her as he was passing this way so stoped to pick her up.. but priya senses ram 's intentionally coming there sit in the car and say him thanks'. Ram ask her if she has some work at home' or they can go late as he has some work in the middle' priya says ok..

Ram drives long and haults near the a mandhir'. Ask priya to ge t down .. priya question him u have work in mandir?? Ram nods his head and make way towards mandir''. Darshan ke badh R: sorry priya.. with all his efforts.. I was so rude ..

P stops him in middle and no need it was all my fault plz dnt feel sorry I should not asked u .. I wnt ask u any thing I dnt wanna knw anything abt ur past which hurts u so much tears rolled ' ram holds priyas sholder to console her. Plz dnt cry I cant see u like this and thank god for priya'. Then priya looks at him and say aap plz mujhsenaraz math ho .. mujhe pe chillvo math .. kaafi hai mere liye' kaafi din hogaye aap ki chehare par hasi dekar sab mera galti hai..

R: interrupts plz priya it wasn't ur problem .. u did nothing and I hurted u a lot''' sorry and holds his ears . priya smiles at his action '. Ram says Maan gaye tum itna jaldi ''.. mein na tumse kabhi duki nahi dekh saktha'''. Chalo chalthe hai

Ram haults near priya's fav kulfi point'. And madam here comes it'.. yeh aap and ram pulls priya down.. ram orders for a kulfi .. and priya says aap kho hygein ki problem haina and smiles .. phir se taunt'. Ram gazes at priya while she enjoys kulfi.. then ram look around and see a couple sharing kulfi looks ' priya says mr. kapoor app bhi khayiye na aaj bahut acch hai taste hai.. ram says sachi .. and take kulfi from her hand which she is eating and have a bite '. Says hmm ur true.smiling '''.. ram pays to the kulfi and enter to the car . priya finishes the remaining part ram shared with her and shyly sit in the car'''''.

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Originally posted by: balhfan

bravo!!! wonderfully written!!!!