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here are other works i made.

FF raya..journey of love




Hello all

Am happy to see sakshi all the 4 episodes .. I don't know about everyone am just loving the present track .. . I just wish ki leads replace bd's soon

Although I like present track felt sad for ram . I love ram too. my impulse itched my grey matter on the present track .. trying to pen down what my impulse pumped to my brain ..

PLEASE KINDLY SPARE ME

After ram tear the legal papers and went to room ..

Priya collected all the pieces moved towards the room.. she saw her wicked sasuma and mamji follow her' priya went and seriously ask ram ki she need divorce'.


"Ill make the papers done again and u just sign it. I am used to all this richness and luxuries as ur wife and this will be the compensation pay for insulting me and my family ."


R: hogayi tumari nautanki 😊


P: mr ram am telling u clearly I have not come here u make up with u I want my alimony .. as it came in the new paper the other day I married u for money . 😔 past few days has proved me what exactly money can give us . am a fool till this day thinking love does exist . now I realised . I want that money with me. yes its my hak to claim money and property for marrying u


Ram listen's al this .. 😃 smile n come near priya took her face In hands ..


I KNW U LOVE ME. plz close the door priya I need to sleep badly .. am gonna sleep in ur lap .. plz close the door.. priya moves to close the door. Behind door priya see niharika and mama listening🤢


P; mammi ji aap yeha .. y r u listening our discussion 😔


Ram shocked came out maa aap 😲


P: seriously how ill mannered they r to listening my discussion with my husband.. and banged inside slamming the door


Ram cant speak anything and closes the door ..


P: I insist u to give me divorce.. kaisa paarivar hai yeah.koi jhooth boltha hai , koi paayar ki naatak , aur kuch log deewar ki baahar kade ho kar bathe sunne ki koshisH karthe hai... u keep loving ur disgusting family who cares .. I want divorce ,for what all u have done to my family ..😔


Ram comes near her ..

R: what exactly u want ..😔


P: paisa .. property .. I want to build my own classes and wanna re build the respect of my family u ruined with ur power and money . I want 50% of ur property .


R: if u want I l make u the queen of my house ..ill make u the owner of my whole property . kaunsa hak ki bare mein baath kar rahe ho tum.. I will also have hak on u priya..{ ram is very angry }


P: just leave all this am going to tell the lawyer to make the papers again just sign and give..


Ram hold her by shoulder .. shaking her


"y don't u understand priya I love u .. my life is became so lifeless when u went out . i was mad these 3 days"


Pulls her close to him in a hug .. crying on her shoulder. Priya is moved with his gesture.. she also loves him she want to hug him back and cry her heart out in his arms.. his arms is the place where she belongs to .. the only one place which can take all her pains away.. with much difficulty she broke the hug ..


P: plz cut this crap . I know u dnt love me . no need to act love to me..


R: ok .. mine is not love right.. u need ur hak in property na .. so ur my wife I will also have my hak on u right..


P: its totally waste to talk to u .. and abt to leave


Ram pulls her back and hold her tight so that she cant move any more .. he kissed her on lips. Both are graving for the touch .. priya closed her eyes . ram deepens the kiss .. priya let him to kiss her. She badly need the man now . she lost all her senses in the kiss.. ram still deepens the kiss to savour her.. he whispers the words on her lips .. AM SORRY PRIYA .. I LOVE U SO MUCH ' I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U .. PLZ DNT GO OUT OF MY LIFE .. I BADLY NEED TO .. I LOVE U ..

She pushed him back ..

R: this is what u told me last time na.. I should kiss when i have feelings for u, when i love u and not just because I have no option .. yes I have no option because I love ' and my love will never vanish . I knw u love me too .. wat ever u say priya I showed u what is my hak as husband . i know its rude its hurting me priya plz dnt leave me .am nothing with out u ..what ever u do how rude u behave still I love u the most ..


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note :


i know this is stupid just wanna write something this is for my friend ..

plzzz press LIKE if u like .. and do comment and let me know how bad i have written


thanku


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sweet😊 I was also thinking that Ram should use his ultimate weaponšŸ˜‰ he really needs to kiss Priya,he will surely get the real truth out, she won't be able to resist him.😃
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Its not stupid dear ,i love it bahot achha tha ,amazing please write more.
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nycly written... thanks a lot 4 the os... 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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How I wanted Ram to crush Priya in his hug and kiss her. End of all drama.
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Awesome post...really loved it...Ram has no other option but to get physical in order to control Priya and bring her back to her senses
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R: this is what u told me last time na.. I should kiss when i have feelings for u, when i love u and not just because I have no option .. yes I have no option because I love … and my love will never vanish . I knw u love me too .. wat ever u say priya I showed u what is my hak as husband . i know its rude its hurting me priya plz dnt leave me .am nothing with out u ..what ever u do how rude u behave still I love u the most ..

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AMAZING!!! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its superb...actually fantastic !! ...glad to see you back...back with a bang!!!!...do write more often...pls...šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyyy Aubineee! 😊
I loveddd your OS..it was amazinggg!You write so well! šŸ‘ And thanks so much for writing it for me šŸ˜›

Wish this would have happened in the show too! 😭

And write moreee!! šŸ˜›



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