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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dear... thnks for PM
Again a nice scene ... awww how romantic...
Ram is getting really naughty...
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Sooper ... Romantic...❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry update will be up soon enjoy it
Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_forever

hey dear... thnks for PM

Again a nice scene ... awww how romantic...
Ram is getting really naughty...
update soon
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thanks next will be updated soon hope you'll enjoy it too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: viny_queen

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update is ready Viny hope you'll like it too
Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -SakshisFan-


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thanks glad u liked the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi friends here is the another update

Scene 19:

RaYa's dinner date:

Ram was driving the car and Priya was sitting looking out of the window trying to know where they were going

Ram: Priya kya hua tum itni chup kyun ho

Priya: nahin kuch nahin main tho bas ye dekh rahi thi ki hum kahan ja rahe hai

Ram: jab jayenge tab dekh lena par abhi tho mujse baat karo and holds her hand

Priya: hum kahan ja rahe hai

Ram: ye kya hai yaar koi aur baat karo na

Priya: please batayiye na

Ram: woh humara ek farm house hai wahi ja rahe hai

Priya: par farm house abhi' mera matlab hai ki hum aaj wapas nahin aa payenge na

Ram: haan hum do din wahi rukhenge

Priya: par hum apne kapde nahin laaye

Ram: don't worry maine hum dono ke kapde pack karke rakhliya hai

Priya: iska matlab aap ne ye sab pehle se hi plan kiya tha' aur aap ne mujhe bataya nahin

Ram: arreh baba bata deta tho surprise kaise rehta aur waise bhi weekend hai' do dino ke liye hum dono ki chutti hai na' kya hua tumhe acha nahin laga agar nahin laga tho wapas chal lenge

Priya: nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai' main tho aise hi puch rahi thi

Ram: are you sure

Priya: yes aur aap farm house par aajte rehte hai

Ram: haan jaata hoon

Priya: lekin aap humari shaadi ki baad tho kabhi bhi nahin gaye

Ram: shaadi ke baad thoda busy ho gaya tha kaam mein, aur jab ab time mila tho socha iss baar dono chalte hai with that they started their conversation after some time they reached the farm house ram closed Priya's eyes with his hand

Priya: ye aap kya kar rahe hai

Ram: ek surprise hai chalo na

Priya: par main kaise chalu mujhe kuch dikhayi bhi nahin de raha hai

Ram: main tho hoon na tumhare saath mere saath chalo and he took her with him then removed his hands and saw that they were near swimming pool which was covered with rose petals and lights it was looking very beautiful she saw around everything was beautiful decorated with flowers candles

Ram: kaisa laga

Priya: bahut acha hai aap ne ye sab kab kiya hai

Ram: tumhare sawal puchne ki aadat kabhi nahin jayegi na

Priya: kya karu aap kaam hi aisa karte hai ki mujhe sawal puchna hi padta hai

Ram: thik hai thik hai chalo chalte hai and they move towards the table both sit opposite to each other Ram was staring at Priya

Priya: kya kar rahe hai aap

Ram: maine kya kiya

Priya: mujhe aisa kyun dekh rahe hai

Ram: kyun ki tum itni koobhsurat jo lag rahi ho ki meri nazar hi nahin hat rahi hai tumhe par se

Priya: aap bhi na

Ram: main bhi kya

Priya: kuch nahin' khana khaye

Ram: haan and he sees that food was not there on the table he immediately calls the care taker over there

Ram: kaka kya hua khana abhi tak nahin aaya

Caretaker: nahin sir

Ram: par maine tho mere secretary ko kaha tha' thik hai main apni secretary ko call karta hoon and he calls her

Secretary: sir maine tho aap se ghar ka address bhi de diya hai aur unhone kaha ki order bhi deliver kar diya hai

Ram: kya par abhi tak yahan kahan nahin aaya

Secretary: sir maine abhi unhe call karke pucha delivery ke baare mein aur aap ke ghar bhi call kiya tha bansi kaka ne kaha ki order deliver ho gaya hai

Ram: bansi kaka ek minute tumne kaha ka address diya hai

Secretary: aapke ghar ka

Ram: ghar ka par maine tumhe farmhouse par bhej ne ke liya kaha tha

Secretary: sir aap ne sirf ye kaha ki mere ghar par khane order deliver karne ke liye kaho isiliye maine aap ka ghar ka address diya hai sorry sir

Ram: its k main hi kuch karta hoon Priya who was listening to all this conversation

Priya: kya hua aap itne pareshan kyun hai

Ram: who meri secretary ne ghar ka address diya hai order deliver karne ke liye aur ab yahan kuch bhi nahin hai khan eke liye

Priya thought for a minute and said: koi baat nahin hum bahar ja kar khalenge

Ram: magar yahan par koi bhi bada hotel nahin hai

Priya: tho kya hua hum bahar tho chalte hai koi tho hotel ya phir kuch aur tho mil hi jayega with that they come out Priya goes towards car and was about to sit

Ram: madam aap waha kahan ja rahe hai

Priya: hum bahar ja rahe hai na

Ram: haan magar car mein nahin

Priya: phir

Ram: bike pe woh dekho

Priya: bike pe

Ram: haan tumhe pata hai jab main aur Vikram college mein the hum jabhi yahan aate the tho hamesha bike pe hi gumte the bahut maaza aata tha tho aaj bhi hum bike pe chale

Priya: haan and they both leave the farm house on bike after some time Ram stopped bike

Priya: kya hua aap ne kyun rokha yahan par tho kuch bhi nahin hai

Ram: nahin hai abhi nahin aaya

Priya: tho phir

Ram caught her hands and put them around him: kya tum aise nahin pakad sakthi thi sirf ek haath khande ke rakh kar baiti ho and he started driving again

Priya: aap ko bike chalna acha lagta hai na

Ram: haan mera saare college ki yaadein jude hai iss se main aur Vikram tho race bhi lagate the aur kabhi kabhi Neha bhi aati thi humare saath un dono ka affair tho college se hi tha na

Priya: aur aapka koi affair nahin tha

Ram: nahin

Priya: par kyun

Ram: pata nahin kabhi koi aisi ladki hi nahin mili lekin ab mil gayi hai' wahi jo mere saath bike par hai and catches her hand Priya smiles

Priya: Ram yaha par tho kuch bhi nahin dikh raha hai

Ram stops the bike: maine kaha tha na Priya turns her head and sees a tea stall

Priya: waha chalet hai kuch na kuch tho mil jayega

Ram: waha par nahin

Priya: mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai please and both go to the stall she orders tea and some pakoras

Priya: aap bhi kahyiye

Ram: nahin mujhe nahin chahiye

Priya: thik hai main khahti hoon mujhe tho bahut bhook lagi hai and she makes sound while eating it: wow kitne tasty hai aap bhi khaiye na

Ram: nahin tum hi enjoy karo

Priya: thik hai soch lijiye aap ko hi bhook lagegi phir

Ram: nahin mujhe nahin chahiye

Priya: k and she again makes sound

Ram: tumhe itne sounds karne ki jaroorat nahin hai and he takes the plate from her hands and starts eating them Priya orders some more after eating they leave from there. While coming back Priya sees a kulfi stall and asks Ram to stops the bike and both have kulfi

hey i have written some a small scene where Ram was trying to make rangoli proper those who havent read it here is the link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/bade-acche-laggte-hai/1939362/possible-scene-of-rangoli-making


Edited by M_n_h - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear...
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update dear...
thnks for PM
a very different dinner date... and golu on bike LOL...😆😆
bechari Priya... baithne ke liye space bhi mili hogi ki nahi...!!!!😉
want more of RAYA romance...
pls post next part soon... this weekend really need this kind of ff supports...
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