#3# Ariya Ff: Agni sa pavitra- final part page 28 - Page 17

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Posted: 2 years ago

Amazingly well-crafted update. I loved it to the core. While reading the first part I was smiling due to Ariya's heart to heart conversation, their adorable mutual bonding of understanding & newly formed love, but after the break in their conversation for emergency phone call from Sameer and getting the news of Arjun leaving for undercover mission I got tensed thinking...bas abhi hi toh ek dusre se kuch lambe mahino ki dooriyaan sehke dono ek dusre ke kareeb aane lage the, ab phir se ek aur baar dur hona padega un dono ko. Nevertheless, twist bhi bohot achha dala hai...reentry of Sikandar Khan in Arjun's life. And, I don't know surely but I'm having intuition that, last ka woh dialogue Riya ke liye Arjun ne hi bola hoga. But, agar woh Arjun nahi toh woh commissioner ya phir Sanya bhi ho sakte hai aisa mera khayal hai.. Let's see, if I'm guessing right or wrong.

Tnx a lot for tagging me & for this unexpected gift of 2nd "Bada Sa" update for me. Continue soon...ab toh mere liye wait karna hi bohot mushkil hone wala hai, yeh sochke ki kya Arjun successfully mission complete karke Riya ke paas laut payega ya nahi.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

Hope arjun is fine

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Ab mere readers itne passionate hai toh it’s my duty to try to updates that match their levels

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice chapter Finley some ariya time we got.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Wooh wonderful chapter yaar love your writing style please update sooner.


And please read my ariya stories if anyone wants to read .

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you nupur. Also thank you for sharing Aru ta stories link I vl read them

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Posted: 2 years ago

Glad they are slowly moving forward in their relationship

I hope arj is safe

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Part 20


Riya turned around to see sanya .


Sanya : you are an etf officer a trained commando Riya think like one .

Riya gathered herself .


Riya : yes ma’am. We have to get our officer Arjun back safely and that’s our mission .


Sanya : Acp Rathod I m here to help you in your mission .


Sameer : you are welcome officer sanya .


Sanya : as per my information, they are doing the most expensive deal till date and that’s the reason they have got their security very tight . They are suspecting every person in the gang . That may be the reason Arjun might have deliberately disconnected himself .

He should not give them any reason to doubt him .


Shree : deal 2 days ke baad hai tab Tak v hve to try and connect .


Sanya : shree don’t forcefully try to connect it might put Arjun to danger .


Sameer : we have deal details but location,


Sanya : location last minute pe hi pata chalega . Meri bhi ek officer (Anita )hai Wahan pe .


I just hope wooh aur Arjun ek saath co ordinate kar le .


Riya : sir let’s be ready with our back ups and our plan to attack .


Sanya : yes let’s make the plan . Sameer sir you take the lead .


Etf was ready with the plan . And here Arjun and Anita too got into action. .


Arjun : I need to inform etf as soon as possible. Riya fikar kar Rahi hogi


Anita : it’s dangerous sir you know that . BAs 2 din aur yeh deal ko fail karke vl complete the mission .

This 48 hrs were most crucial hours .


Finally it was the mission day . Commissioner sir special officers team and etf all were ready to face anything .


In Sikander den , Arjun and Anita finally send the location . And the teams proceeded towards the same .


Little did they know Sikander was not some regular drug dealer . He changed the location and exit plan last moment and Anita got caught .


Sikander : tumhe kya laga mujhe ullu banaogi. Is liye meine apne plans kabhi pure share nahi kiye.


Arjun here was hiding and trying to find a solution to save Anita and destroy the deal .

Finally he got to know that he has planted bombs in 5 major places to distract the police .


As soon as they got the info about the bombs etf marched to handle the situation .


Special officers still trying to figure out the new exit plan . They didn’t know Anita is caught . And a small mistake to put Anita and Arjun lives to risk .


As etf got hold 3 bombers , yet they were struggling to get any news of the future plan .


Here Sikander got live on tv . Anita was a hostage and he demanded a release of his prime member .


Commissioner sir was trying to buy in time and get hang of the situation.


Sikander : mujhe pata hai yeh akeli nahi hai iska sathi hai .


Mujhe mera admi Sahi Salamat chahiye agle 2 Ghante mein warna Tabahi macha dunga .


Commissioner: Sikander mujhe 3 Ghante chahiye to get your man out.


Sikander : Sochlo . Warna 30 mins mein ek aur blast hoga .


Here Anita started to give details about bomb location with her fingers .


Riya noticed it .


Riya : sir Anita is giving us a sign. Riya quickly noted the numbers .


And Sikander got offline .


Riya : yeh number kya indicate kar raha hai ?


Very soon they understood it’s a bus number and she ran to surveillance room to get a track of that bus and stop it .


Fortunately Riya got it on time and rescued the passengers and they could defuse the bomb . But Riya got an idea .


Riya : ab Sikander ko lagega wooh Jeet raha hai . Sir I am portraying a blast here and spreading the news in a way it reaches Sikander .


Commissioner: but sir it could create havoc in the city .


Riya : sir I know it’s a critical situation. Can we get army to help in and make the city safe . Baki Uske admi ko chodne ka sirf natak karna hai .

Arjun sir ke rehte yeh impossible hai .


Commissioner: ok Riya I am getting the army involved .

Careful .

( please ignore if there is any mistake in protocols I have no idea . )


As discussed , Riya staged a blast and info reached Sikander .


Sikander : kya hai tumhari faisla ?? Kahan hai mera admi .


Commissioner: hum usee 2 ghante mein chod rahe hai .


Sikander : bohot badhiya . Jagah port pe aa Jana . Yeh Batane ki zarorat nai hai ki koi chalaki ki toh Anjam kya hoga


Shree : Bichara usee nahi pata uska anjam kya hoga.


Chotu : Sikander you are dead .


Here Arjun tried to get on the final exit plan and it was to get the man he wanted finish the deal and blast the rest bombs .


While doing so he got into a flight with some internal men and Sikander doubted on him too .


Arjun tried to handle the situation but he knew he was the suspect and they got hold of him . Tried a few punches and torture which Arjun took it as he knew his team would get him out .


It was the final show time .


Commissioner: Sikander yeh lo dekh lo tumhara admi .


Raja: sahab mein thik ho jaldi aa raha hoon .


Sikander : commissioner ise chup chap le Lao mere pass .


When commissioner approached the location. ETf and few commando were hiding and ready .


Sikander got Anita out but kept Arjun for any last moment shocks . Arjun gave a signal to shree . And Shree got track of arjun .


Shree : arjun ka signal aya hai . But seems like he is captured too .

Ho sakta hai Sikander is using him as a pawn against us.


Sameer: sher ko pyada Samaj raha hai . Koi baat nahi waqt ane par use pata chalega Arjun rawte kis tufan ka naam hai .


Riya: Anita has reached us safely and raja has gone there .


Sir we are ready for attack .


Sameer : Riya wait if Sikander gets to know we are attacking he might hurt Arjun .

Ayesha : sir how do we know where Arjun sir is. ??

Sameer : yahi toh pata karna hai .


Here Arjun used his mind and started creating havoc in the place he was held . Even ropes can’t hold him for long . Firings , fights started .


Sameer: yeh arjun hai . Com on guys attack .


Etf also got alerted and started to fire .


Commissioner: Anita quick .

Anita: I need a gun sir I m fit to fight . I know where Arjun sir is .


Sikander started going with raja . Where etf started cornering the inside men .


Riya had her eye on raja and was looking for right time to shot him .

Just then she saw Arjun fighting with the people and went in to support him . Very soon Sikander was at his knees and Riya just shot raja .


Sikander was very angry and frustrated. He was trying to get free but Arjun was on alert .


Sikander : acp Arjun rawte . Toh tum mere logon mein guske mujhe hi hara Diya .


Arjun : tumhara Anjam toh tai tha . Bas waqt iss bar mera tha .


Commissioner: arrest him.


Arjun looks at Sameer saying he wants an encounter as putting him behind bars wouldn’t help them .


Sameer got a cue and he asked the team to start collecting evidence .

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Posted: 2 years ago

Very interesting update 😃

Just loved it dear 😍 Pinku 🤗

Well I really loved the guts of Riya she is equally strong enough to figure out the important clues even in her this mental state when Arjun life is at stake now 😞

Sanya & Anita too joined the team & finally everything was destroyed by ETF at the right time & Riya shoot his men right in front of his eyes

I really loved how everything was sorted on time but I am now bit scared as Siki won't leave this chapter unfinished and can strike too

Waiting for more

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago

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