Possible scene of rangoli making

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends in Tuesday's episode we saw Ram was trying to make the rangoli proper which he stamps by mistake, I have expected that scene to continue but anyways I would like to continue it hope you'll like it

Ram was trying to make it proper, Priya who came saw that the rangoli which she made is spoiled she was sad that she had put it with so much effort and the happiness which she felt while doing it… she felt as if she was celebrating diwali at her home remembering the moments she spent with her family but when she saw what Ram was trying to do her lips curved into a smile and thinks what I have thought about him but what he is, I was so wrong about judging Mr.Kapoor coming out of her thoughts she thought about helping him so she brings colors and sits next to him

Ram looked at her and gives an apologetic look: sorry maine nahin dekha

Priya starts to make it proper: its k

Ram shocked : tum mujse gussa nahin ho…

Priya: aap ne jaanbuch kart ho nahin kiya na tho main aap se gussa kaise ho sakthi hoon

Ram thinks phir se kuch bhi nahin bol rahi hai dekh kart ho chal sakthe hai na aisa bhi nahin kaha: haan maine jaanbuch kar nahin kiya lekin phir bhi tum kuch tho keh sakthi thi na tumne itni mehnat se jo banaya hai…

Priya: haan kehna chahthi thi lekin jab aap ko isse thik karte hue dekha tho… mujhe laga ki jab aap ko aapke galti ka ehsaas hai aur usse sudhar bhi rahe hai tho maine kyun aap ko kuch kahu

Ram again thinks ye itni sweetly kaise baat kar sakthi hai mujse and tries to help her to make the rangoli proper and observes that how happily Priya was making the rangoli there was a smile on her face from which he cannot take off his eyes

Observation: hey I have observed that when Ram stamps the rangoli he was thinking ab Priya muh banake baitegi aur mujse jhagda karegi this is what is was asking her the other day right why are you not fighting with me but when he realized that she would fight he tried to correct it to avoid the fight

Priya: ye aap kya kar rahe hai hearing her voice he comes out

Ram: kya… maine kya kiya hai

Priya: ye color yaha par nahin… warna ye kharab ho jayega

Ram: sorry… then he silently observes her, after sometime Ram was sweating so without thinking he wiped his sweat with his hand which has color and Priya had finished making the rangoli proper she saw that Ram was having color on his face

Priya: aap ke chehre pe color laga hai

Ram: kya… then he looks at his color hands he didn't know when he kept both hands in the color while watching Priya, Priya raises her hand and wipes the color off his face, when Ram feels her fingers on his face he looks at her he felt strange, he didn't understand the strange feeling he felt when Priya touched him, Priya too felt something strange after cleaning it they got up and were about to move from there suddenly Ram's phone was ringing he came back to his senses he hurriedly tried to pick it up to hide his feelings his hand hit the colors plate which Priya was holding all the color was on his shirt he tried to clean it but as his hands were colored it became more Priya tried to clean it but saw that her hands too were colored so she thought of using her dupatta but Ram stopped her

Ram: nahin rehne do main change karlunga I'm sorry and thinks ek baar touch kiya tho ye halat hai phir se touch karegi tho nahin iss se pehle Priya tujhe phir se touch kar chal bhaag yahan se

Priya: main saaf kar dethi hoon

Ram: nahin… nahin he rushed towards his room

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prachimishra85 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your imagination is fantastic... Wish CV's would have shown this
❤️ Prachi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful. More more more.please kee it coming
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i too expected some continuity... nyway amazing post... Ram was Shooo Shweet... ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Holy Cow n_m_h..

you actually should submit your writing Ekta's team. we all expected this scene to go for one more episode BUT nooo... she drags the damn Ashwin track to 3rd episode now but not the one audience is longing for.

very well written scene. as i have said before on other posts.. Ekta's writers should visit IF for creativity on scenes. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is what they should have shown... ! well written!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachimishra85

Your imagination is fantastic... Wish CV's would have shown this

❤️ Prachi


thanks Prachi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SriB

Wonderful. More more more.please kee it coming


thanks Sri i thought that rangoli scene could be extended if i'll get any of such scenes in future i'll definitely try to write on it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice So wished the Cv's has taken it for a scene
I could see Gollu run as his heart started beating faster when Priya touched him 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: balhfan

i too expected some continuity... nyway amazing post... Ram was Shooo Shweet... ☺️


thanks

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